1、精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运预测作文:Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Helping Others in Need. You should write at least 120 words and base you composition in the outline below:1. 现在,在看到他人遇到困难时,很少有人去伸出援手;2. 这个现象产生的原因;3. 我的看法。参考范文:My View on Helping Ot
2、hers in NeedIn modern society we are often sorry to see that people are reluctant to help others out, not to mention helping a stranger; offering a helping hand seems to be out of accord with the times.Then whats wrong with our society? Some people may say that facing skyrocketinghousing prices, exp
3、ensive medical expenditure and soaring commodity prices, they have no choice but to struggle to make a living, and thus it would be impossible to spare a hand to help others because it may bring them into trouble. Therefore, standing by indifferently is their only choice.However, is it necessary to
4、be selfish in order to survive, or in order to ensure that people do not take advantage of you? In my opinion, helping others brings a strong sense of accomplishment. Whats more, the evaluation criteria for judging one individuals success should be modified so that offering a helping hand to people
5、in need is encouraged and welcomed in our society all the time.作文模板1 图表第一段:说明图表开篇句:As the bar chart shows, _ during the years of _to_.精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运扩展句:1、As early as _.2、Then _ years later, _.3、And arriving in the year _, _.第二段:解释图表变化原因主题句:Several factors contribute to _.扩展句:1、_. (原因 1)2、And _.(原因
6、2)3、Furthermore, _ (原因 3)4、All these result in _.第三段:提出解决办法结尾句: However, _ is faced with some problems.扩展句:1、With _, _, the effect of which is not only discouraging, but also challenging.2、So my principle is to pay due attention to _, but not just to_.DIY 写作模板:填充阶段第一段:说明图表开篇句:As the bar chart shows,
7、 the number of people below the poverty line decreased dramatically during the years of 1978 to1997.扩展句:1、As early as 1978, about 250 million people were under the poverty line.2、Then seven years later, the number became three fifths thatof1978.3、And arriving in the year 1997, the number was reduced
8、 to50millions.第二段:解释图表变化原因精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运主题句:Several factors contribute to the sharp decrease of the below-poverty population.扩展句:1、The reform and opening following 1978 enabled the peasants to become much better off. (原因 1)2、And with the development of Chinese economy, that policy also improved cit
9、y dwellers lives greatly. (原因 2)3、Furthermore, the high-tech introduced made it possible for the countrys economy as a whole to take off. (原因 3)4、All these result in the great fall of the Chinese population below the poverty line.第三段:提出解决办法结尾句: However, a further decrease in the number of poverty-st
10、ricken people is faced with some problems.扩展句:1、With quite few employees being laid off, the effect of which is not only discouraging, but also challenging.2、So my principle is to pay due attention to the newcomers, but not just to care for the poor, say, in remote mountain areas.第三部分、范文As the bar c
11、hart shows, the number of people below the poverty line decreased dramatically during the years of 1978 to 1997. As early as 1978, about 250 million people were under the poverty line .Then seven years later, the number became three fifths that of 1978.And arriving in the year 1997, the number was r
12、educed to 50 millions.Several factors contribute to the sharp decrease of the below-poverty population. The reform and opening following 1978 enabled the peasants to become much better off. And with the development of Chinese economy, that policy also improved city dwellers lives greatly. Furthermor
13、e, the high-tech introduced made it possible for the countrys economy as a whole to take off. 精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运All these result in the great fall of the Chinese population below the poverty line.However, a further decrease in the number of poverty-stricken people is faced with some problems. With quit
14、e few employees being laid off, the effect of which is not only discouraging, but also challenging. So my principle is to pay due attention to the newcomers, but not just to care for the poor, say, in remote mountain areas.2 现象解释1现象解释型模板一Topic sentencehas become a common part of peoples life.Andhas
15、always aroused the greatest concern.what impresses us most is .The reasonsare varied.信息提示 1. 空格内用概括性的词语填出最近出现的总体现象。2. 空格内填题目要去讨论的具体现象 3. 现象的具体表现4. 过度句,填现象或现象带来的后果,为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫。5. Among the various reasons,plays an important role.6. That is to say,7. What is more,8. For example,5. 原因之一。 6. 具体说明原因一。
16、7. 原因二。 8. 举例说明原因二9. When talking about, 10. On the one hand11. On the other hand,12. In brief,9. 空格一填作者要讨论的现象,空格二填作者的看法。10. 支持看法的理由一或说明看法的第一个方面。11. 理由二或第二个方面。12. 总结。2. 现象解释型模板二精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运1. We have witnessed 2. According to , 3. And 4. Many reasons contribute to1. 空格内填最近出现的总体现象。2. 空格一根据题目填 the
17、chart ,the report 等,空格二内填现象的具体表现一。3. 现象的具体表现二4. 过度句,填现象或现象带来的后果,为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫。5. To begin with ,.6. Moreover,7. In addition ,8. As a result ,5. 原因之一。 6. 原因二。 7. 原因三。 8. 原因导致的结果。9. As tome,, 10. First of all,11. Besides,12. To conclude,9. 空格内填作者对现象的看法。10. 支持看法的理由一。11. 理由二。12. 总结。3. 现象解释型模板三1. has bee
18、n brought into focus.2. Nowadays,.3. In addition, .4. Many reasons contribute to1. 空格内填最近出现的总体现象。2. 空格内填现象的具体表现一。3. 现象的具体表现二 4.过度句到分析原因。5. Generally speaking ,.6. First of all,7. Moreover,8. Therefore,5. 承上启下开始列举原因 6. 原因之一。 7. 原因二。 8. 对原因一二进行总结。9. As far as I am concerned,, 10. As we known ,11. Furt
19、hermore,9. 空格内填作者对现象的看法。10. 支持看法的理由一。11. 理由二。精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运12. In a word, 12. 总结。3 对比选择1. 模板一1. Different people have different views on2. Some people perfer,.3. Others tend to, .4. As tome, I agree with /to 1开门见山直入主体,表明对某事人们的不同看法。 2表明一部分人的看法。 3另一部分的看法。 4作者的看法。5. Of course,.6. For example,7. But,8.
20、 The following reasons can account for my preference5承认自己不赞同的看法有一定的合理性。 6. 举例说明支持第五句。 7. 转折指出这种观点的不足。 8. 启下句过度到下段具体阐述自己所支持的观点的理由。9. The main reason is .10. A good example to illustrate is 11. For another,12. From the foregoing,9. 支持观点的理由一。10. 举例说明理由一。11. 理由二。12. 总结全文,从长远看来。2. 模板二( 1999 年 6 月真题)1. Th
21、ere is no complete agreement among people as to 2. Some people consider,.3. However, others think, .4. Some people may say 5. They hold this opinion because.6. However, others believe,1. 开门见山直入主体,表明对某事人们的不同看法。 2. 表明一部分人的看法。3. 另一部分的看法。精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运4. 观点一的理由。5. 深入阐述观点一的理由。 6. 观点二的理由。 7. 深入阐述观点二的理由。7
22、. They argue that,8. Personally ,I am in favor of the 9. Firstly, . 10 .Secondly,11. Most important of all 12. Taking above-mentionedfactors into consideration, we/I may reasonably conclude that 8. 我的看法。 9. 个人看法依据一。 10. 个人看法依据二。 11. 个人看法依据三。 12. 总结全文。3. 模板三1. 开门见山直入主体,表明对某事人们的不同看法。 2. 提出观点一。 3. 观点一的
23、理由一。 4. 观点一的理由二5提出观点二。 6. 观点二的理由一。 7. 观点二的理由二。1. When asked about ,differentpeople will offer different opinions.2. Some people take it forgranted that.3. In their opinion, .4. Besides 5. However, others hold.6. They maitain7. And8. Weighing up these arguments, Iam for 9. For one thing.10. For anthe
24、r,11. For instance,12. Therefore, as stated above8. 我的观点。 9. 个人观点理由一。 10. 个人观点理由二。 11. 举例说明。 12. 综上所述再次强调自己的观点。4 问题解决精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运1. 模板一1空格一处铺垫,空格二处填写某一问题。 2. 注解决现象引出的问题很必要。 3解决问题很必要的理由一。 4解决问题很必要的理由二。5承上启下,填要解决的问题。 6. 解决办法一。7. 解决办法二。8. 举例解释解决办法二。 9. 解决办法三。10. 阐明解决办法三。1. With the development/impro
25、vement of ,.2. It is necessary that.3. On the one hand, .4. On the other hand, .5. Therefore, how to is worth paying attention.6. Firstly7. Secondly8. For example,9. Thirdly, . 10. In other words,11. In fact, ways to are countless.12. Its time that 11. 出解决问题的办法多种多样。 12. 强调解决问题时不可待。2. 模板二1提出现存的问题。 2解
26、决问题很必要的理由一 3解决问题很必要的理由二。 4承上启下,说明解决问题的必要性。5解决办法一 6解决办法一的理由.。 7解决办法二。8. 阐明解决办法二。 9. 解决办法三。1. There has been a discussion recently about.2. It is obvious that.3. Additionally, .4. So it is high time, 5. First of all, 6.The reason is7.Secondly8.That is to say,9. Thirdly, .10. In fact, more than three w
27、ays can be adopted,11. As for me, 12. All in all, 10. 指出解决问题的办法多种多精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运样。 11. 小结解决问题的根本途径。 12. 总结全文。3. 模板三 (2001 年 1 月)1提出问题及解决的必要性。 2解决问题很必要的理由一 3解决问题很必要的理由二。 4转折到如何解决问题。5呈上指出解决问题的方法很多。 6解决办法一.。 7解决办法二。8. 阐明解决办法二。 9. 解决办法三。 10. 其理由。1. I t is certain that.2. For one reason,.3. For another,
28、 .4. However, some still puzzle on how to .5. Here come some suggestions. 6. To begin with,7. Secondly8. For instance,9. Thirdly, . 10. That is because11. The solution vary according to different situations. 12. Therefore, 11. 解决问题的办法随具体情况不同而变化根本途径。 12. 总结全文,要灵活地依据具体情况处理问题。5 观点论证1. 模板一1. It is true
29、that.2. However,.3. I think.4. can be listed as follow.5. First of all, 6. Secondly 7. For example1. 提出普遍存在地观点。 2. 谈不同地观点。 3. 自己地观点,即文章地论点 4. 过度句,转折到观点地论证,由题目选择具体的词。精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运5论证理由一 6论证理由二。 7举例具体说明理由二。8. 论证理由三。 9. 举例说明理由三。8. Thirdly,9. A case in point is .10. It goes without saying that11. Ther
30、e is no doubt that 12. In conclusion 10. 提出执行该观点时应注意的事项。 11. 得出结论。 12. 总结全文。2模板二1直接提出本文的观点。 2进一步强度观点的正确性。 3论证理由一 4论证理由二5承上启下。 6举例一具体论证。 7总结例一。8. 举例二具体论证。 9. 举例三具体论证。1. Some people believe that.2. The truth is deep and profound.3. As we know,.4. In addition,.5. There are numerous examples 6. A case i
31、n point is7. There is close to suggest8. For another example9. Moreover,.10. All mentioned above tell us11. But one thing we have to notice is that 12. In a word, 10. 总结上下,重申论点。 11. 指出该论点应注意什么。 12. 总结全文。6 说明原因说明原因型模块These days we often hear that(1) It is common that精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运(2) Why does such c
32、ircumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing(3) For another(4) What is more ,since(5) Its natural that(6) To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying .We should do something such as(7) to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in th
33、e future.注释:1、提出论题2、说明现状3、理由一4、理由二5、理由三 6、理由三引起的后果7 提纲型1、对立观点式A. 有人认为 X 是好事,赞成 X,为什么?B. 有人认为 X 是坏事,反对 X,为什么?C. 我的看法。Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持 X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持 X 的另一个原因。However, other people stand on a different ground. They consi
34、der it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对 X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X alsomay X
35、的有一个坏处。2、批驳观点式A一个错误观点。B我不同意。精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。 There might be some element of truth in these peo
36、ples belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。3、社会问题(现象)式A一个社会问题或者现象B产生的原因C对社会和我们生活的影响D如何杜绝。( 如果是问题的话)E前景的预测。Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environme
37、ntal problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子 )。 There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life,which has been articulated in the f
38、ollowing aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 同上 Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will8 辩论型辩论式议论文模版(一)Some people believe (argue, recognize, think)that观点 1. But other people take an oppo
39、site side. They firmly believe that观点 2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozenof reasons behind my belief. First of all,论据 1. More importantly,论据 2. Most important of all,论据 3. In summary, 总结观点。 As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或 From above, we can predict that 预测
40、。精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运辩论式议论文模版(二)People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinionthat观点 1. While others point out that观点 2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds moreweight. For one thing,论据 1. For another,论据 2. Last but not the least,论据 3. To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。或 From above, we can predict that 预测。 沁园春雪北国风光, 千里冰封, 万里雪飘。望长城内外, 惟余莽莽; 大河上下,顿失滔滔。山舞银蛇, 原驰蜡象, 欲与天公试比高。须晴日, 看红装素裹, 分外妖娆。江山如此多娇, 引无数英雄竞折腰。精品文档 你我共享知识改变命运惜秦皇汉武, 略输文采; 唐宗宋祖,稍逊风骚。一代天骄, 成吉思汗, 只识弯弓射大雕。俱往矣, 数风流人物, 还看今朝。 克