1、“Make up” Example for your statement,Dani,If 先想到不错的reason,与生活不太相关的政策性题目 The only way to encourage energy conservation for government is to increase the price of gasoline and electricity. （2007-8-11）习惯性抽象概念的题目 Which one is better: to award a students efforts, or to award his/her achievement. （2007-10
2、-6）,如何编出例子？！,Step 1: 不一定要例子！,例子并不是作文中必须的 前提是，逻辑论证能把理由解释清楚 所以，纯用理论也是可以的 但，纯理论很难；纯理论相当于纯爷们，没有筋骨不能拿出手否则,作为逻辑中小范围补充（素颜） Such as, just like作为论证的具体版本（淡妆） Takeas an example单独当做论证使用（浓妆）,例子的作用,Step 2: Comb your Logic,The only way to encourage energy conservation for government is to increase the price of gas
3、oline and electricity. （2007-8-11） Nope. Too negative. Reason 1: educate the public Reason 2: seek new energy or develop energy-saving technology Reason 3: drawbacklower living standard,Reason 1: lower living standard increase the price of gasoline and electricity + everyone uses gas and elec. = eve
4、ryone has to pay more + salary stays the same = everyone has less money left for other activities = living standard is lowered,Step 3: Insert “such as”,increase the price of gasoline and electricity + everyone uses gas and elec. to cook, to use washing machine, to drive = everyone has to pay more +
5、salary stays the same = everyone has less money left for other activities traveling, housing, movies, etc. = living standard is lowered smaller space, more stress, less fun,Step 4: Trimming,increase the price of gasoline and electricity + everyone needs to cook, to use washing machine, to drive = ev
6、eryone has to pay more + salary stays the same = everyone has less money left for traveling, housing, movies, etc. = living standard is lowered smaller space, more stress, less fun,Step 5: Expand Details,increased the price of gasoline and electricity by 10% this year + costs 10% more to cook, to us
7、e washing machine, to drive + my parents salary stays the same as last year = my family has 10%+ less money left for traveling, housing, movies, etc. = my familys living standard is lowered smaller space, more stress, less fun,Tips:,纯理论： 逻辑前后清晰；关联词衔接；不用重复词素颜+淡妆： 例子要具体，最好出现具体六要素浓妆： 个人经验，要出现细节描写,Pract
8、ice,In 20 years from now, students will not use printed books any more. 列 reason 梳理 logic 加例子 整理重点 加入个人细节,Agree,On one hand, advanced technology will provide better storage of knowledge than printed books. (exp. iPad, online library, etc.) On the other hand, multi-media will replace printed books wi
9、th a more vivid illustration of knowledge. (exp. projector, 3D effect, Avatar, Ironman 2, etc.),Disagree,First, a huge leap in technology is not expected in 20 years that may completely wipe out the printed books.Second, despite the technological possibility, the expense to replace printed books is
10、too huge to ignore.Finally, printed books do not cause myopic as reading from a screen does.,Game 1: 替代掉你、我、他,我的心里只有你没有她, 你要相信我的情意并不假. 只有你才是我梦想, 只有你才叫我牵挂, 我的心里没有她 我的心里只有你没有她, 你要相信我的情意并不假 我的眼镜为了你带 我的眉毛为了你画 从来不是为了她,Game 2: Replace We, I, etc.,For the moon never beams without bringing me dreams of the
11、beautiful Annabel Lee, And the stars never rise but I see the bright eyes of the beautiful Annabel Lee, And so, all the night - tide, I lie down by the side of my darling, My darling, my life and my bride, In her sepulchre, there by the Sea In her tomb by the side of the Sea.,In-class Practice: Kill
12、 the Repetitions!,Find Kill the Repetitions. Do as rules instruct.,Good Luck,Can you fix this?,Firstly, buying printed books will cost much money. Now we can read free books online. On the other hand, if we go to the bookstore to buy the printed books, it will cost some money. For example, last week
13、, I went to a bookstoye with my best friend to buy some books. There he bought a fiction book called which tell about the history of The sunI had read this book online and did not pay any money. But this book cost my friend 100 yuan. Therefore, reading books online is much cheaper than reading the p
14、rinted books.,A possible example,Firstly, printed books cost much money. Both editing and publishing involve intensive work whose value expresses through the high price of published books. In contrast, e-books are much cheaper as they require only editing. For example, last week, my best friend paid
15、 RMB 100 for The Sun, a science fiction on the history of the Sun. A few days later, though, I found an online version of the same novel, and paid only RMB 20 for that. It perfectly demonstrated my point that it is cost-saving to read online rather than to buy printed books.,Can you fix this?,With a
16、 better job, we can get high salaries and more money. As a result, we can buy more things we want such as a bigger house, a faster car and a high-tech laptop. This can improve our living stander and bring us more happiness. On the other hand, a better job can give us precious experience which can he
17、lp develop our career. We can also find many friends thanks to a better job. Hung out with friends a really a good way to relax our mind after a busy work day.,Problems,With a better job, we can get high salaries and more money. As a result, we can buy more things we want such as a bigger house, a f
18、aster car and a high-tech laptop. This can improve our living stander and bring us more happiness. On the other hand, a better job can give us precious experience which can help develop our career. We can also find many friends thanks to a better job. Hung out with friends a really a good way to rel
19、ax our mind after a busy work day.,Possible Answers:,Piece 1: Thirdly, college time consists of the most energetic years in ones life. Most students are about 18 when they start their freshman year; only just becoming adults, they feel full of spirit and enthusiasm.,Piece 2: A person lives through a sequence of stages: first, as a baby, he/she plays every day without practical worries; then he/she studies at school on language and basic science; upon graduation, he/she either goes to college for further study or gets a job.,
