1、高考作文训练:看图作文写作技巧,写作步骤:1. 审题:图片描述 - 体裁、人称、时态、中心2. 列提纲:主要内容3. 用英语组织篇章 - 合适的连接词,作文中常用的语法结构： 从句类：定语从句; 状语从句; 名词性从句 非谓语：不定式、分词做后置定语、状语；动名词相关句型 强调倒装：否定副词置于句首； Only+状语置于句首；频率副词置于句首；让步状语置于句首；各种强调倒装句型 形容词副词：the more the more 句型; no adj. than; morethan;各种词组 虚拟语气：I wish; I would rather; Its time; Its necessary(
2、important)thatshould,作文修改范例详解 假设下面六幅图画描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面所示内容，用英语写一篇120字左右的日记。,今天下午我去看电影. I went to the cinema this afternoon. I went to see a film this afternoon.,在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来. On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a mans bike.,我捡起箱子,并想骑车人大声喊叫,但他却已经骑远了. I picked up
3、the case and shouted at the man, but he had already rode away.,于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主. I stopped a taxi to catch up with the man.,我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他. I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him. 失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了. The man took out some money to thank me, but I refused.,我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被我
4、的行动所感动,不收我的车费. I went back to the cinema by taxi. The driver was very moved and didnt accept my money.,Sample: May 3rd,Friday Fine This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a mans bike. I picked up the case and shouted at the man to stop. But he didnt hear me and rode a
5、way. What should I do? Then I had an idea. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused .Then the driver took me to the cinema. When I paid him, the driver woul
6、dnt accept the money .He said he was very moved at what I did.,How to revise it? Original version: I went to see a film this afternoon. On the way to the cinema, I saw a case fall off a mans bike.Revised version: I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a m
7、ans bike.,Original version: I picked up the case. I shouted at the man loudly. But he didnt hear me and rode away.Revised version: After picking up the case, I shouted at the man loudly, but he rode too fast to hear me. Loudly as I shouted at him after picking it up, the man was riding so far away t
8、hat he couldnt hear me. I shouted at the man the moment I picked it up, however, he was riding too fast to hear me.,Original version: Suddenly, I had an idea./ I stopped a taxi to catch up with the man./ I caught up with him at last. Revised version: Suddenly, an idea flashed into my mind. I held ou
9、t for a taxi and got into it with the case. Of course, it didnt take me long to catch up with the man. I was wondering what I should do when an idea suddenly struck me. I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could so as to catch up with the man.,Original version: I gave the case back to the man./The man t
10、ook out some money to thank me./I refused.Revised version: Getting the case back from me, the man was so grateful to me that he insisted on offering me some money as a reward. But I refused him politely.,Original version: The driver took me the cinema. He was very moved. He didnt accept my money.Rev
11、ised version: With the help of the driver, I went back to the cinema. When I was paying him, he pushed my hand away and said with a smile: “ Never will I accept your money.” I went back to the cinema by taxi. To my surprise, the driver didnt accept the money because he was very moved at what I did.
12、How proud I was!,Example: I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike. After picking up the case, I shouted at the man loudly, but he rode too fast to hear me. Loudly as I shouted at him after picking it up, the man was riding so far away that he c
13、ouldnt hear me. I shouted at the man the moment I picked it up, however, he was riding too fast to hear me.,Suddenly, an idea flashed into my mind. I held out for a taxi and got into it with the case. Of course, it didnt take me long to catch up with the man. I was wondering what I should do when an
14、 idea suddenly struck me. I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could so as to catch up with the man. Getting the case back from me, the man was so grateful to me that he insisted on offering me some money as a reward. But I refused him politely.,With the help of the driver, I went back to the cinema. Wh
15、en I was paying him, he pushed my hand away and said with a smile: “ Never will I accept your money.” I went back to the cinema by taxi. To my surprise, the driver didnt accept the money because he was very moved at what I did. How proud I was!,美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。 注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。2. 词数不少于120-150。,Assignment,Dear Jeff,Im Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing. _Best wishes,Li Hua,
