1、 This graph shows us TV viewers preference for different TV programs. According to the graph, 78 percent TV viewers watch sports frequently, which is obviously far ahead of other TV programs. So we can know that sports programs enjoy a great popularity among viewers. News has 68 percent views and ju
2、st behind sports but ahead of movie, which has 54 percent viewers. Documentary has more viewers than Special, with 42 percent and 20 percent respectively.From this graph, we can see peoples great passion for sports TV program. Here are some possible reasons. First, sport is not only a fitness tool,
3、but also a communication tool from country to country, people to people. Second, after a busy day, most people prefer release themselves from physical and mental tired body and express their feelings towards those exciting sports TV program. Third, those sports player use to try their best to realiz
4、e their dreams, so it must be a great inspiration for viewers, whats more, they will be much more positive and brave to some dilemmasAfter analysing this graph, I have some personal suggestion. Although sports TV programs have dozens of advantages, but we should broaden our horizon and learn more th
5、ings from other TV programs such as news and documentary. At the same time, I hope more and more people could go out, explore this world with their curiousity instead of just staying home. 1.1 This graph shows us TV viewers preference for different TV programs. 学习提示 易混词汇: different, various, diverse
6、 均含“不同的”之意。 different: 普通用词，强调事物间的区别或本质的不同。有时侧重对比，不着重差别。various: 通常强调种类的数目。diverse: 语气较强，指性质完全不同，着重显著的区别。 好评报错1.2 According to the graph, 78 percent TV viewers watch sports frequently, which is obviously far ahead of other TV programs. 搭配统计 动名搭配 watch.sport 在教材中出现过 297 次 SeeAlso: watch play372,see s
7、port125,learn sport55,watch fun20,determine sport3好评报错 学习提示 易混词汇: agree, accord, coincide, conform, correspond 均含“符合，一致”之意。 agree: 侧重指经过比较后的所有主要部分均和谐一致，无冲突和矛盾。accord: 着重指性格、精神、语气或质量等方面的完全一致。coincide: 多用于指观点、判断、愿望、利益或兴趣的一致或相符。偶尔用于人，强调意见或观点完全相同。conform: 强调在形状、性格以及主要特点等方面的相似或一致。correspond: 指在进行比较时，两个事物
8、在某一个重要方面或细节上互相匹配、一致。 好评报错 批改提示 注意 accord to 和 accord as 的区别。 好评报错 批改提示 according to 在做“根据”讲时，近义表达有 in accordance with。 好评报错1.3 So we can know that sports programs enjoy a great popularity among viewers. 低频警示 a great popularity among viewers 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语 好评报错 批改提示 注意 enjoy 和 appreciate 的区别。 appre
9、ciate: 多用于文学方面，强调对事物有深入的理解能力，且能鉴赏。enjoy: 普通用词，使用广泛，程度不及 appreciate,多指从外界事物中得到喜悦与满足，领略到乐趣，享受意味强。 好评报错 学习提示 易混词汇: among, between, amid, amongst 均含“在 之间，在之中”之意。 批改提示 know 近义表达有 cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow 好评报错1.4 News has 68 percent views and just behind sports but ahead of movie, which has 5
10、4 percent viewers. 搭配统计 动名搭配 have.viewer 在教材中出现过 257 次 SeeAlso: have witness421,take viewer234好评报错 搭配统计 动名搭配 have.view 在教材中出现过 4707 次 SeeAlso: take view4146,accept view219,have horizon138好评报错 学习提示 易混词汇: cinema, film, movie, picture 均有“电影” 之意。 cinema: 与 the 连用指(上映的)电影，电影工业；可指电影院；在英国与 the 连用还可指电影艺术。fi
11、lm: 指电影、影片，普通用词。movie: 美国英语中的口语用词。picture: 从原义指银幕或电视屏幕上的图像引申指影片。 好评报错1.5 Documentary has more viewers than Special, with 42 percent and 20 percent respectively. 名词错误 documentary 前缺失冠词 好评报错2.1 From this graph, we can see peoples great passion for sports TV program. 学习提示 易混词汇: emotion, feeling, passio
12、n, affection, sentiment 的共同含义是“感情，情感”之意。 emotion: 普通用词，词义中性。泛指因外界刺激而引起思想情感从细微变化到最强烈的发作。 feeling: 普通用词，含义广。多指具体的或内心的感受，或表露出来的强烈情感。passion: 指极强烈的感情、尤指愤怒、爱好等。也常指两性间的爱情。affection: 指对人的爱慕或深厚、温柔的感情。sentiment: 一般指由一种思想激起的感情，含较大的理智因素。 好评报错 批改提示 people 表示“人，民族”。注意与 person 的区别。 详情点击 好评报错2.2 Here are some poss
13、ible reasons. 批改提示 possible 的近义表达有 feasible。 2.3 First, sport is not only a fitness tool, but also a communication tool from country to country, people to people. 学习提示 易混词汇: communication, traffic, transportation 均有“ 交通”之意。 communication: 指邮电、无线电、铁路、公路等各种交通方式或媒介。 traffic: 指来往的东西的情况，表示一种抽象概念的交通流动量。tr
14、ansportation: 指将乘客或货物从一处运到另一处，也可指交通运输工具。 好评报错 批改提示 country 表示“国家”。注意与 state 的区别。详情点击 好评报错 批改提示 注意 country 和 nation，village 区别。 名词 country 和 nation 均可表示 “国家”，但 country 主要指国土与居民， 也可指祖国或国籍所属的国家a nation or state with its land or population；而 nation 着重指一个政府领导下的人民或民族的统一体a large group of people living in o
15、ne area and usu having an intiependent government。 名词 country 可表示“农村”，“ 乡下”the land outside cities or towns，与 city 相对，必须加定冠词，不能用来指具体的某一村庄；而 village 表示“村庄”a group of houses etc which is smaller than a town。 好评报错2.4 Second, after a busy day, most people prefer release themselves from physical and ment
16、al tired body and express their feelings towards those exciting sports TV program. 句子错误 本句语法不规范 ，请检查！ 好评报错 低频警示 physical and mental tired body 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语 好评报错 低频警示 prefer release themselves from physical 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语 好评报错 搭配统计 动名搭配 tire.body 在教材中出现过 5 次 SeeAlso: bore body10好评报错 搭配统计 动名搭配 e
17、xpress.feeling 在教材中出现过 868 次 SeeAlso: express opinion1027,express belief218,convey feeling129,carry feeling24,express notion14,express impression4好评报错2.5 Third, those sports player use to try their best to realize their dreams, so it must be a great inspiration for viewers, whats more, they will be
18、much more positive and brave to some dilemmas After analysing this graph, I have some personal suggestion. 低频警示 analyse.graph 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语 好评报错 低频警示 those sports player use 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语 好评报错 低频警示 some personal suggestion 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语 好评报错 搭配统计 动名搭配 have.suggestion 在教材中出现过 679 次 SeeAlso:
19、have hint273,take suggestion170,have trace163,accept suggestion90,have proposition62好评报错 搭配统计 动名搭配 realize.dream 在教材中出现过 810 次 SeeAlso: make dream125,realize ambition121,see dream84,realize aspiration24,understand dream11,recognize dream5好评报错2.6 Although sports TV programs have dozens of advantages,
20、 but we should broaden our horizon and learn more things from other TV programs such as news and documentary. 连词错误 although 和 but 在同一个句子中不可同时使用。详情点击 好评报错 搭配统计 动名搭配 broaden.horizon 在教材中出现过 180 次 SeeAlso: broaden view35,widen horizon26,extend horizon19,broaden purview7好评报错 搭配统计 动名搭配 have.dozen 在教材中出现过
21、 489 次 SeeAlso: have 12237,take dozen99,accept dozen9好评报错 搭配统计 动名搭配 learn.thing 在教材中出现过 1470 次 SeeAlso: see thing4693,take thing2291,hear thing950,teach thing432,read thing375,pick_up thing327,watch thing290,discover thing213,find_out thing176,study thing131好评报错 学习提示 易混词汇: advantage, benefit, intere
22、st, favour, profit, gain 均有“利益，好处”之意。 advantage: 指因某方面占优势或利用某机会以及对方弱点而获得利益与好处。benefit: 普通用词，指通过正当手段从物质或精神方面得到的任何好处或利益。interest: 作“利益” 解时，多用复数形式，既可指集团、群体的利益，又可指个人的利益。favour: 指在竞争中获得的 advantage,也可指在狭隘的个人利益。profit: 着重收益，尤指从物质、钱财等方面获得的利益。gain: 指获得的物质利益，也暗示不损坏他人利益而得的无形好处。 好评报错2.7 At the same time, I hope
23、 more and more people could go out, explore this world with their curiousity instead of just staying at home. 句子错误 本句语法不规范 ，请检查！ 好评报错 拼写错误 curiousity 拼写错误，可替换选项为： curiosity, curiously, Cristy 好评报错 低频警示 more people could go out 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语 好评报错 搭配统计 动名搭配 explore.world 在教材中出现过 347 次 SeeAlso: search world66,research world5好评报错 学习提示 易混词汇: hunt, explore, track, seek 均含“搜索，寻找”之意。 hunt: 一般指寻找所需的物件，或对罪犯的搜寻，特指追猎。explore: 一般指对未知事物或新生事物的探索、观察与研究。track: 侧重按一定线索追查出结果。seek: 语义庄重，语气强，使用广。多暗示做出很大努力去寻求某人或物。 好评报错 展开回顶
