1、 作文 高分原理 【作文怎么得高分】 1、 卷面 ： clean as a result, it will not be so hard once you fall in love with it. Last but not least, no one can deny we need to pass a lot of English exams, which all require our great effort. 【例】我们要多读书。 There is no doubt that we are supposed to read more books. As for the reasons
2、, first and foremost, it is obvious that books are useful, which can cultivate our interests, broaden our horizons and enrich our afterschool life. Additionally, it goes without saying that books are not only meaningful but also entertaining. Last but not least, no one can deny we need to pass a lot
3、 of exams; as a result, we need the knowledge learned from books. 后面补一补： 白银裤衩句型 （补充语意，增强逻辑） 因为 以防 (以备 ) 所以 为了 如果 只要 这件事儿 因为 , for , in that , considering that 以防（以备） , in case 所以 ; as a result, ; therefore, ; consequently, ;accordingly, 为了 , so that , in order that 如果 ., if 只要 , as long as 这件事儿 , wh
4、ich 注意：所有的“ ”都是完整的句子！ 【例】介绍英语学习经验 Here are some useful, practical and effective suggestions on English study. To begin with, you can read some English magazines. Besides, you may listen to some English songs and watch some English movies. Whats more, you should learn as many English words as possibl
5、e. Finally, youd better make an American friend. 方法：每写完一句都要翻译一下，看看逻辑通不通 。 中间变一变： （变主语，变句式） 变主语 (1)用物做主语（无灵主语） I like English. English attracts me. English interests me. English appeals to me. English is my favorite subject. You can read some English magazines. Some English magazines can be beneficia
6、l for your English study. Some English magazines can cultivate your interests. Some English magazines can provide you with some useful knowledge. You should learn as many English words as possible. A large vocabulary is essential for your English study. (2)动名词作主语 I like English Learning English neve
7、r fails to make me excited. You should make an American friend. Making an American friend is a good start for spoken English study. You should read more books. Reading more books is helpful. (3)It 作主语 It is + adj/n + for sb + to do. 这件事 是 什么样的 （什么事儿呢） 对某人来说 去做某事。 It is essential for me to learn Engl
8、ish. It is essential for you to make an American friend. It is essential for you to read more books. 变 句式 (1)普通变强调 普通句子 = A + B + C + D + E + F + G 强调句 = It is C + D that A+B+E+F+G English magazines can help you improve your vocabulary. (3)陈述变倒装 i. 地点词提前 +主谓完全倒装 Here comes the bus. On the desk stand
9、s a cup. Over the river lies a bridge. Between the two strange buildings grows a young tree. ii. 否定词提前 + 助 /系 /情 + 主 + 谓 I have never read the book. Never have I read the book. You should never quarrel with your parents. Never should you quarrel with your parents. At no time By no means + should you
10、 quarrel with your parents. On no account iii. So + adj/adv +助 /系 /情 + 主 + 谓 + that The flower is beautiful. So beautiful is the flower that I like it very much. ZJ runs fast. So fast does ZJ run that his two ears stand up. ZJ looks ugly. So ugly does ZJ look that we are all scared away. 【如何编谚语】 Ste
11、p1：选择一些大词儿 love life wisdom knowledge harmony happiness dream goal success failure philosophy patience diligence honesty law 律 tao 道 intelligent pain gain wealth health democracy civilization freedom truth justice Step2：用 be 动词或因果动词将大词随意连接 generate 引发，产生； lead to 导致； end up with 导致 mean 意味着； contrib
12、ute to 有助于； bring 带来 ; show 显示出 Step3：套用名言谚语句型 Just as an old Egyptian/Arab/Babylon/Mongolian saying goes, Just as Obama said last Friday in his Twitter, 【话题作文】 第二节：短文写作 (共 1 题；满分 25 分 ) 请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。 The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile.
13、A smile can help us get through difficult situation and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls. 注意： 无 须写标题； 内容只需涉及一个方面； 词数为 100 左右。 No one can deny a smile can help us through difficult situations. The reason is simple: just as an old Arab saying goes, it is
14、 your feeling that generates your expression, and similarly, it is your expression that influences your feeling. Take one of my own experiences for example. As a top student in my school, I never fail to get a high score in any examination. Unfortunately, last week, I failed in an important math exa
15、m (due to a horrible cold), making me sad, discouraged, upset and desperate. However, my headmaster had a conversation with me, telling me to keep a smile. Immediately, I became happy, confident and brave again, making a decision that I will do better next time. From this experience, I learned that,
16、 more often than not, it is a smile that helps us overcome any challenges. Hopefully, everyone can master this powerful weapon to live a better life. 【话题作文】 第二节：短文写作 (共 1 题；满分 25 分 ) Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork. Teamwork shows us how other peoples roles
17、 fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people. 注意： 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 除诗歌外，文体不限； 内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例； 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为 100 左右。 No one can deny teamwork can help us get through difficult situations. The reason is simple: just as an African saying
18、 goes, it is teamwork that generates strength when chasing a lion. Take one of my own experiences for example. Last week, an English play competition was held in our school and our class took part in it. Unfortunately, as Tom speaks English better than some other classmates, he failed to work togeth
19、er with us. However, as the vice monitor, I had a conversation with him, telling him to be modest and cooperate with us. Immediately, he changed, helping our class win the first prize. From this experience, I learned that, more often than not, it is teamwork that helps us overcome any challenge. Hop
20、efully, everyone can master this powerful weapon to live a better life. 【话题作文】 第二节：短文写作 (共 1 题；满分 30 分 ) 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 You cannot choose (what you are given), but you can choose how you make use of it. 注意： 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 除诗歌外，文体不限； 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 词数为 120 左右。 No one can deny we are supp
21、osed to make good use of what we are given. The reason is simple, just as an old Maya saying goes, it is what we have that makes us who we are. Take one of my own experiences for example. As a top student in my school, I am crazy about books; as a result, my friends, relatives and teachers have give
22、n me a lot of books as gifts. However, so many books do I own that, one day, I decided to throw them away to make room for new ones. Fortunately, my dad had a conversation with me, telling me to reread those books. So, I read all those books again within a week, gaining a lot of useful knowledge, fe
23、eling very excited. From this experience, I learnt that, more often than not, it is what we have that can bring us a lot of happiness. Hopefully, everyone can master this powerful wisdom to live a better life. 【提纲作文】 II Guided Writing 某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺 (gardening)，烹饪(cooking),防身术 (self-defence
24、)，护理 (nursing)。假如你是王跃华 (不可以用自己的真实姓名 )，写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括： 你感兴趣的课程 你期望从这门课程中学到什么 为什么想学这些内容 1 gardening (1)In my opinion, / Personally speaking, As/So far as I am concerned,/ From my own perspective, (2)The reason is simple: just as an old western saying goes, it is that . 2 (1) There is no
25、 doubt that I can benefit a lot from this course. 1、如何使用工具 2、选种子、种花、浇水、修花、施肥、除 草 3、培养兴趣，开阔视野，丰富课余生活 cultivate my interests, broaden my horizons and enrich my afterschool life. 3 There are two main reasons why I prefer this course. For one thing, For another, 4 I have the confidence that I will enjoy
26、 myself in this course. As far as I am concerned, I am interested in gardening. Just as an old western saying goes, it is gardening that makes our life enjoyable. There is no doubt that I can benefit a lot from this course. First and foremost, I can learn to use different tools. Additionally, I will
27、 master how to choose seeds, plant flowers, water them and remove the useless grass, which is not only meaningful but also entertaining. Last but not least, it can cultivate my interests, broaden my horizons and enrich my afterschool life. There are two main reasons why I prefer this course. For one
28、 thing, both my father and grandfather are gardeners; as a result, I have a talent for it. For another, all my family members are fond of flowers; therefore, I want to learn gardening skills to make them pleased. I have the confidence that I will enjoy myself in this course. 【提纲作文】 II Guided Writing
29、 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 以 “礼物 ”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容： 1你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物； 2该礼物对他 (她 )可能产生的影响或带来的变化。 There is no doubt that gifts are essential in our interpersonal relationship. Just as an old Zambia saying goes, it
30、is a gift that shows your wisdom. Take one of my own experiences for example. As a book lover, I regard books as the best gifts, which are not only meaningful but also entertaining. Two years ago, I decided to donate 100 books each week to students from poor areas, so that they can know more about t
31、he outside world. To my amazement, they wrote me a large amount of letters, telling me that the books have cultivated their interests, broadened their horizons and enriched their afterschool life. From this experience, I learned that, more often than not, it is a gift that can generate happiness for
32、 both the giver and the receiver. Hopefully, everyone can master this powerful wisdom to live a better life. 【提纲作文】 U. Guided Writing 你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛 (group dancing competition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。 你的文章必须包括以下内容： 你是否会参加比赛 你做出该决定的具体 理由 【重要的功能性段落】 （ 1）重要性 Needless to say, XXX is of great significanc
33、e/importance for our life/society. As for the reasons, first and foremost, Additionally, Last but not least, （ 2）我的观点 As far as I am concerned, The reason is simple: just as an old Cuba saying goes, （ 3） 解释原因 There are three main reasons why sb do sth. First and foremost, Additionally, Last but not
34、least, . （ 4）建议措施 Here are some suggestions. 1 2 3 Practical and effective measures must be put into practice immediately to improve the current situation. 1 2 3. （ 5）万能结尾句 我希望 Hopefully, sb would do sth. 我相信 I have the confidence that sb will do sth. 感谢你 Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot s
35、ummer. 请回信 I am looking forward to your earliest reply. 只有才 Only in this way/by doing so can you have the chance of achieving your dreams/living a better life. 难避免 With these suggestions carried out, a much brighter future will be not only possible but also inevitable(不可避免 ). 【书信作文套路】 开头段：问候 +自我介绍 +
36、写信背景 +写信目的 中间段：具体问题 +具体分析 结尾段：补充说明 +客套话（我希望 我相信 感谢你 请回信） 【开头段套话】 1、问候： How are you doing? / How is it going? 2、自我介绍： I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager(boy/girl) currently studying in XXX middle school, who is crazy about YYY/who is fond of YYY/who is interested in YYY. 3、写信背景： Recently, I received
37、your letter saying. Recently, I learned that Recently, I was informed that Recently, I had a dinner in your restaurant with my friends. Recently, I plan to take part in the CCTV national English speech contest. 4、写信目的： So, I am writing to to sth. 申请信 to apply for the job/position/chance/opportunity.
38、 建议信 to give you some suggestions. / to give you a hand. 感谢信 to express my heartfelt gratitude. 道歉信 to express my heartfelt apology. 祝贺信 to express my heartfelt congratulations/best wishes. 抱怨信 to express my complaint and give you some suggestions. 告知信 to tell you some relevant details. 邀请信 to invit
39、e you to come as our guest 嘉宾 / judge 裁判 . 求助信 to ask you to do me a favor. 咨询信 to ask you some relevant questions. 【中间段套话】 主题句 +1 +2 +3 申请信 ： There are several reasons why I am the best choice for you. 1 2 3 建议 信 ： Here are some suggestions for you. 1 2 3 You are supposed to do sth. You ought to do
40、 sth. Youd better do sth. If I were you, I would do sth. It is high time that you did sth. 如果我是你，我就怎么做。 真的到了你该做某事的时间了。 感谢信 ： Whenever I recall those days/read my diary/ see our photos, I just cant help thinking of you. It was so kind of you to do sth1. Besides, you did sth2, which really moved me. W
41、hats more, I shall never forget that you did sth3. Nothing would be able to erase/delete our wonderful memories and I will cherish them forever. 道歉信 ： How I wish I would do sth1/had done sth1! However, I was informed that I had been chosen to do sth/to take part in the CCTV national English speech c
42、ontest that day. You know its vital for me, in that it has always been my dream to do sth. Consequently, I have/had no choice but to break my promise. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice. 祝贺信 ： May you do sth! 祝愿你做某事！ May you have a happy, healthy and productive new year! 祝
43、你新年快乐健康多产！ 抱怨信 ： How could you do sth1! As a XXX, it is your responsibility to do sth2. However, you did sth3, which really disappointed me. Here are some suggestions for you. First and foremost, Additionally, Last but not least, Hopefully, you would take my suggestions and make some improvement. 告知
44、信 ： To begin with, Besides, Whats more, Finally, 邀请信 ： Here are some relevant details about our activities. 1 2 3 4 求助信 ： Here are some questions that have been troubling me. 1 2 3 4 咨询信 ： Here are my questions. 1 2 3 4 【结尾段】 有问题： If you have any further questions, please drop me a line 写小信 or send
45、me a text message 发短信 to let me know. 我希望： Hopefully, sb would do sth. / Hopefully, you would make it to our party. 我相信： I have the confidence that you can do sth. 感谢你： Thanks for reading my letter. 请回信： I am looking forward to your earliest reply. 【看图议论文写法】 开头段：描述图画 一个中心事物 -“矛盾”分析 In the picture, w
46、e can see sb1 doing sth1, doing sth2, doing sth3, with sth in his hand/on his head. What surprises me most is that (用一句话写出本图矛盾点 ). What a thought-provoking picture it is! 两个中心事物 -“两者”对比 In the picture, we can see sb1 doing sth1, doing sth2, doing sth3. Meanwhile, doing sth4, sb2 is doing sth5, doing
47、 sth6, doing sth7. What inspires me most is that(用一句话写出本图对比点 ) What a thought-provoking picture it is! 中间段：分析道理 From my perspective, what the author want to convey is simple but of great wisdom. （用一句话写出本图核心含义） . In the picture, sb would rather do sth1 than do sth2. The reason is simple: （用一句话分析深刻原因）
48、 However, if he could do sth2, it would be easier for him to enjoy his life/achieve his goal. 分析原因： 1、弘扬：名言谚语 2、驳斥： we human beings are sometimes too proud to see the true meaning of our life/ family/ friendship/ work/ study 结尾段：落实自身 From this picture, I learn that we modern individuals are supposed
49、 to sth1 instead of doing sth2. Only in way can we enjoy our life/achieve our success/avoid the similar mistakes just as the man/boy/horse in the picture. 【读写任务】 第二节 读写任务 (共 l 小题，满分 25 分 ) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文。 Dear Ari, As you sleep in my arms, Im amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting
