1、 专题限时训练(四十) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号() ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起) 不计分。(一)Lately in the afternoon，the boys put up their tent in the middle of a field. As soon a
2、s this was done it， they had cooked a meal over an open fire. They were all hungry and the food smelt well. After a wonderful meal，they said stories and sang songs by the camp fire. But some times later it began to rain. The boys felt tired so they put out the fire and crept into his tent. Their sle
3、epbags warm and comfortable，so they all slept soundly. At the middle of the night，one of the boys woke up or began shouting. The tent had been flooded!(二)My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For example，when he bought a chocolate c
4、ake，he put them in a secret place where I couldnt find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is，a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did made people angrily. For instance， on one night he played strong and loudly music till
5、four oclock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework，helps mum with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.(三)It was very fine when I got up on last Sunday morning. So I decided to go for a walk and took some photos in the beautiful country. After
6、the breakfast，I carried my camera with me and set off. Everything went smooth. I enjoyed my trip so much that I didnt realize the weather has turned bad. I began to run and it was too late. I was caught by the rain and was wet through. I kept on running until I got to a bus stop. I stood there waite
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10、 “讲故事” 。6. times time。 some time, “一段时间” 。7. his their 。their 与句子的主语相呼应。8. warm 前加 were。原句缺少谓语动词。9. At In。in the middle of 为固定搭配。10. or and。由语境可知，这里表示顺承关系。(二)My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things towith other people. For example，when he bought a choco
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13、数名词单数，后边的代词显然应用 it 而不是 them。3. where which/that 或去掉 where。此为定语从句，修饰先行词 place，place 在定语从句中作 find 的宾语。故用关系代词 which/that 或省略 where。4. other others。不定代词 other 指另一个，而 others 指另一些，此处应指别人。又如：Some of the students are sweeping the floor and others are cleaning the desks.一些学生在扫地，其他一些学生在擦桌子。5. busy 前的 is was。此
14、题考查动词的时态。Hs said he was busy.一句中，主句是一般过去时，从句中的谓语部分，应用一般过去时。6. making made。本句缺少谓语，需要把现在分词 making 改为 make 的一般过去式形式 made。7. angrilyangry。此处形容词作宾补。8. 去掉 on。one night 一天夜里(时间状语) ，其前介词 on 不需要。9. loudly loud。loudly 是副词修饰动词，如：Speak loudly. 大声说。此处修饰名词music, 应用形容词。10. difference different。把此处的名词形式改为形容词形式 diff
15、erent，形容词与系动词一起构成系表结构。(三)It was very fine when I got up on last Sunday morning. So I decided to go for a walk and tooktakesome photos in the beautiful country. After the breakfast，I carried my camera with me and set off. Everything went . I enjoyed my trip so much that I didnt realize the weather tu
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