1、书面表达-开放类,漫画类作文 应试策略 (1)认真审题，把握要求，找准提示语中的关键句 (2)依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章脉络 (3)准确定位人称、时态，遣词造句要扬长避短 a人称，时态 b文章的遣词造句。考生应尽可能运用自己熟悉的单词、短语或句型来灵活表达，避免单词、短语或句型的重复使用。,一般的漫画作文一般可分为三个步骤，即： 1)describe the drawing briefly. 2) explain its intended meaning and give examples (if necessary) 3)give your own comments or opinion
2、s,各部分常用的表达 描述图画部分： 1)From the cartoon we can see that 2 As is shown/indicated in the picture 3)This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see,论述漫画寓意及所反映现象部分 1) What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in todays society./ Apparently, the cartoon reflects a major social problem. 2) T
3、his sight reminds me of something in my daily life. 3) What the cartoon reflects set me thinking a lot. 4)After seeing the picture, I was greatly shocked by the phenomenon. In todays society, 5)The cartoon implies that 6)This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phen
4、omenon among 7)It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere.,评论与观点部分 1)As far as Im concerned, some effective measures should be taken./what we have to do is to make full use of 2) From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society
5、. 3) We should take immediate measures, for if the present situation continues as before, serious outcome will come up. 4) In the long run, it will have a negative influence on constructing a harmonious society. Lets call on everybody to 5)Therefore, I am firmly convinced that 6) Consequently因此, it
6、is high time that measures should be taken to avoid this phenomenon from happening again.,孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面 的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。 内容要求： 1.描述漫画内容； 2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题； 3. 提出你的看法。 注意： 1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； 3.词数120左右; 4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇:pave the way From the pictu
7、re, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. _,【要点综述】书面表达以漫画的形式讲述“以孩子为中心的三口之家，孩子是小皇帝”这一社会现象，发人深省。漫画式作文就是通过漫画提供的图像信息写一篇短文，漫画作文就内容而言，可以写观察到的内容，也可以根据合理想象适当进行发挥来补充一些内容；就表达方式而言，可以单纯地理解、说明，也可以在说明中加以描写、叙述。写好漫画作文的要求是：认真审图，确立主题，提炼要点，展开联想或发表感想，变点为句，连句成篇。要达到这些要求，我们必须认真审图，善于利用图中人物间的关系、人物对话、人物的
8、活动及所处场所，以及图表中的文字说明和标识来提炼要点；要围绕主题展开合理的想象，切忌游离于主题展开不着边际的联想或感想。,From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
9、 It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no
10、independent thought or creative ideas.Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for childrens development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop
11、by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.,下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家的妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等； 2结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想； 3举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。 注意：1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。 2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。,思路点拨：本文为看
12、图作文，考查角度独到新颖(为家长减负)，主题是孝敬父母。描述图片内容时应使用第三人称，在写自己的感想和减负措施时应用第一人称。短文基本时态应为一般现在时。可按题目提供的内容来安排写作顺序。文章可分为三个部分：(1)描述图片内容；(2)自己的感想；(3)举例说明自己为家长减负可做的事情。后两个部分为开放性写作，考生可根据自己的生活体验来自由发挥。,The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from
13、their own children. The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a days work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.,All thi
14、s reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the ever
15、yday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself so as to share mothers daily burden. The picture convinces me that it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good” student.,根据下面图中的相关信息写一篇以“成才之路”为题的短文。要求：1写作应包括图示要点； 2针对图示所反映的问题，发表自己的观点和看法。,The Road to SuccessAs it is
16、 depicted in the cartoon, a small child is driven to play the pianoThe child is nervous, reluctant and unhappy, but he has to do what he doesnt want to because his parents have whips in their hands and even the teacher also has oneIt is a long way to gain success.Every child has the right to enjoy a
17、 happy-go-lucky childhoodUnder such a circumstance of China nowadays, all the children face the painful road to successOn the one hand, we want to live a happy life in the future, we have to study hard On the other hand, is it really worthwhile to gain so-called fame at the cost of the happiness of
18、childhood?,In my opinion, what we have to do is try our best to do what we can and make full use of our timeWe only hope the next generation will have more free time to do what they like.,假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文： 1简要描述下图内容，并点明主题；2联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示。 注意：1. 词数不少于120个；,A drop of water is only a drop
19、 of water, but when a great many drops of water join together a river will come into being. And when rivers come together they will form a sea.As is in the same way, a tree is only a tree, many trees, however, will become a wood. And when several woods lie one by one, they will be called a forest. A
20、s is known to everyone, a forest is a home for all kinds of animals and plants.From the above, we can understand that one person can not do many things. But when many people come together, they can form a society. In a society, people are related to one another, help one another. In this way, we can
21、 make a harmonious society in which we can live a happy life.,高考满分作文1 As can be seen in the picture, constant dropping water makes a sea and constant growing trees form a forest. It is universally acknowledged that many grand things begin with one step. You and I are both the architects of our socie
22、ty.Competition is a common sight in every field of our life, while cooperation is the main melody of the society. Human beings are social beings and no one can exist alone. To some extent, life is like a game. If we want to play well, we have to cooperate with others to win. Only by helping each oth
23、er can we reap mutual benefits. So if everyone is willing to play his part, even little things can make a difference in making the world a better place for everyone.,Work together, and we shall progress together; cooperate with each other, and our beautiful future is in our own hands.,高考满分作文2In the
24、picture, we can see that the sea is made up of countless water drops, a forest consists of a lot of trees and the society is constructed by many people. It is obvious that unity is strength.We still remember the big earthquake which happened on May 12, 2008 in Sichuan. It was so powerful that thousa
25、nds of people lost their relatives and homes. But nobody gave up, the government made a lot of efforts, and the soldiers were sent to rescue the victims. In addition, people donated money, necessities, and even blood. Once divided by 1.3 billion, the heaviest burden can be shouldered.Therefore, I firmly believe that only if we are united, can we overcome any difficulty, however great it is.,
