1、开放作文写作,How to write an impressive open writing,A foreign boy,is eatingwith sweat on his face,noodles,The method of doing things,two forks,Describing and understanding,开放写作评分标准,描写图片,阐释理解,扣题,一档：,二档：,三档：,错误影响理解,一些错误，不影响理解,丰富的词汇， 多样的句式,1. It also waste time.,2. The boy like some people in our life.,3. I
2、f use one fork, he will get it.,2009年高考现场卷,there is a boy who wants to eat noodles, but what he takes are two knives. So he couldnt eat the noodles.,We are always doing something that may make no point to our goal,4,2009年高考现场卷,From the picture we could see a boy is eating noodles. He seemed so tired
3、 and hard to eat because he is using two fooks,They try their best to do something but in a wrong way, they will never reach their goal.,7,2009年高考现场卷,As we can see in the picture. A boy want to eat noodles with two forks, its very hard to do that and the boy is very worried.,The meaning of the pictu
4、re is clear and simple. In my opinion, we must choose the best way to do things. Some,9,As can be seen in the picture, with the sweat running down the face, a western boy is trying to eat noodles. However, he can hardly get any noodles, because he is using two forks as a pair of chopsticks. The cart
5、oon, in some aspects, shows a quite common phenomenon in life. Nowadays, many people tend to follow others without thinking when dealing with their work. They dont have their own ideas and simply copy what others do. In fact they forget that actually he has the ability to solve problems in his own w
6、ay.,Just like the boy in the picture, he uses forks as chopsticks only because Chinese people use chopsticks. He ignores that in fact he can use one fork to have delicious noodles. If we can create our own ways to solve problems, things will sure go much easier. To my understanding, we should think
7、about and handle the problems by ourselves, instead of following others without any thought. Only in this way can we do a better job and manage to “eat” what we want in life.,As can be seen in the picture, with the sweat running down the face, a western boy is trying to eat noodles. However, he can
8、hardly get any noodles, because he is using two forks as a pair of chopsticks The cartoon, in some aspects, shows a quite common phenomenon in life. Nowadays, many people tend to follow others without thinking when dealing with their work. They dont have their own ideas and simply copy what others d
9、o. In fact they forget that actually he has the ability to solve problems in his own way.,As can be seen in the picture,The cartoon, in some aspects, shows a quitecommon phenomenon in life.,描写简洁，与下文联系紧密,点明现象,Just like the boy in the picture, he uses forks as chopsticks only because Chinese people us
10、e chopsticks. He ignores that in fact he can use one fork to have delicious noodles. If we can create our own ways to solve problems, things will sure go much easier.To my understanding, we should think about and handle the problems by ourselves, instead of following others without any thought. (提炼观
11、点) Only in this way can we do a better job and manage to “eat” what we want in life.,Just like the boy in the picture,To my understanding,结合图片分析论述,结合实际提炼观点,开放写作评分标准,描写图片,阐释理解,扣题,一档：,二档：,三档：,错误影响理解,一些错误，不影响理解,丰富的词汇， 多样的句式,点明现象,结合图片,结合自我或实例，提炼观点,简洁相关,What? / Why?,Practise writing-understanding,What ca
12、n you see in the picture?What is the bird doing?What does the rain stand for?What do you think of the little bird and its action?,What?,Why?,( ) 1. I think what the picture is trying to convey is that children are becoming more and more mature in their early ages with abundant nutrition and complex
13、society.( ) 2. This picture conveys a message that faced with difficulty, we should not always withdraw but be brave enough to face it. ( ) 3. The picture tells us a truth-we couldnt rely on anyone except ourselves.,Reasonable or acceptable message,( )4. To my understanding, it tries to tell us that
14、 we teenagers, just like the bird described in the picture, should learn how to protect ourselves when facing accidents alone.( ) 5. Personally, I think the picture is really a good example to show the importance of independence when it comes to dealing with problems in life.( ) 6. This reflects a c
15、ommon phenomenon in our society. That is, parents are so busy and work so hard for their children, so we should love our parents.,( )7. The picture delivers a message that good preparation beforehand is the key to preventing us from being caught in a heavy “rain”.( ) 8. This picture mirrors a common
16、 phenomenon in our society that some parents protect their children too much.,As we can see in the picture, a little bird is holding an umbrella on its own to protect itself from the heavy rain. The picture wants to show us the importance of our teenagers independence. Now we are faced with a world
17、full of challenges as well as opportunities, independence plays a very important role in dealing with the problems, especially when you are alone. Just like the little bird in the picture, it will be certain to be caught in the heavy rain if it always tries to depend on its parents.,Possible version
18、,描写简洁，与下文联系紧密,阐释理解/立意,结合图片分析论述,As teenagers, isnt it time that we made our own bed in order; isnt it time that we did some housework for our parents; isnt it time that we shared some burden of life with our parents instead of just waiting for our parents help whenever some problems come about. So, m
19、y dear fellow classmates, hold your umbrella by yourself, and Im sure you will create a sunny world of your own even in the rainy day!,Possible version,结合自身(举例)具体论述,结合实际提炼观点,Thank you!,A foreign boy,With sweat on his face,two forks,noodles,is eating,The method of doing things,What are in the picture?,What is the boy doing?,why cant he get the noodles?,What does the forks stand for?,Why do you think he wants to use two forks?,
