1、Revising Essays 修改，润色你的作文,How to evaluate an essay？ 如何评价一篇作文？,Unity 完整，统一 Support 支持 Coherence 一致性 Sentence Skills 润色句子,Unity Support Coherence Sentence Skills,Unity 完整，统一,Advance a single point. 只阐述一个观点 Stick to that point. 直入主题 Make sure all sentences Are relevant. 确信每个句子都和主题有关,Unity Support Coher
2、ence Sentence Skills,Sticking to the Point,The Problems of Being Unemployed. No source of income Pleasures of having more free time Social pressures on the unemployedWhich of the above doesnt stick to the point?,Unity Support Coherence Sentence Skills,Support 支持，支撑,Give specific evidence to support
3、your topic sentence and thesis.给于特别的证据或是迹象来支持你的观点 Vivid details生动，清晰的细节,Unity Support Coherence Sentence Skills,Support,Which of the following provides better support?看一看哪个提供了更好的例子来支撑他们的观点,Unity Support Coherence Sentence Skills,Blaming others is another negative and unproductive way to cope with di
4、sappointment. The all-too-common response of pointing the finger at someone else doesnt help. This posture will only lead to anger, resentment, and further unhappiness. Disappointment in another persons performance doesnt indicate the performer is at fault. Perhaps expectations were too high or ther
5、e could have been a misunderstanding.,Unity Support Coherence Sentence Skills,The positive way to react to disappointment is to use it as a chance for growth. Helen, the women who wasnt promoted, could have handled her disappointment by looking at other options. If her boss doesnt recognize her tale
6、nt and hard work, perhaps she could transfer to another department. Or she could ask the boss how to improve her performance so that she could be a shoo-in for the next promotion.,Unity Support Coherence Sentence Skills,Support,Which provides better support? Why?,Unity Support Coherence Sentence Ski
7、lls,Coherence 统一性,Is the essay organized in a logical or clear way?Is the essay easy to follow? Does the author use transitional words to act as a guidepost 路标 for the reader?,Unity Support Coherence Sentence Skills,Coherence,Television makes children passive. Worst of all, TV presents a false pictu
8、re of reality that leaves viewers frustrated. Television discourages communication.,Unity Support Coherence Sentence Skills,Coherence,Watching T.V has the value of sheer relaxation. In addition to being relaxing, television is entertaining. Most important, television is educational.,Unity Support Co
9、herence Sentence Skills,Sentence Skills,Revising sentences 润色句子Formatting 格式化Run-ons and fragments,Unity Support Coherence Sentence Skills,Revising Essays,Unity- sticking to one point Support- specific details Coherence- organized logically? Flow? Sentence Skills- formatting, punctuation, spelling, sentence variety.,Activity: Revising Essays,
