1、写作技巧分析,2011-11-12,评判作文,总分106.5；42分最低限，只要结构不出错，得分应该为63分。 四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。 内容不跑题即可，注意：1.不要妄图以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。 结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。 语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。文字连贯，词语多样,百分制与710分制换算标准,字数不足扣分标准,备注：只写一段者：028.4分；只写两段者：063.9分,Writing-Book Two,4. Directions: For t
2、his part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Social Practice. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 大学生越来越重视参与社会实践 2. 社会实践对大学生学习和生活的影响 3. 如何正确看待社会实践,【范文】,Social PracticeSocial practice is a bridge between their theory and rea
3、lity. So, in recent years, more and more college students choose to take part-time jobs in or outside school.,【范文】,In the social practice, students are sure to learn more than their textbooks. Their participation in social practice might strengthen their sense of social responsibility. Their close c
4、ontact with the working people might help them to apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problem. But many teachers complain that there are fewer and fewer students who pay attention to their study.,【范文】,In my view, its an undenied fact that students break the balance between their j
5、obs and studies, especially when they fall into conflict. But I think students should spend their spare time taking part-time jobs. Timely participation in social practice will benefit them all through their life.,Writing-Book Two,5. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a c
6、omposition on the topic How to Keep Psychologically Healthy? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1.心理健康问题往往是导致疾病的原因 2.分析人们产生心理健康问题的原因（可从失业、压力过重、缺少支持、缺乏人际交往能力等方面加以分析） 3.你认为人们应如何保持心理健康,【范文】,How to Keep Psychologically Healthy?One in four people will exp
7、erience some kind of mental health problem in the course of a year. When you fail to manage these problems, they are likely to cause various mental illnesses.,【范文】,The causes of mental health problems often vary a lot from one case to another. In todays society, a good number of people are suffering
8、 from heavy pressure. Others lack communication skills. In addition, a lot of people are ignorant of psychological knowledge about how to keep mentally fit.,【范文】,There are a lot of ways to curb mental health problems and keep psychologically healthy. Firstly, find the real cause of your mental healt
9、h problem and see whether you can do something to make a change. Secondly, learn to relax yourself and take exercise to release the pressure. Lastly, you may find it helpful to talk to your partner or friend about your problem, or seek support and advice from a psychological consultant.,基本表达,人们认为：It
10、 is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that 越来越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of,万能理由（Omnipotence）,1. 方便：convenient/ convenience 2. 效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency 3. 节省和浪费：save time/ money/ space; economical, thriftwaste time/ money/ space; costly, lavish,4.
11、 人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive,considerate, confident, creative, sociable,perseverance; selfish, isolated, conserative 5. 人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic,6. 娱乐：colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainment, relax, tired, boring, lonely 7. 环境：environment, pollut
12、e, poisonous, dirty 8. 安全和危险：safe, danger, risk 9. 经验：experience, social experience, enter the society 10. 人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely,修改,注意：（内容方面尽量不要修改） 1、字母大小写 2、怪符号 3、单词拼写 4、主谓一致 5、动词时态 6、名词单复数,十二句作文法写作模板 一现象解释型写作模板 1 现象解释型模板一 1） Recently, .2） What amazes us most is . 3
13、) It is true that . 4 )There are many reasons explaining . 5)The main reason is . 6)What is more, . 7) Thirdly, . 8) As a result, .9) Considering all these, . 10) For one thing, . 11) For another, . 12) In conclusion, .,2 现象解释型模板二 1）As is know to all, .2 ） seem to get accustomed to . 3) In fact, . 4
14、)The reasons of lie in several aspects. 5)Firstly, 6)Secondly, . 7) Thirdly, . 8)Finally, .9 )As a matter of fact, . 10) On the one hand, . 11) On the other hand , . 12) Therefore, .,3 现象解释型模板三,1）Nowadays, . 2 ）For one thing . 3） For another . 4）It is obvious that .5）Many remarkable factors contribu
15、te to . 6）First of all, . 7） In addition, . 8） Thirdly, . 9）As to me, . 10） As we know, . 11） Besides, . 12） In a word, .,The Harm of PC Games （1) Recently, PC games have become very popular on campus. (2) What amazes us most is that many students often spend their evenings playing such games. (3) I
16、t is true that PC games can do much harm to us if we indulge in them. (4) There are many reasons explaining the harm of PC games. (5) The main reason is that playing PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time for our study. (6)What is more, those who play PC games day and nig
17、ht will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep. (7)Thirdly, most games are about violent and unhealthy contents. (8)As a result, we benefit less from PC games. (9)Considering all these, we should deal with PC games carefully. (10) For one thing, we shouldnt spend too much time, energy and m
18、oney on the games because study is our priority. (11)For another, we should try to learn something when playing them occasionally. (12)In conclusion, we should try to avoid the harm of PC games and live a more meaningful life. (170 Words).,The Harm of PC Games (1)As is known to all, nearly everyone
19、on campus has access to computers. (2)Students seem to get accustomed to playing PC games. (3) In fact, PC games can do much harm to us if we indulge ourselves in them. (4)The reasons of the PC games harm lie in several aspects. (5) Firstly, playing PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will
20、have little time for our study. (6)Secondly, those who play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep. (7) Thirdly, most games are about violent and unhealthy contents. (8)Finally, they cost us much money. (9)As a matter of fact, we can find best ways to deal with P
21、C games. ( 10)On the one hand, we shouldnt spend too much time, energy and money on the games because study is our priority. (11)On the other hand, we should try to learn something when playing them occasionally. (12)Therefore, its up to us to avoid the harm of PC games. (163Words),The Harm of PC Ga
22、mes(1)Nowadays, PC games have become very popular on campus. (2) For one thing, many students often spend their evenings playing such games. (3) For another, more and more Students indulge themselves in them. (4) It is obvious that PC games do much harm to us.(5) Many remarkable factors contribute t
23、o the harm of PC games. (6) First of all, playing PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time for our study. (7) In addition, those who play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep. (8) Thirdly, they cost us much money.(9)As to me, I only pl
24、ay PC games occasionally in summer or winter holidays. (10) As we know, study is our priority; we shouldnt spend too much time, energy and money on games. (11)Besides, many games are involved in violent and unhealthy contents. (12) In a word, we should try to avoid the harm of PC game. (156 Words),二
25、. 对比选择型Lectures and Discussions 1) 一些学生赞成讲座式教学 2）另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学 3）我的看法1. 对比选择型模板一 Topic (1)There is a heated debate over lectures and discussions . (2) It is commonly accepted that lectures can help students learn more quickly . (3)In contrast, others hold that discussions can stimulate students to le
26、arn by themselves . (4)Those who hold the first opinion suggest that students attend more lectures . (5)In their view, teachers help students master the knowledge which is accumulated by them in many years study and research . (6)However, others think that in a discussion, the teacher usually guides
27、 the students instead of dominating them . (7)They argue that involving in discussion , students have to develop their ability to analyze problems . (8)Considering one after another, I stand on the side of neither idea . (9)First of all, different methods have different disadvantages . (10)Furthermo
28、re, each student has his/her favorite . (11) Thirdly, lectures are preferable to discussions in the teaching of science and mathematics and on the contrary, discussion are preferable to lectures in the art and philosophy subjects. . (12)Therefore, we should adopt different teaching methods according
29、 to different subjects,对比选择型模板二 Topic,(1)Recently, we may hear quite different opinions about lectures and discussions . (2)Most people take it for granted that lectures can help students learn more quickly . (3)However, others hold that discussions can stimulate students to learn by themselves . (4
30、)A dominant idea is that attending a lecture can save more time . (5)In this opinion, teachers are passing on their knowledge which is accumulated by them in many years study and research to the students . (6)Nevertheless, the objectors think that a discussion may leave a deeper impression. . (7)The
31、y argue that involving in discussion , students have to develop their ability to analyze problems . (8)As to me, I prefer neither of the two extreme ideas . (9)On the one hand, different methods have different disadvantages . (10) On the other hand, each student has his/her favorite . (11)Therefore,
32、 neither method can be rejected while another is adopted . (12)In conclusion, we might adopt different teaching methods according to different subjects .,对比选择型模板三 Topic (1)Different people will offer quite different ideas . (2)Many people assert . (3)However, others believe . (4)Some may proclaim .(
33、5) They maintain such an idea because . (6)In contrast, the objectors think . (7)They argue that . (8)As far as I am concerned, I agree to . (9)First, . (10)Second, . (11) Last but not least, .(12) In a word, .,How to tackle the housing problem in big cities? 1.随着大量人口涌入城市， 城市的居住环境越来越拥挤； 2. 解决住房问题有哪些
34、不同方案？ 3. 我的看法。,三问题解决型模版 1问题解决型模版一 Topic How to Tackle the Housing Problem in Big Cities? (1)With the development of modern industry , people are flooding into big cities . (2)So it is of great importance for us to pay attention to the housing problem in overcrowded cities.(3) On the one hand, more a
35、nd more people are moving to big cities . (4)On the other hand, the limited urban area cannot house the increasing population . (5)However, we have figured out many ways to solve this problem .(6) Firstly, it is a good idea to build “satellite cities” in the suburbs of big cities. (7)So long as more
36、 satellite cities are built,people will be dispersed in a large area. (8)Secondly, the government should build more high-rise buildings to house more people. (9)Thirdly, the government should also offer a discount for low-income residents to buy their houses . (10)In fact, the housing problem is ver
37、y complicated . (11)That is because it involves in many other problems such as transportation, utilities, etc.(12) In a word, we should make further efforts to take all kinds of measures to tackle the housing problem in big cities .,2. 问题解决型模版二 Topic How to Tackle the Housing Problem in Big Cities?
38、(1)There has been a discussion recently about the housing problem in big ciies . (2)It is true to the present situation that people are flooding into big cities . (3)But cities cannot house the increasing population . (4)As is known to all, there are many ways to solve the housing problem. (5)First
39、of all, it is a good idea to build “satellite cities” in the suburbs of big cities . (6)Furthermore, the government should build more high-rise buildings to house more people. (7)Last but not least, the government should offer a discount for lower-income residents to buy their houses . (8)So it is h
40、igh time for us to tackle this problem with great efforts. (9)That is because it involves many other problems such as transportation, utilities, etc . (10)Secondly, the land in big cities is quite limited and expensive .(11) Thirdly, building more houses needs a sum of investment . (12) All in all,
41、we should make further efforts to tackle the housing problem in big cities.,3问题解决型模版三 Topic How to Tackle the Housing Problem in Big Cities? (1)Nowadays, there is a growing concern on the housing problem in big ciies . (2)It is certain that more ande more people rrom rural areas are flooding into bi
42、g cities . (3)However, cities can not offer enough houses for the increasing population. (4)It will cause many serious results if the housing problem is not well solved . (5)Firstly, the expensive rent for house will prevent people from flowing . (6) Secondly, people moved to big cities may spend mo
43、re time on finding a suitable house .(7)Finally, the environment may become worse for being overcrowded . (8)In spite of all these, there are still many ways to solve this problem. (9) First of all, its a good idea to build “satellite cities” in the suburbs of big cities.(10) In addition, the govern
44、ment should build more high-rise buildings.(11)Thirdly, the government should offer a discount for lower-income residents to buy their houses . (12) Only in this way, can we perfectly solve this problem.,Competition and Cooperation 1. 当今社会处处存在竞争 2. 竞争离不开合作，例如 3. 我的看法。,四观点论证型 观点论证型模版一 Topic Competiti
45、on and Cooperation (1)It is well-known that competition exists in every corner of the society . (2)The truth of it is self-evident.(3) No one can deny that the more developed the society is , the more fierce the competition is getting . (4)Therefore, competition will play an important role in future
46、 society. (5)Many examples can be found to prove that competition is not always contradictory to cooperation. (6)Take football game as a typical example. (7)People have to admit that each member of the team must cooperate with his teammates . (8)Furthermore, reluctance to cooperate with each other w
47、ill definitely cause a failure in a match . (9)It goes without saying that competition has much to do with cooperation . (10)Then, we should strengthen cooperation in a team work. (11)There is no doubt that most task are accomplished by a team spirit which is the guarantee of victory. (12)In conclus
48、ion, competition often goes hand in hand with cooperation .,观点论证型模版二 Competition and Cooperation It is believed that competition exists in every corner of the society . The truth is deep and profound. As we know, all members must strengthen the cooperation in the society to meet fierce challenges. C
49、onsequently, competition is not always contradictory. A case in point is the football game. This is close to suggest each member of the team must cooperate with his teammates. It is true that any reluctance to cooperate with each other will definitely cause a failure in a match . In addition, many h
50、uge tasks must be accomplished by team spirit which is the guarantee of victory. All mentioned above tells us that competition has much to do with the cooperation . As a matter of fact, we should strengthen cooperation in a team work. There is no denying that cooperation plays an important role in competition. In short, competition often goes hand in hand weit cooperation.,
