1、Writing in CET-4,Whats a good essay in CET-4? How to generate ideas? How to write a logical essay? How to write correctly?,四级作文评分标准,2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好
2、。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。,Can you grade these essays?,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Limiting the Use of Plastic Bags. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below,一次性塑料袋曾广为使用 由此带来的问题 限制使
3、用一次性塑料袋的意义,1-2分 2-14分 3-8分 4-11分 5-5分,Here is how they are graded in CET-4. Is your assessment correct?,主语缺失,1)In our country feels very free.2)In my hometown arent very busy.,词性混淆(非名词主语),1)Rich doesnt ensure a happy life. 2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.,多重谓语,1)In our modern society,
4、 there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated. 2)Poverty makes many people cant study abroad.,非动词谓语,1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it2)It is said that the place worths touring.,时态性数不配合,1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English.2)I use a disk be
5、cause it hold plenty of data.,代词偷梁换柱,1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.2)If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.,形容词副词混淆,1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look
6、 differently. 2)Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.,搭配不当,1). In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it.2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.,8 pointsWe all have such experience: after we went to the s
7、uper market, we always get some plastic bags. Even the disposable plastic bags pollute our environment, few of us can refuse to get plastic bags, because we are used use it.,With the flying developing of economic, the disposable plastic bags are more wide used. But our environment cant stand by the
8、heavy pollution. The disposable plastic bags will exist many years, maybe the plastic bags which you ever used would still be there when you have a grandson. So it not only effect our life but also hurt our afterspring.,So the government started to limit the use of plastic bags. This action is effec
9、tive that many people use paper or clothing bags instead of plastic bags. Although there are many plastic bags are used, I think after some years, we will feel the advantage that limiting the use of plastic bags bring to us.,历年四级作文题,作文常见提纲要求,2011.12 Nothing succeeds without a strong will 1. 坚强的意志是成功
10、的重要保证。 2. 意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命， 3. 学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才 2011.6 online shopping 1现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 2网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3我的建议 2010.12 How should parents help children to be independent？ 1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2. 为了让孩子独立，父母应该 2010.6 Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling 1 . 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2. 出现这种情况的原因 3. 为了改
11、变这种状况，我认为,作文常见提纲要求,问题/现象 原因 解决办法问题/现象 好处/坏处 我的观点,观点 举例 对自身的借鉴意义,第一类,问题/现象原因解决办法,2010.6 Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling1 . 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2. 出现这种情况的原因 3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为,问题/现象,In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate.Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/envir
12、onmental problem.XX has become a increasing concern of the public.,注意事项,万能公式的使用简洁明了适当拓展，如举例,原因,There are a couple of reasons accounting for this problem/phenomenon.First/Firstly Second/Secondly Third/Thirdly Last but not least,解决办法,To solve this problem, we need to Besides, Moreover例文writing四级作文样卷20
13、10-06四级作文2010-06四级作文14.JPG,第二类,问题/现象好处/坏处我的观点,2011.6 online shopping 1现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 2网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3我的建议,问题/现象,In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate.Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.XX has become a increasing concern of the public.,好处/
14、坏处,Some people are in favor of . They point out the fact that However, other people stand on a different ground.,example,Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumers, it can save time. Just with a click of the mouse, they can get whatever they
15、want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut down on the costs of renting a house or paying the staff However, there are still some defects about online shopping. First, compared with face-to-face transaction, online shopping is less reliable-consumers may find the products not as desir
16、able as they had expected. Second, some people may lose the fun of bargain.,我的观点,In my opinionFrom my perspectiveAs far as I am concerned I agree the first opinion/second opinion,第三类,观点举例对自 身的借鉴意义,2011.12 Nothing succeeds without a strong will 1. 坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。 2. 意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命， 3. 学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究
17、不会成为有用之才,Example,Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will“Where there is a will, there is way” is an old proverb which almost everyone knows, but not all understand it so well. Actually, it means that if you are really resolved to do something, no matter how difficult it might be, never give up.,In fa
18、ct, strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should own. One will never succeed without a firm will to get the final victory. As a rule, great tasks are accomplished by men of strong will. For example, Dr. Sun Yatsen, the founder of the Republic of China, set the Chinese people
19、free from the Manchurian rule through a long period of hard struggle. Many of his attempts failed and many of his followers were killed, but he had an inflexible spirit and stuck to his cause. Finally, he made the revolution of 1911 a success. The same is true of men in all walks of life.,From what
20、has been discussed above, we can see that tough determination is of great importance to everyone. As a student, with a strong will, we will be able to conquer any difficulty in our study and bravely face up to all failures in the course of our academic pursuit. As long as we stick to our dream and do not give up easily, we will realize the goal at last.,
