1、专题 19 去伪存真 短文改错一、One day when I was on my way to home from school, I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.Several minutes lately, the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire.With the help of the firefighters,a lot of peoples left the building safely.Su
2、dden a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters everything.But they cant understand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her that was happening.She told me that his daughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once.They immediately run into the building
3、 and rescued little girl.文章大意:本文主要讲述作者在回家的路上看到一栋建筑物着火了,打电话报警后,消防员很快扑灭了大火。但突然一名外国妇女跑来说她女儿还在建筑物里,但消防员们听不懂,最后,作者将这些告诉了消防员,他们救出了那个小女孩。答案:One day when I was on my way to home from school, I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.Several minutes , the firefighters arrived and tried
4、 their best to control the latelylaterfire.With the help of the firefighters,a lot of left the building safely. a peoplespeople Sudden Suddenlyforeign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters .But they everythingsomething cant couldntunderstand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her w
5、as happening.She told me thatwhatthat daughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once.They hisherimmediately into the building and rescued little girl.runran the4. 解析:考查副词。修饰句子要用副词,形容词 sudden的副词是 suddenly。5. 解析:根据句意:告诉消防员一些事情。用 something。6. 解析:考查动词时态。全文讲述的是过去的事情,用一般过去时态。二
6、、Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I take part in several days ago,I have a lot to share to you.Firstly,I feel real delighted that Ive won the first prize in the competition,which makes me to understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains,no gains”Besides,Ive establishe
7、d the friendship with students from all over our country,from which Ive learned a lot.More importantly, participate in this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public,thus developing my self-confidence.Additionally,I owe much thanks to my teachers and judges.Without his hel
8、p,I couldnt have done such excellent job.To sum up,I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experiences.文章大意:作者回顾自己参加英语演讲比赛后的一些体会。答案:Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I part in several days taketookago,I have a lot to share you.towithFirstly,I feel delighted that
9、Ive won the first prize in the competition,which realreallymakes me to understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains,no gains”Besides,Ive established the friendship with students from all over our country,from Ive learned whichwhoma lot.More importantly, in this competition has enabled me to
10、overcome my fear participateparticipatingof speaking in public,thus developing my selfconfidence.Additionally ,I owe thanks muchmanyto my teachers and judges.Without help,I couldnt have done such excellent job.histheir anTo sum up,I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable .experiencesexpe
11、rience1. 解析:考查时态。根据本句中的时间状语 several days ago可知用过去时,故 take改为 took。2. 解析:考查介词。此处为固定搭配:share with sb.和某人分享。3. 解析:考查副词。此处为副词修饰形容词 delighted,故用 really。4. 解析:考查动词。此处为 make的固定用法:make sb do sth:让某人做某事,故去掉 to。三、In my mind, I could never fancy how ten second of life could change a persons view for his whole e
12、xistence.A few years ago I experience the worst moment in my life.I was driving home that afternoon.Unfortunately,I didnt make it home as usually because I had a car accident.While I was driving,all of a sudden, but the car in front of me stopped.My car immediately ran into it.Luckily,I wasnt seriou
13、s hurt.That accident changed way I drive and they taught me a valuable lesson.I also came to the conclusion which life needs to be treasuring.答案:In my mind,I could never fancy how ten of life could change a persons view secondsecondshis whole existence.A few years ago I the worst moment in my life.I
14、 was foron/about experience experienceddriving home that afternoon.Unfortunately,I didnt make it home as because I had a usuallyusualcar accident.While I was driving,all of a sudden,but the car in front of me stopped.My car immediately ran into it.Luckily,I wasnt hurt.That accident changed way I ser
15、iousseriously thedrive and taught me a valuable lesson.I also came to the conclusion life needs to theyit which thatbe .treasuringtreasured1. 解析:句意:在我心中,我无法想象生活的十秒能怎样改变一个人对于他整个存在的观点。second表示“秒”是可数名词,前面有 ten修饰,故要用复数形式。故 second改为 seconds。2.解析:考查介词。表示某人关于某一事物的态度、观点,或者关于哪个方面的课题、论文、演讲等用 on 或 about。故 for改
16、为 on/ about。3. 解析:考查时态。句意:几年前我经历了生命中最困难的时刻。根据时间状语 a few years ago可知,用一般过去时,故 experience改为 experienced。 4. 解析:句意:我并没有按时回到家,因为我发生了一场车祸。本题考查词组 as usual,表示“像往常一样” 。故 usually改为 usual。8. 解析:考查代词。句意:那次事故改变了我开车的方法,它也给我上了宝贵的一课。这里用 it指代上文出现的名词单数 that accident,故 they改为 it。9. 解析:考查同位语从句。句意:我也得出了生命需要被珍视的结论。名词 th
17、e conclusion后接从句表示 the conclusion的内容,构造了同位语从句,引导词在句中只起连接作用,无意义,不作成分,故要用 that。10. 解析:句意:我也得出了生命需要被珍视的结论。根据句意可知,动词 treasure要用被动语态的形式,故 treasuring改为 treasured。四、When I was a kid,my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in the center of our city.Every day both my parent would take me to club
18、 after school.I played tennis,ate snacks and did my homework here.It was basically my second family.A woman whose name was Li Li,my first private coach,was as a mother to us.She not only taught me everything that I know about what to play tennis,but treats me well.She was kind or always trained me w
19、ith great patient.In my heart,she was the best coach in our city.文章大意:本文讲述了作者幼时的网球教练对于自己的帮助。爸爸妈妈让我参加了一个网球俱乐部,放学后我会在那里打球,吃饭和做作业。那里就像我的另一个家。我的教练对我很好,她不仅教我打球而且对我很好,在我心里她是我市最好的教练。答案:When I was a kid,my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in the center of our city.Every day both my would ta
20、ke me to club after school.I played parentparents thetennis,ate snacks and did my homework .It was basically my second family.A woman whose heretherename was Li Li,my first private coach,was a mother to .She not only taught me aslike us meeverything that I know about to play tennis,but me well.She w
21、as kind whathow treats treated or andalways trained me with great .In my heart,she was the best coach in our city.patientpatience1. 解析:考查谓语动词的语态。主语 my father and mother和谓语动词 made 之间是主动关系,表示“爸爸妈妈让我参加了一个网球俱乐部” ,所以去掉 were。6. 解析:考查代词。根据下文 She not only taught me everything 可知教练就像我的妈妈,所以用代词 me。7. 解析:考查疑问词
22、。根据本句表示“她教我怎样打网球” ,所以 what改为 how。8. 解析:考查谓语动词的时态。根据上文可知谓语动词用过去式 treated。9. 解析:考查连词。She was kind表示“她很和蔼” ; always trained me with great _patient_ 表示“她耐心的培训我” ,所以两句之间是并列关系,所以 or改为 and。10. 解析:考查词性。with 后用名词 patience,表示“耐心地” ,相当于副词 patiently。五、Last Sunday,I joined the voluntary group to help keep the tr
23、affic in good order at a big crossing near our school.At 800 am.,we arrived there,wore red vests with the word VOLUNTEER on the back.We helped with the police remind the passers-by to obey traffic rule.To our delighted,they all waited for the green light patient except one motor-biker.We also give o
24、ut some handmade brochures about traffic regulations,for that many people praised us.About 4 hours later,they said good-bye to the police and left.Tired as we were,we all felt an honor to do our parts.答案:Last Sunday, I joined voluntary group to help keep the traffic in good order at a theabig crossi
25、ng near our school.At 800 am.,we arrived there, red vests with the worewearingword VOLUNTEER on the back.We helped with the police remind the passers-by to obey traffic .To our ,they all waited for the green light except one motor-rulerules delighted delight patient patientlybiker.We also out some h
26、and-made brochures about traffic regulations,for many givegave that whichpeople praised us.About 4 hours later, said good-bye to the police and left.Tired as we theywewere,we all felt an honor to do our parts.it1. 解析:在全文中是第一次出现,不能用特指,而应用泛指。故将 the改为 a。六、One day a rich man took his son on a trip to th
27、e country in order to show his son if the poor lived,so he could be thankful to his wealth.They spent a couple of days and nights on the farm of that would be considered a very poor family.On their return back,the father asked his son to explain what he had learnt.The boy,who had remained silent and
28、 deep in thought on the journey home,replying in a way that shocked his father.The boy said he wanted to become farmer.He envied the farmers who had the beautiful night star to give them light while her family had only expensive lanterns.His wish was to have a farm where he could go swimming in an e
29、ndless river instead of the garden pool in their home.Finally the boy finished by saying, “Before the trip I thought we were rich but today I have learnt who is true rich.”With this,the boy got up and walked away,leaving his father sat on their comfortable sofa,totally speechless.文章大意:一天,一位富人为了让儿子对他
30、的财富充满“感激” ,便带着儿子来到乡村去体验农民的生活,没想到结果却令富人“无语” ,因为他的儿子想当农民。答案:One day a rich man took his son on a trip to the country in order to show his son the ifhowpoor lived,so he could be thankful his wealth.They spent a couple of days and nights on toforthe farm of would be considered a very poor family.On thei
31、r return back,the father thatwhatasked his son to explain what he had learnt.The boy,who had remained silent and deep in thought on the journey home, in a way that shocked his father.replyingrepliedThe boy said he wanted to become farmer.He envied the farmers who had the beautiful anight to give the
32、m light while family had only expensive lanterns.His wish was to starstars her hishave a farm where he could go swimming in an endless river instead of the garden pool in their home.Finally the boy finished by saying, “Before the trip I thought we were rich but today I have learnt who is rich.”truet
33、rulyWith this,the boy got up and walked away, leaving his father on their satsittingcomfortable sofa,totally speechless.3. 解析:考查连接代词。此处用来引导宾语从句,由于该从句中缺少主语,故用连接代词 what。4. 解析:考查 return的含义。由于 return“返回”相当于“go back/get back/come back”,即它本身就含有 back的意思,其后不能再跟 back;故去掉 return之后的 back。5. 解析:考查谓语动词。此处在句中作谓语,
34、根据上文可知,此处讲述的是发生在过去某一天的事情,应使用一般过去时;故用 replied。6. 解析:考查不定冠词。此处用来修饰单数名词 farmer,表示泛指一位农民,故在 farmer前加a。7. 解析:考查名词的单复数。此处指的是:许多美丽的夜星;由于 star为可数名词;故用 stars。8. 解析:考查人称代词。此处用来修饰名词 family,指代的是男孩的家;故用 his。9. 解析:考查副词。此处用来修饰形容词 rich,故用 truly。10. 解析:考查固定搭配。leave sb doing 指让某人保持某动作或状态,留下某人;此处指的是:男孩站起来走开了,留下了他的父亲坐在
35、他们舒适的沙发上,完全说不出话来;故用 sitting。七、Dear Chris,Im Li Ming,monitor of Class One,Senior One.Im glad to hear that you will come to our school as exchange student next term.I feel it an honor of us to study with you.Now I have something to tell you about.Firstly,with the climate changing,you should prepared e
36、nough clothes.Then there are different kind of foods and snacks which will give you a chance to experiencing rich Chinese food culture.In addition,every student is friendly to foreign friends,that will make it easy for you to get along good with them.Last but not least,we can do what we can to help
37、you,and you must get prepared to meet trouble.During your stay here,I hope you can tell us more about American culture.Only by understanding and learn from each other can we spend these days together happily.Yours,Li Ming.文章大意:短文为李明写给交换生 Chris的一封信,表示在他来我校交换期间会帮助他适应环境,以及互相学习。答案:Dear Chris,Im Li Ming,
38、monitor of Class One,Senior One.Im glad to hear that you will come to our school as exchange student next term.I feel it an honor us to study with you.Now I an of forhave something to tell you about.Firstly,with the climate changing,you should enough clothes.Then there are different of foods and sna
39、cks preparedprepare kind kindswhich will give you a chance to rich Chinese food culture.In addition,every experiencingexperiencestudent is friendly to foreign friends, will make it easy for you to get along thatwhich good wellwith them.Last but not least,we can do what we can to help you, you must g
40、et prepared andbutto meet trouble.During your stay here,I hope you can tell us more about American culture.Only by understanding and from each other can we spend these days together learnclearninghappily.5. 解析:考查名词的复数形式,kind“种类”是可数名词,表示“不同的种类” ,different 后接其复数形式。6. 解析:考查动词的用法,a chance to do sth.“做某事
41、的机会” ,to 为动词不定式,后接动词原形,因此使用 experience。7. 解析:考查定语从句引导词,考查非限制性定语从句的引导词,使用 which。8. 解析:考查固定搭配,表达“与某人相处融洽”使用动词短语 get along well with sb.,因此good改为 well。9. 解析:考查连词的用法,前后句子为转折的关系,and 为并列的关系,因此改为 but。10. 解析:考查动名词形式,此处 and连接两个并列的结构,by 后接动名词,因此 learn使用其动名词形式 learning。八、A survey (调查)has recently carried out a
42、mong the students in our school about whether they would like it if their parents gave birth to a second child.Opinions vary wide from one to another.Most of the students supported the idea.They think that it would be amazing to have a brother and a sister to keep the company and share secrets with.
43、Besides,we believe a second child would bring lots of funs to the family.However,the rest of the students interviewing hold the opposite view.To start with,raising one child is already a difficult thing and the parents would have to work twice as hard if they had a second child.Whats more,they argue
44、 whether they have been accustomed to enjoy the whole love from their parents.答案:A survey (调查)has recently carried out among the students in our school about beenwhether they would like it if their parents gave birth to a second child.Opinions vary from one to another.widewidelyMost of the students
45、the idea.They think that it would be amazing to have a supportedsupportbrother a sister to keep the company and share secrets with.Besides, believe a andor we theysecond child would bring lots of to the family.funsfunHowever,the rest of the students hold the opposite view.To start interviewinginterv
46、iewedwith,raising one child is already a difficult thing and the parents would have to work twice as hard if they had a second child.Whats more,they argue they have been whetherthataccustomed to the whole love from their parents.enjoyenjoying6. 解析:由句意得此处主语为 students,所以为 they。九、One day,little Tony we
47、nt to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him cr
48、ying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw parents.Mom said, “How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.文章大意:本文讲述了小男孩 Tony和父母上街购物,街上人多,Tony 没有告诉父母就独自进了一家商店,结果和父母走散,后来在街上又得以相见的故事。答案:One day,little Tony
49、went to a shopping center with his .It was very crowded.Tony parentparentssaw a toy a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the oninshop.After at the toy for some time,he turned around and found his lookslooking where that或 whereparents were missing.Tony was scared and to cry.A woman saw him crying and him begunbegan telling toldto wait outside shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw parents.Mom said, “How nice to athe hissee you again!Dad and I were worried.”Tony promised her that this would never terribleterriblyhappen agai