1、1作文是各类英语考试中得分较低的一种题型，究其原因，除了平时缺少练习之外，同学们还缺乏作文抓分技巧。同学们需要掌握一定的作文模板，除此之外，如果能在作文中设置一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定使你的作文如虎添翼。高分作文标志：1、是否长短句交叉；2、是否会使用插入语；3、用词是否多样、准确、形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观地反映事实。句子开头不要总是用 we / I (比如写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to 而用 Att
2、ention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾的例子，如 2004 年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作为插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如 howeve
3、r / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词、助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。举例如下： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等 )比如第一条的例子中，applicable 替换 proper; approaches 替换 ways; implement 替换 carry out; sharpen ones
4、competitive edge 替换 enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 。下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法，精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged
5、myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替换 very；（个人认为替换成 overwhelmingly 更出彩）thrilling 替换 exciting； sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 s
6、b. be interested in sth；google 替换 search； an army of 替换 a lot of。The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It i
7、s no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!2The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular；Coincident with 非常地道的句型，表达“ 与一致” 的意思，替换 With ；Advancement 替换 development；Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 e
8、nter into；Current ( currently )替换 now；Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.；Growing individuals 替换 more and more people；It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的。 （it goes without exaggeration that 更好）For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, o
9、ur knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with； We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法；our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will
10、be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动； Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides； Deliver 替换 send。 There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,*, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a fe
11、w net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先 There is no denying that 这个句型；其次however 作为插入语；再次，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to。 Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing )；Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词。
12、 （直接用 netizen 更好）As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin h
13、as two sides； Computers do play ，使用 do 表示强调； Positive 替换 important / good 等； A slice of 替换 a part of；Unfavorable 替换 bad； Impacts 替换 effects / influences； We should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入语； Fruits (而且 fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) ；Facet 替换 aspec
14、t。 3以下是 45 个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下:1.individuals,characters, folks 替换 people ,persons. 2.positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior 替换 good. 3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换 bad （如果 bad 做表语，可以有 be less impressive 替换。 ）eg.An
15、 army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of
16、, many, if not most 替换many. 注：用 many, if not most 一定要小心，many 后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用 most, if not all ,替换 most.5.a slice of, quiet a few 替换 some.6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universall
17、y acknowledged that 替换 think (因为是书面语，所以要加 that)。 7.affair ,business ,matter 替换 thing. 8.shared 代 common .9.reap huge fruits 替换 get many benefits. 10.for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion.11.Increasing(ly),growing 替换 more and more( 注意没有 growingly 这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用 increasing/growing.修饰形容
18、词，副词用 increasingly.)Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything 或 little or nothing 替换 hardly.13.beneficial, rewarding 替换 helpful. 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser 替换 customer.15.overwhelmingly,exceedingly,extremely, intense
19、ly 替换 very.16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替换 unnecessary, avoidable. 17.indispensable 替换 necessary18.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb take interest in / sb. be interested in. 19.capture ones attention 替换 attract ones attention.20.facet,demension,sphere 代 a
20、spect.21.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of 代 indicate, suggest ,fear.22.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换 cause.23. There are several reasons behind sth 替换reasons for sth.24.desire 替换 want.25.pour attention into 替换 pay attention to. 26.bear in mind that 替换 remember. 27. en
21、joy, possess 替换 have(注意 process 是过程的意思)。28. interaction 替换 communication.29.frown on sth 替换 be against , disagree with sth .430.to name only a few, as an example 替换 for example, for instance. 31. next to / virtually impossible 替换 nearly / almost impossible. 32.regarding/concerning 替换 about.33.crucia
22、l/paramount 替换 important. 34.第一（in the first place/the first and foremost）;第二（there is one more point ,I should touch on, that.）;第三（the last but not the least）.35. assiduous 替换 hard-working 36. arduous 替换 difficult 37.underdeveloped/financially-challenged 替换 poor（因为 poor 通常含有贬义）38. demonstrate /mani
23、fest 替换 show39. invariably 替换 always40. perilous/hazardous 替换 dangerous(写社会类作文时常用，说什么社会现象是不好的，有害的)41. formidable 替换 difficult42. quintessential 替换 typical（举例时常用，例如：a quintessential example should be cited that=for example; for instance）43. distinguished 替换 famous44. feasible 替换 possible45. consequen
24、tly, accordingly 替换 so希望大家能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点！常用连接词To Add: and, again, and then, besides, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, nor, too, next, lastly, whats more, moreover, in addition, first (second, etc.),To Compare: whereas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless,
25、on the other hand, on the contrary, by comparison, where, compared to, up against, balanced against, but, although, conversely, meanwhile, after all, in contrast, although this may be true To Prove: because, for, since, for the same reason, obviously, evidently, furthermore, moreover, besides, indee
26、d, in fact, in addition, in any case, that is5To Show Exception: yet, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, of course, once in a while, sometimesTo Show Time: immediately, thereafter, soon, after a few hours, finally, then, later, previously, formerly, first (second, etc.), next, and t
27、hen To Repeat in brief, as I have said, as I have noted, as has been noted,To Emphasize: definitely, extremely, obviously, in fact, indeed, in any case, absolutely, positively, naturally, surprisingly, always, forever, perennially, eternally, never, emphatically, unquestionably, without a doubt, cer
28、tainly, undeniably, without reservationTo Show Sequence: first, second, third, and so forth. A, B, C, and so forth. next, then, following this, at this time, now, at this point, after, afterward, subsequently, finally, consequently, previously, before this, simultaneously, concurrently, thus, theref
29、ore, hence, next, and then, soonTo Give an Example: for example, for instance, in this case, in another case, on this occasion, in this situation, take the case of, to demonstrate, to illustrate, as an illustration, To Summarize or Conclude：in brief, on the whole, summing up, to conclude, in conclus
30、ion, as I have shown, as I have said, hence, therefore, accordingly, thus, as a result, consequently, on the whole一、常用句型及单词 A. 开头 1、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: 6_. 2、_ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are ri
31、ght on their way. 3、Recently, _has been brought to such popular attention that _ (e.g. Recently, the problem of global warming has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the top of the agenda.). 4、One of our ancient philosophers said, _. Chinese people have
32、 always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality. 5. No one，regardless of race, religion or nationality, would deny that. 或：Everyone would agree that. B 结尾 1) Only in this way/Only when/Only through, will/can we或：It is only if/whenthat we will It is only if all sides of societ
33、y take their roles fully that we will achieve the society we want. 2) As long aswe will be able to/the problem is bound to As long as we persist in spreading scientific knowledge among the masses, all the superstitions are bound to go out of our life. 3) With a constant/steady improvement in (或 With
34、 the gradual worsening of) sth. will With a steady improvement in our legal system, this problem will sure be solved earlier or later. 4) In a word there is every/little chance/probability/possibility that.in time to come.A 7In one word, there is every chance that this Chinese traditon will continue
35、 to entertain millions of Chinese citizens. C. 中间 1建议和解决方法 1）. A great number of solutions are being offered. Some people suggest that _. Others argue that _. 2）. But I dont think it is a very good way to solve _. For instance, _. Worst of all, _. 3）. My suggestion to deal with/solve/relieve the pro
36、blem are as follows. In the first place,. Secondly,. Finally 4）. If we let the situation go as it is, . By that time, . 如果让这种情况继续发展下去，那么到那个时候，。 5） If, will there be anything that can make me even happier? 如果（我们怎么怎么做） ，那将没有比这令我更高兴的了。 2.It 结构 1） It is advisable to exercise（拥有）patience in dealing with
37、such complicated situations. 2） It is necessary that young and old people should communicate more with each other. 3） It is certain that fresh air and exercises are more enjoyable and beneficial than medicine. 4） It is well known that many of our problems are caused at least in part by failure to co
38、mmunicate. 5） It seemed to me that the only thing that matters is to learn through failure. 6） It pays in the long run （从长远的角度看）to introduce new technique. 3.动名词或分词结构 81） Drinking，eating ，and smoking excessively can do severe harm to even a young persons health. 2） The art of communication requires
39、learning the language and culture of the audience. 4.递进式结构 1） Fresh vegetables are nutritious（有营养的） ；furthermore，they re cheaper than frozen ones. 2） Helping others will not only bring joy into other peoples lives，but also added happiness into our own. 5.表示重要性或必要性 1） Its important to set aside time
40、for relaxation，hobbies ，and entertainment as well. 2） A harmonious atmosphere is essential（necessary / critical / indispensable）to achieve success. 3） Global warming can endanger our lives so much that we are obliged to make a careful study of the problem and try to find out a lasting solution to it
41、. 6.表示目的 1） The purpose of a test is to show what you have leaned about a subject. 2） The intent is not to catch everyone but rather to catch enough to spread the word. 3） Competitive sports are recommended to young adults to prepare them for the competitive world of college and business. 7.表示结果 1）
42、Too much work and too little rest may lead to loss of health. 2） If you try to learn too many things at a time，you may get confused. 3） By consistent hard work we will be able to achieved our objectives （目标）. 8.表示对比和比较 91） Jobs and work do much more than most of us realize to provide happiness and c
43、ontentment. 2） Work is more than a necessity for most human beings；it is the focus of their lives，the source of their identity and creativity. 3） Rather than a punishment or a burden，work is the opportunity to realize ones potential. 4） The more scientists find out，the more questions they are unable
44、 to answer. 9.表示条件或假设的结构 1） Without the distraction of TV，they might sit around together after dinner. 2） As long as the brain is given plenty of exercise it keeps its power. 3） Were it left to me to decide whether we should _, I should not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter. 4） Without a degree
45、 and with no vocational experience their chances of getting good jobs are slim. 10.表示举例 1） Take_for example， 2） An illustration（例证）may make the point clear. 11.表示采取措施 1） The government should be taking effective（有效的）measures to overcome current difficulties. 2） As college students, we are obliged to
46、 make every effort to help support the Olymic Games. 3） The school authorities should invest more energy and money in improving working and living conditions for the teachers. 12.表示让步关系 1） While it may be more convenient to possess a car，it is also expensive and 10troublesome at times. 2） Although I
47、 do not earn a great deal of money for this job，the pleasure I receive from the work makes it worthwhile. 13.表示因果或前提关系 1） Because of(owing to) the pressure（压力）of examinations， many students are left with little or no free time. 2） Perhaps its because few of us know how to accept compliments（赞扬）grace
48、fully. 3） That is why housework is considered as such a dreary grind（乏味的苦差事） 。 4） The reason for this is that 14.表示存在的问题 1）One of the greatest problems facing the 21st century will be what to do with all the rubbish produced in the world. 2） To travel abroad is a desire shared by many people，but few
49、 can afford to do it. 3） Cheating is now considered to be a major problem in colleges and universities. 4） Many people find it harder and harder to keep up with the radical changes that characterize our time. 5） At first thought， the problem seems far too involved （复杂） ，but it can certainly be solved when seriously dealt with . 15 There be 结构 1） There are other techniques that might help you with you studyi
