1、,Composition (CET 4),,评分标准,2分 调理不清，思想混乱，语言支离破碎或大 部分句子有错误 5分 基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性 差，有较多语言错误。 8分 基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。 11分 切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少 量语言错误。 14分 切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误。,,Basic Requirements,no less than 120 words Minus: 110-119 1100-109 290-99 3to complete within 30 minutes
2、clear and cleanformat : Intended Style or Block Style,,命题形式,提纲式 outline given图表式 chart given情景式 scene given,,命题形式: 提纲式,Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled My View on the Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidel
3、ines: 1.收入差距悬殊是当前社会的一种现象 2.人们对之褒贬不一 3.我的看法,,命题形式 ：图表式,Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below: 1.上图所示为1990年、1995年、2
4、000年某大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化； 2.请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明)； 3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。,,命题形式: 情景式,Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witness account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese
5、: 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此 写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点： 1、车祸发生的时间及地点 2、你所见到的车祸情况 3、你对车祸原因的分析,,写作步骤,1. 审题 2. 草拟提纲 3. 正文写作 * 1） 每段按一定句数创作, 保持整体结构平衡主要：45句 次要：23句2） 段落：总分（总）,文体 1）议论文 2）应用文 3）说明文,,Argumentation 议论文,,对立观点式 One,Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled My View o
6、n the Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: 1.收入差距悬殊是当前社会的一种现象 2.人们对之褒贬不一 3.我的看法,,Sample,Now the income gap is getting wider and wider. In some privately owned firms, joint-ventures, or foreign-funded companies , an executives yearly income is ten tim
7、es or even a hundred times as much as an ordinary workers.,1.收入差距悬殊是当前社会的一种现象,,Sample,Faced with this situation, people will undoubtedly have different opinions. Some believe that it benefits the social and economic development since driving force is often derived from the gap. In other words , the
8、gap inspires people and gives a push to advancement. Others speak of its side effect: income gap is often the root of social unrest and also contrary to our countrys principle.,2. 人们对之褒贬不一,观点原因,,Sample,From my point of view, while it is true that the income may stimulate the social development to so
9、me extent, it causes trouble as well. An income gap that is too wide for most people to bear can neither contribute to the stability of a country nor promote its economic development. Therefore , while we are advocating the rapid development of our country , we should tolerate the narrow income gap
10、and narrow the wide one.,3.我的看法,观点原因建议,,Homework 1,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled Should College Students Be Allowed to Get Married? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1、大学生是否可以结婚已经被讨论过很多 年； 2、对此社会上
11、也有不同的看法，有人赞成， 有人反对； 3、你的看法,,出现的问题,结构问题：主次不分次 主 主 语法问题 语言表达重复率高,,Should College Students Be Allowed to Get Married?,We cannot deny the fact that it is a heatedly debated topic whether college students should be allowed to marry.Different People have different opinions. Some stick to the positive side
12、 . However, others hold the opposite idea .,,From my point of view, while it is true that allowing college students to get married benefits them to some extent, I believed that it is better to forbid college students to get married ,,Homework 2,Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes t
13、o write a composition entitled Is It Good or Bad to Own Private Cars? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1、拥有私家车的人越来越多； 2、有些人支持，有些人反对； 3、你的看法,,出现的问题,时态 连词的使用because of + 句子even it + 名词 动词作为主语 e.g. Own a private car is good for people. 正确: Owning a priva
14、te car isTo own a private car is 词汇的误用question vs. problem,,批驳观点式,Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled Can Money Buy Happiness? You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: 1. 有些人认为金钱是万能的，金钱是幸福之本。 2. 我不同意这样的说法。,,批驳观点式,Many
15、 people argue that money is everything. By saying that, they mean the more money they have, the more happiness they will obtain. With money, one can buy whatever he enjoys. With money, one can do whatever he likes. So, in their minds, money can bring comfort, security, and so on. According to a surv
16、ey performed by social psychologists, each year, almost 5% of the government officials have been sentenced due to corruption and bribery. Money, as they think, is the source of happiness.,（45个句子） 1. 中心思想（扣题） 2. 具体例子、原因作为支撑观点 3. 小结,,批驳观点式,There might be some element of truth in these peoples belief.
17、But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that happiness is not something that can be measured by money. Even though money is necessary to life, it cant buy happiness. There are a number of reasons behind my belief.,（3个句子） 1. 在某个程度上同意正方意见。 2. 提出自己的观点 3. 一个过渡句，引出第三段的内容。,
18、,批驳观点式,Firstly, money is the root of all evil. Money drives people to steal, to rob, and to break the law. A lot of people became criminals just because they were in search of money. In addition, happiness is a state of mind. One can have plenty of money, with which he can buy whatever he wants, and
19、 at the same time he is not happy because he is never satisfied or he is troubled by various kinds of problems. Therefore, although money is necessary for a happy life, it cant buy happiness.,(4-5个句子） 1. 原因（注意逻辑性，简洁） 2. 总结（再次强调自己的观点）,,批驳观点式 Homework 1,Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled Does Good Luck Decide Ones Success? You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:1.有人认为好运气决定了一个人的成功。 2. 我不同意这个说法,
