1、如何在作文中写出闪光句型：作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！高分作文标志 1、是否长短句交叉；2、是否会使用插入语；3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项： 1. 适当用被动替换主动 ，这样能更客观的反映事实 , 句子开头不要总是用 we / I (比如写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to 而用 At
2、tention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾 2004 年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如 however /
3、 therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象 ，具体的替换太宽泛的。 (考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等 )比如上面例子 applicable 替换proper, approaches 替换 ways, implement 替换 carry out, sharpen ones compe
4、titive edge 替换 enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文(14 分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。 Computer and I By Simmy I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination
5、on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be
6、 interested in sth. google 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing numbers of individuals
7、. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular coincident with 非常地道的句型，表达 “与 一致” 的意思，替换 With advancement 替换 development pour into ( flood into / swarm into
8、)替换 enter into current ( currently )替换 now appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth. Growing numbers of individuals 替换 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be we
9、ll enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法 our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了
10、非常精彩的被动 Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides deliver 替换 send There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence , obscene, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen, which leads quiet a few net citizens to copy
11、ing. There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先 There is no denying that 这个句型，还有 however 作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm toEmerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing ) As a classic proverb goes that no garden has n
12、o weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides computers do play，do 强调 positive 替换 important / go
13、od 等 a slice of 替换 a part of unfavorable 替换 bad impacts 替换 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入语 fruits (而且 fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) facet 替换 aspect各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！ 以下是 30 个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。 1.individuals
14、,characters, folks 替换(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy ( 美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior 替换 good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换 bad 如果 bad 做表语，可以有 be less impressive 替换 eg. An army of college students indulge themselves
15、in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many。, if not most)替换 many. 注：用 many, if
16、not most 一定要小心，many 后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用 most, if not all, 替换 most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several 替换 some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替 think (
17、因为是书面语，所以要加 that) 7， affair ,business ,matter 替换 thing 8: shared 代 common 9.reap huge fruits 替换 get many benefits 10for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换 more and more( 注意没有 growingly 这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用 increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用 increasingly. Eg. sth has g
18、ained growing popularity. sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything, 或 little or nothing 替换 hardly13beneficial, rewarding 替换 helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换 customer15.exceedingly, extremely, intensely 替换 very16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitab
19、le . 替换 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb take interest in / sb. be interested in 18.capture ones attention 替换 attract ones attention.19.facet,demension,sphere 代 aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of 代 indicate, suggest
20、,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换 cause.22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换reasons for sth23.desire 替换 want.24.pour attention into 替换 pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替换 remember26. enjoy, possess 替换 have(注意 process 是过程的意思 )27. interaction 替换 communication28.frown on
21、sth 替换 be against , disagree with sth29.to name only a few, as an example 替换 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替换 nearly / almost impossible希望大家能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点！常用连接词To Add: and, again, and then, besides, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, nor, too
22、, next, lastly, whats more, moreover, in addition, first (second, etc.),To Compare: whereas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, on the other hand, on the contrary, by comparison, where, compared to, up against, balanced against, but, although, conversely, meanwhile, after all, in co
23、ntrast, although this may be true To Prove: because, for, since, for the same reason, obviously, evidently, furthermore, moreover, besides, indeed, in fact, in addition, in any case, that isTo Show Exception: yet, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, of course, once in a while, someti
24、mesTo Show Time: immediately, thereafter, soon, after a few hours, finally, then, later, previously, formerly, first (second, etc.), next, and then To Repeat: in brief, as I have said, as I have noted, as has been noted,To Emphasize: definitely, extremely, obviously, in fact, indeed, in any case, ab
25、solutely, positively, naturally, surprisingly, always, forever, perennially, eternally, never, emphatically, unquestionably, without a doubt, certainly, undeniably, without reservationTo Show Sequence: first, second, third, and so forth. A, B, C, and so forth. next, then, following this, at this tim
26、e, now, at this point, after, afterward, subsequently, finally, consequently, previously, before this, simultaneously, concurrently, thus, therefore, hence, next, and then, soonTo Give an Example: for example, for instance, in this case, in another case, on this occasion, in this situation, take the
27、 case of, to demonstrate, to illustrate, as an illustration, To Summarize or Conclude：in brief, on the whole, summing up, to conclude, in conclusion, as I have shown, as I have said, hence, therefore, accordingly, thus, as a result, consequently, on the whole一、常用句型及单词 A. 开头 1、There is an interesting
28、 and instructive picture which goes like this: _. 2、_ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way. 3、Recently, _has been brought to such popular attention that _ (e.g. Recently, the problem of global warming has been brought to such popu
29、lar attention that governments at all levels place it on the top of the agenda.). 4、One of our ancient philosophers said, _. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality. 5. No one，regardless of race, religion or nationality, would deny that. 或：Everyone
30、would agree that. B 结尾 1) Only in this way/Only when/Only through, will/can we或：It is only if/whenthat we will It is only if all sides of society take their roles fully that we will achieve the society we want. 2) As long aswe will be able to/the problem is bound to As long as we persist in spreadin
31、g scientific knowledge among the masses, all the superstitions are bound to go out of our life. 3) With a constant/steady improvement in (或 With the gradual worsening of) sth. will With a steady improvement in our legal system, this problem will sure be solved earlier or later. 4) In a word there is
32、 every/little chance/probability/possibility that.in time to come.In one word, there is every chance that this Chinese traditon will continue to entertain millions of Chinese citizens. C. 中间 1建议和解决方法 1）. A great number of solutions are being offered. Some people suggest that _. Others argue that _.
33、2）. But I dont think it is a very good way to solve _. For instance, _. Worst of all, _. 3）. My suggestion to deal with/solve/relieve the problem are as follows. In the first place,. Secondly,. Finally 4）. If we let the situation go as it is, . By that time, . 如果让这种情况继续发展下去，那么到那个时候，。 5） If, will the
34、re be anything that can make me even happier? 如果（我们怎么怎么做） ，那将没有比这令我更高兴的了。 2.It 结构 1） It is advisable to exercise（拥有）patience in dealing with such complicated situations. 2） It is necessary that young and old people should communicate more with each other. 3） It is certain that fresh air and exercise
35、s are more enjoyable and beneficial than medicine. 4） It is well known that many of our problems are caused at least in part by failure to communicate. 5） It seemed to me that the only thing that matters is to learn through failure. 6） It pays in the long run （从长远的角度看）to introduce new technique. 3.动
36、名词或分词结构 1） Drinking, eating and smoking excessively can do severe harm to even a young persons health. 2） The art of communication requires learning the language and culture of the audience. 4.递进式结构 1） Fresh vegetables are nutritious（有营养的） ；furthermore，they re cheaper than frozen ones. 2） Helping ot
37、hers will not only bring joy into other peoples lives，but also added happiness into our own. 5.表示重要性或必要性 1） Its important to set aside time for relaxation，hobbies ，and entertainment as well. 2） A harmonious atmosphere is essential（necessary / critical / indispensable）to achieve success. 3） Global wa
38、rming can endanger our lives so much that we are obliged to make a careful study of the problem and try to find out a lasting solution to it. 6.表示目的 1） The purpose of a test is to show what you have leaned about a subject. 2） The intent is not to catch everyone but rather to catch enough to spread t
39、he word. 3） Competitive sports are recommended to young adults to prepare them for the competitive world of college and business. 7.表示结果 1） Too much work and too little rest may lead to loss of health. 2） If you try to learn too many things at a time，you may get confused. 3） By consistent hard work
40、we will be able to achieved our objectives （目标）.8.表示对比和比较 1） Jobs and work do much more than most of us realize to provide happiness and contentment. 2） Work is more than a necessity for most human beings；it is the focus of their lives，the source of their identity and creativity. 3） Rather than a pu
41、nishment or a burden，work is the opportunity to realize ones potential. 4） The more scientists find out，the more questions they are unable to answer. 9.表示条件或假设的结构 1） Without the distraction of TV，they might sit around together after dinner. 2） As long as the brain is given plenty of exercise it keep
42、s its power. 3） Were it left to me to decide whether we should _, I should not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter. 4） Without a degree and with no vocational experience their chances of getting good jobs are slim. 10.表示举例 1） Take _ for example， 2） An illustration（例证）may make the point clear. 11.
43、表示采取措施 1） The government should be taking effective（有效的）measures to overcome current difficulties. 2） As college students, we are obliged to make every effort to help support the Olympic Games. 3） The school authorities should invest more energy and money in improving working and living conditions f
44、or the teachers. 12.表示让步关系 1） While it may be more convenient to possess a car，it is also expensive and troublesome at times. 2） Although I do not earn a great deal of money for this job，the pleasure I receive from the work makes it worthwhile. 13.表示因果或前提关系 1） Because of(owing to) the pressure（压力）of
45、 examinations， many students are left with little or no free time. 2） Perhaps its because few of us know how to accept compliments（赞扬）gracefully. 3） That is why housework is considered as such a dreary grind（乏味的苦差事） 。 4） The reason for this is that 14.表示存在的问题 1）One of the greatest problems facing th
46、e 21st century will be what to do with all the rubbish produced in the world. 2） To travel abroad is a desire shared by many people，but few can afford to do it. 3） Cheating is now considered to be a major problem in colleges and universities. 4） Many people find it harder and harder to keep up with
47、the radical changes that characterize our time. 5） At first thought， the problem seems far too involved （复杂） ，but it can certainly be solved when seriously dealt with . 15 There be 结构 1） There are other techniques that might help you with you studying. 2） There is much that we can learn from the Chi
48、nese classic works. 3） There is no sense（道理）in leaving important decisions to inexperienced people. 精彩废话万能句 The rapid progress in science and technology has given a powerful shove-ahead to the productive forces of the world and the economic and social development of humanity. 科技的快速发展带给世界生产力和人类经济和社会的
49、发展一个强劲的推动力 can help one stand tall and aim far, broaden ones vision and give full play to ones intelligence and wisdom on the broad arena of the modernization drive. 站的高看的远,开扩自己的视野,在现代化建设的大舞台上充分发挥个人才智 Lets join hands and work together to contribute a greater part to the harmony of our society. 让我们携手共同奋斗，为建设和谐社会作出更大的贡献！ Famous scientist Marie Curie once said,” Nothing in life is to
