1、书面表达篇,-如何提高书面表 达的档次,Xuzhou Senior Middle School胡波,暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。,注意：1.短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：眼界horizon(或view),How to write?,Step1 Read the titleStep2 Confirm the tenseStep3 Pay attention to the subjectStep4 Find out some important phra
2、sesStep5 Analyze the structure,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少。,使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,避免出现较多的错误可以使文章连贯流畅。,Recently our class a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided. one hand, some students like at home , because it will s
3、ave a lot of money. Also, at home is and and can avoid many diseases. But the bad things are students unable to know the world by themselves. They wont have chances to the other hand, students support out for traveling. Because it will help them learn knowledge they dont know before and ,also, can m
4、ake some new friends from different places. But it will cost much money and the journey may not be convenient. In my opinion, point has its good things and bad things. How to choose should depend on the .But I will stay at home as we all so busy in daily life. ,had,have had,In,On the,to stay,staying
5、,stay,staying,confortable,comfortable,convenience,convenient,that,will,are,In,On,Some,some,go,to go,it,make their horizon larger,broaden their horizon,They,they,Each,each,Situtions,situations,are,build more,stronger body.,build up their strength,not go out,Instead of going out,Recently our class hav
6、e had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided.On the one hand, some students like staying at home instead of going out, because it will save a lot of money .Also, staying at home is comfortable and convenient and can avoid many diseases.
7、 But the bad things are that students are unable to know the world by themselves. They wont have chances to build up their strength. On the other hand, some students support to go out for traveling. Because it will help them learn knowledge they dont know before and broaden their horizon, also, they
8、 can make some new friends from different places. But it will cost much money and the journey may not be convenient.In my opinion, each point has its good things and bad things. How to choose should depend on the situations. But I will stay at home as we are all so busy in daily life.,一.减少常见错误的出现,错误
9、类型一：Chinglish(汉式英语)错误不少考生在写英语书面表达时易受汉语习惯的影响，所写句子虽然语法正确，却不符合英语表达习惯。误：Stay at home is comfortable and convenient. 正：Staying at home is comfortable and convenient. 误：They wont have chances to build a more stronger body. 正：They wont have chances to build up their strength.,书面表达常见错误类型,错误类型二：句子不完整或结构错误一个句
10、子至少包括主语和谓语两部分，如果把句子的某一部分当成一个句子，就会导致非完整句子。误：But the bad things are students are unable to know the world by themselves .正：But the bad things are that students are unable to know the world by themselves .,书面表达常见错误类型,错误类型三：重复累赘有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不能再出现某一单词，而学生基本功不够扎实，常常出现累赘现象。误：Because it will help t
11、hem learn knowledge they dont know it before. 正：Because it will help them learn knowledge they dont know before .,书面表达常见错误类型,错误类型四：句子缺乏逻辑性或连贯性一个句子必须表达一个完整，前后语意一致的意思。如果把不相干的意思放在同一个句子里或一个句子表达不完整，就会出现逻辑问题。,书面表达常见错误类型,错误类型五：语法，词法错误许多考生在写作中易犯关系不一致，词性混用，选词或搭配不当，时态语态错误，指代不清，语序不当等方面错误。误： Recently our class
12、had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. 正：Recently our class have had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday.,书面表达常见错误类型,错误类型六：拼写错误及误用标点符号考生出现单词拼写错误的原因：一是以内发音错误导致拼写错误，二是因为不知道动词的不规则变化所导致的。 误： How to choose should depend on th
13、e situtions. 正：How to choose should depend on the situations.,Recently our class have had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided.On the one hand, some students like staying at home instead of going out, because it will save a lot of mon
14、ey .Also, staying at home is comfortable and convenient and can avoid many diseases. But the bad things are that students are unable to know the world by themselves. They wont have chances to build up their strength. On the other hand, some students support to go out for traveling. Because it will h
15、elp them learn knowledge they dont know before and broaden their horizon, also, they can make some new friends from different places. But it will cost much money and the journey may not be convenient.In my opinion, each point has its good things and bad things. How to choose should depend on the sit
16、uations. But I will stay at home as we are all so busy in daily life.,1.We all think he is a great man.2.Suddenly I thought a good idea.3.The students there neednt pay for their books.4. So the plan was a failure.,The plan turned out to be a failure.,二、怎样使用较高级的词汇,We all think highly of him .,A good
17、idea occurred to me.,/ A good idea suddenly struck me.,Books are free for the students there.,1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）. 2. He surprises that the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句)4. He did not know what had happene
18、d until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型),On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,三、怎样使用较丰富的句式,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,四、
19、使用恰当的连接词,first, second, then, finally/at last , soon immediately, suddenly,时间顺序,空间顺序,here, there, on one sideon the other side, in front of, at the back of, next to,转折顺序,but, however, while, though, otherwise,因果顺序,because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of),条件顺序,as long as, so long as, on condit
20、ion that, if, unless,让步顺序,though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what, when, where )ever,递进顺序,whats more, besides, to make the matter worse, whats worse,过渡性插入语,I think, Im afraid, you know, As we all know,Rewrite these sentences,1. Some students like staying at home instead of going out, because
21、it will save a lot of money.2. Staying at home is comfortable and convenient and can avoid many diseases.3.On the other hand, some students support to go out for traveling. Because it will help them4.But I will stay at home as we are all so busy in daily life. (accompany),Some students prefer to sta
22、y at home rather than go out, because it will save a lot of money.,Staying at home is both comfortable and convenient ,whats more, it can avoid spreading many diseases.,On the other hand, some students are in favor of going out for traveling, which will help them,But it would be much better to stay
23、at home accompanying my parents as we are all so busy in daily life.,Recently our class have had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided.On the one hand, some students prefer to stay at home rather than go out, because it will save a lot
24、 of money .Also, staying at home is both comfortable and convenient, whats more, it can avoid spreading various diseases. But the shortcomings are that students are unable to realize the outside world by themselves and they wont have chances to build up their strength. On the other hand, some studen
25、ts are in favor of going out for traveling, which will help them learn knowledge they dont know before and broaden their horizon, also, they can make some new friends from different places. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.In my opinion, each point has its st
26、rength and weakness. How to choose should depend on the situations. But it would be much better to stay at home accompanying my parents as we are all so busy in daily life.,增强书面表达效果的技巧,1. 减少常见错误的出现 2. 使用较高级的词汇 3. 使用较丰富的句式 4. 使用恰当的连接词,Homework据报道，2008年北京奥运会将选拔约十万志愿者为之服务。请你以“Dos and Donts for the 2008
27、 Olympic Volunteers”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讨论志愿者应该做什么，不应做什么。短文包括下表中的内容,如果你成为志愿者，你还应该做什么，不应该做什么。 （内容由考生自己拟定）,Thank you！,Recently our class a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided. one hand, some students like at home , because it will save a lot of
28、money. Also, at home is and and can avoid spreading many diseases. But the shortcomings are students unable to realize the outside world by themselves and that they wont have chances to . the other hand, students support out for traveling. Because it will help them learn knowledge they dont know bef
29、ore and ,also, can make some new friends from different places. But it will cost much money and the journey may not be convenient. In my opinion, point has its strength and weakness. How to choose should depend on the practical . But I will stay at home and accompany my parents as we all so busy in
30、daily life. ,had,have had,In,On the,to stay,staying,stay,staying,comfortable,convenience,convenient,that,will,are,In,On,some,go,to go,it,make their horizon larger,broaden their horizon,They,Each,each,situtions,situations,are,build more ,stronger body,build up their strength,not go out,Instead of goi
31、ng out,Recently our class have had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided.On the one hand, some students like staying at home instead of going out, because it will save a lot of money .Also, staying at home is comfortable and convenient
32、 and can avoid spreading various diseases. But the shortcomings are that students are unable to realize the outside world by themselves and they wont have chances to build up their strength. On the other hand, some students support to go out for traveling. Because it will help them learn knowledge t
33、hey dont know before and broaden their horizon, also, they can make some new friends from different places. But it will cost much money and the journey may not be convenient.In my opinion, each point has its strength and weakness. How to choose should depend on the practical situations. But I will s
34、tay at home and accompany my parents as we are all so busy in daily life.,Recently our class have had a meeting to discuss the plans students made for the coming summer holiday. Their opinions are divided.On the one hand, some students prefer to stay at home rather than go out, because it will save
35、a lot of money .Also, staying at home is both comfortable and convenient, whats more, it can avoid spreading various diseases. But the shortcomings are that students are unable to realize the outside world by themselves and they wont have chances to build up their strength. On the other hand, some s
36、tudents are in favor of going out for traveling, which will help them learn knowledge they dont know before and broaden their horizon, also, they can make some new friends from different places. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.In my opinion, each point has its strength and weakness. How to choose should depend on the practical situations. But it would be much better to stay at home accompanying my parents as we are all so busy in daily life.,
