1、备 战 2012 年 高 考,英语书面表达第五档要求,Welcome,Writing,NMET书面表达第五档要求,1. 覆盖所有的语言要点。 内容要点可用不同 方式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 2. 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性。值得注意的是 语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误, 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致; 具有较强的语言运用能力。,1.汉语式英语2.句式单一 ,平铺直叙3.无过渡语,Common mistakes in writing,1,如何在写作中避免句式单一,Rewrite the sentences,1.They arrived at the school. T
2、hey felt the happy atmosphere.2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard.,方法一. 使用非谓语动词或从句使句子简洁高档,When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.,Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.,If I am given another c
3、hance, I will succeed.,Given another chance, I will succeed.,In order to improve his English, he studies hard.,使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动词) 1.听到这个消息,他们变的很激动._the news, they got excited. 2.尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错._many times, he still repeated the mistake.3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会
4、议上保持沉默.Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.,Hearing,Having been told,invited,Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate (非谓语动词),1.面对困难时，他从不放弃。2.引入市场后，该产品大获成功。3.做完作业后，他回家了。,Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up.,Introduced to the market, the product made
5、a great success.,Having finished his homework, he returned home.,方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,he returned home did he realize his foolishness.,by changing the way we live can we save the earth.,Clever he is, he does not work hard.,stands the clock tower.,巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,Translate the sentences by using Invert
6、ed Sentences (倒装句). 1. 他从不说关于他家庭的事。2. 只有我们每个人都意识到水的重要性, 我们才能生活得更好。3.只有用这种方式, 我们才能有足够的精力好好学习。,Never did he speak about his own family.,Only when each of us realizes the importance of water, can we live a better life.,Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.,巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,Describe
7、the character by using Inverted Sentence(倒装句).,Poor as/though he was, he was happy.,巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,4.他是个孩子，却知道很多。5.墙上有个通知，上面写着“请节约用水”。,Child as/though he is, he knows a lot.,On the wall is a notice saying “Please Save Water”.,Use different ways to describe the picture.,方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式,一 就受到欢迎,As soon
8、 as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed . On arriving at the airport , Lien Chan and his wife Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport. No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were
9、Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were ,尝试多样化表达方式,In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast. All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful. _which_With the development of _ _ _so _ that_ _,In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very
10、fast,makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant,Beijing, peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful.,Nowadays, Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful.,我校是一所县重点中学，位于张掖西部。校园很美,绿树成荫。,West of ZhangYe lies our school, whic
11、h is a key school of SuNan county. It is beautiful, surrounded with many trees.,Translate the sentences:,句式多样 文章增“靓”,一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,二. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力,三. 尝试多样化表达方式,书面表达:假如明天是植树节，请以学生会的名义在黑板上发出通知。 要点提示:,要求:同学们穿靴子和工作服，带好铁锹、水桶及树苗。结束后，写出心得。注意：1.注意通知类型和格式；2.铁锹spade 桶bucket,1.活动内容：植树活动； 2.对象：全体学生； 3.地点：南湾湖
12、畔； 4.时间：明天上午8：0011：00,Notice March 11Tomorrow is Tree Planting Day. Our school decides that we are going to celebrate it by planting trees along the Nan wan Lake from 8:00 to 11:00 tomorrow morning. Every class committee is required to organize the activity and tell the students to wear their boots
13、and jeans for it will be dirty While working on the work site. We students should take our spade and buckets and work in groups. All we students are required to take part in it. After the activity ,all we students are required to write an article about it. Student Union,Assignment,Please finish the composition after class.,Practice makes perfect.,
