1、漫画作文练习,1.就业类 2.品质类(勤俭),漫画作文练习,Direction:Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning and3) give your comments.,漫画作文练习,文章布局,(一)介绍背景段： 失业人群巨大，暗示再就业十分必要 (二)论证分析段： 失业人群的现状，再就业的重大意义 (三)个人评价段： 如何让中国的
2、就业状况稳定发展,第一段,介绍背景 描述图片 介绍文字 过渡,第一段,介绍背景在这样一个激烈竞争的社会，很多人处于失业的状态In a world moving on the wheels of fierce competition, many employees have lost their jobs.,第一段,描述图片如图所示，一个求职者正站在梯子旁边，期待着自己能找到一份新的工作，梯子能帮他进入再就业的碗里As is illustrated in the sketch, an applicant is standing beside a ladder, expecting to find
3、 a new job/saying wonderful, with the ladder helping him.,第一段,文字描述在图片的中间的碗上写着中文汉字：再就业 In the middle of the cartoon lie some Chinese characters reading: re-employment.,第一段,过渡尽管图片很简单，但却生动显示出下岗员工对于再就业的渴望Despite its simplicity, it vividly reveals the desire of being employed again from the bottom of the
4、 laid-off workers heart.,第二段,(主题句)：再就业 列举因素 举例论证 本体喻体,第二段,(主题句) 毫无疑问，大量的待业状态不利于社会稳定 Undoubtedly, the existence of large number of unemployment is adverse to the social stability. Undoubtedly, finding a job/employment, exerts a profound impact on both the unemployed and the whole society.,第二段,2. 列举因素
5、(原因结果) 由于缺乏职业技能或者其他原因，有些员工被解雇 Owing to the lack of professional skills or the like, many employees were fired.,第二段,2. 列举因素(普遍特殊) 更糟糕的是，越来越多大学生刚刚毕业就面临失业 Even worse，college graduates in growing number are in times of the unemployment just after leaving school.,第二段,3. 举例论证(普遍示例) 很多学生找工作有难度，从而出国或者考研就是一个
6、例子 A case in point is that having difficulty in finding jobs, many undergraduates go abroad or further their study.,第二段,2. 列举因素(透析本质/原因结果) 并非为了事业上的成就感，很多人工作是为了生活下去.因此，帮助这些人再就业非常重要。 Rather than for the sense of accomplishment in career, many people work just to make a living. Hence, it is quite vital
7、 to help them find a job again.,第二段,4. 本体喻体 图片中的碗代表中工作机会，很多求职者想要进入那个碗 The bowl in the drawing epitomizes job opportunities, into which many applicants make every effort to get.,第三段,客观评价/个人评价 提出建议 展望未来,第三段,1. 客观评价 如果高失业率持续下去，整个国家经济和稳定将受到影响 Were the high unemployment rate to continue, the countrys eco
8、nomy and stability would be badly affected.,第三段,1. 客观评价 情况如此严重，国家发改委还有很长的一段路要走 The present situation being so critical, the National Development and Reform Commission still have a long way to go.,第三段,1. 客观评价 总之，有必要扭转低就业率的趋势 By and large, it is rather imperative to reverse this disturbing low employm
9、ent rate trend.,第三段,1. 个人评价 如果让我评论, 我将会极力支持对于失业人群的帮助 Were it left to me to comment, I would be strongly in favor of helping the unemployed find a job.,第三段,2.(提问) 我们应该如何解决整个问题？ How should we address this problem?,第三段,3.提出建议 首先，只有政府投入更多的资金才能缓解就业压力 Initially, only by pouring more investment form the go
10、vernment can the employment pressure be relieved.,第三段,3.提出建议 其次，待业者应该自己想办法去找到一份工作养活自己 Secondly, the ones who are in need of a job should strive for finding a job to support themselves.,第三段,4.展望未来 如果这些措施被采取，那么社会稳定和高就业率将不再遥远 With all these measures adopted, the prospect of social stability and high employment rate will be far from dim.,漫画作文练习,勤俭，节约 thrifty，frugal,
