1、智课网 TOEFL备考资料托福满分范文讲解之四摘要： 今天小马的名师为大家解读这样一篇文章：Students can benefit from student organizations and club activities as much as their academic studies.Students can benefit from student organizations and club activities as much as their academic studies.这是小马托福里“ 记忆复写” 板块的第四题。今天就带着大家一起来分析，解析，赏析一下这篇范文，保证大
2、家都能掌握得棒棒哒Since the government spares no efforts to promote “quality education” that zeros in on students all-around development, students nowadays no longer remain academic-centered or exam-oriented. Instead, they are exposed to various student organizations and club activities. This transformation
3、divides onlookers into two basic camps with opposite views: some people are in favor of the previous system while others support the recent change. Personally, I am a big fan of “quality education,” and I am totally in agreement with students participation in extra-curricular activities. My reasons
4、are as follows.如果经过了前三道记忆复写题目的练习，相信大家已经开始熟悉背景争议式的开头的写作法了，我们来再巩固一下这个开头思路：“背景引入+争议引出话题+ 个人观点”。这个由大到小的切入角度，不仅非常有逻辑地展现出文章的introduction，而且能帮助我们快速构思出开头，从而节约宝贵时间去写主要观点，可谓“开头神器”，大家一定要好好通过接下来的复写练习，做到熟练精通。根据标红的部分，大家还可以举一反三，整理出一个属于自己的个性化开头，从此告别网上千篇一律的开头“with the development of the society”，瞬间抓住判官眼球有木有。此外，里面的一个
5、词zeros in on，中文意思是“ 全神贯注于某问题或主题 ”， 这个词绝对让那些什么pay attention to，focus on顿时“六宫粉黛无颜色”了;So, 不要再跟写作老师抱怨自己没有高大上的词了，在复写练习里，各位可以信手拈来各种亮瞎ETS钛合金狗眼的词句;第一个观点：参加各种社团和活动的学生可以培养那些学术以外的能力，比如说领导力，交流能力或执行力，而这些能力对未来职业发展至关重要;Firstly, students taking part in organizations or club activities can develop non-academic capab
6、ilities such as leadership, communication or execution, which are crucial for the future. It is because no matter what kind of student organisation or club it is, the goal is always to achieve something with the cooperation of all members. During the process, there must be leaders who organize activ
7、ities, give orders, or assign workload and members who should communicate with each other timely to ensure that everything goes smoothly. I remember that I used to be the leader of an English speaking society in college, and I successfully organized several large-scale speaking contests. The capabil
8、ity acquired through those activities laid a foundation for my future work.在这里，我们看到了托福写作最精髓的要求，就是细节，就是details, 如果你还在发愁写作没话说，重复说，空泛说，那就赶紧把这几个短语整理成固定的细节展开，以后只要在提到某个任务，或者某种能力的培养的时候，我们就可以具体地说，“组织活动，发布指令，分配任务，相互交流从而确保万无一”;有了这么好的细节支撑，还怕不够字数，或者语言空泛么!第二个观点：学生机构和社团是大家广交朋友的地方，从而为校园生活添彩;In addition, student or
9、ganizations and clubs are the places where we can make great friends, which spices up the tedious campus life. A certain type of student organization or club is like a group or circle that appeals to people with similar hobbies or interests, and that is the reason why one can find his or her congeni
10、al friends in the club more often than not. For example, people who love taking photos will join the photography club, and movie-goers are always taking part in movie salons and exchanging mutual ideas and thoughts on the same movie. Undoubtedly, being together with people having the shared aspirati
11、ons and enthusiasm is the source of happiness.大家再来看这一段，一大波高大上的词来袭，大家准备接招! 首先spice up，强调“给生活增添趣味”;我们总是会写到，做一个事情或某个事物让我们的生活变得更有趣了，大家回去扪心自问一下，脱口而出的是不是make something interesting? 那现在我们可以看看下面的造句：Open-air dance with friends spices up the old ladys life. 广场舞让大妈的生活多姿多彩;第二个congenial, 可能很多筒子还不太熟悉这个词，但是它的中文意思，
12、绝对是写作里高频出现的，就是：“志同道合”; 原来我们可以这么轻松地就把这个成语用英文表达出来了，所以妈妈再也不用担心我的学习，大家以后就可以说，自从用了小马考托神器，认识了很多同样在与托福抗争的congenial friends; 最后这个词，简直是逆天了，用了地道的复合词构词方式，还在说“I like movies”么，那就太不能体现语言表达的强大了，现在大家可以说“I am a movie-goer”,表示经常去看电影的人，同理，我们还可以得到park-goer, concert-goer这样的词汇，简直是一入“复写” 深似海，从此low词是路人的节奏!第三，让步观点：尽管学习对于每个学
13、生来说至关重要，但是学习重要也不意味着社团活动可以忽略;Admittedly, academic study is of vital importance to every student, for it provides the basic and systematic knowledge to which we cannot be blind. However, to emphasize the importance of academic study does not mean that student organization and club activities are dispe
14、nsable. One who devotes himself to academic study without paying any attention to extra-curricular activities stands a fair chance to become a nerd with high IQ but low EQ, which is not an ideal case.“To do sth does not mean that sth is dispensable”这个句型非常好的用来表达“在肯定某事物的同时，不能忽略其他得方面”，我们看以下模仿造句：To work
15、 hard does not mean that having a holiday to take a break is dispensable. 努力工作也不意味着有假期去休息可以忽略 ;最后，重申立场，升华主题In a nutshell, I regard student organization and club activity as important as academic study. As an old saying goes, “all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,” if you do not want to be dull
16、, then go to join an organization or a club immediately, because you will harvest unexpected treasures there.最后，文章用谚语来升华了一下主题，所以积累适当的谚语也是我们用在结尾的好素材;和大家一起来学习一下这个谚语：all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy;只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子也变傻!所以，以后在强调活动，兴趣，娱乐，锻炼等话题时，这个谚语就可以闪亮登场了。虽然 all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy，但是也要提醒一下大家，可不能光顾着玩了。赶紧拿起手机，抄起电脑，跟着考托神器-小马托福-一起，在复写的道路上一路狂奔，直至作25+ 的美好彼岸
