1、 改进写作能力经验谈通过阅读的途径，储备语言知识，提高表达技能，从而熟练驾御英语，突破英语写作，实现文字表达的灵活多样。Variety is the spice of writing.（写作富于变化才会妙笔生花。 ）所谓变化，一是避免相同的文字在文章中的反复使用，二是避开庸俗老套的语言，追求富有新意、充满活力的表达。表达的变化可以从词汇和句法两个方面把握。1词汇的丰富多彩英语词汇讲究生动，富于变化。如果在文中需要不止一次表达同一概念，应使用各种同义词以达到殊途同归的目的。如表达“得到一份职位” ，可以相继使用 find, win, accept,land, secure 等动词和 positi
2、on 搭配。再如，动词 advance, produce, propose, come upwith, put forward 等皆可以和 plan 搭配，表达“提出计划 ”。追求词汇的灵活多样还要注意少用万能单词，而代之以具体词汇。此处仅以 make 的滥用为例，说明英语学习者应充分发挥语言表达的潜力。Roberts shyness made him unable to respond properly before MaryRoberts shyness paralyzed him before Mary罗伯特腼腆羞怯，在玛丽面前说起话来吞吞吐吐。The incident made me
3、recall one of my past experiencesThe incident reminded me about one of my past experiences这个事件令我想起过去的一次经历。The boom in tourism made the small border town suddenly prosperousThe boom in tourism brought sudden prosperity to the small border town旅游业的兴旺使这个边隆小镇突然繁荣起来。This makes me conclude that money does
4、nt mean everythingThis leads me to the conclusion that money doesnt mean everything由此我得出结论，金钱并不意味着一切。The program makes me know a lot about foreign countriesThe program informs me on a lot about foreign countries这个节目使我了解到许多国外的事情。2.句法的变化中国的英语学习者写英文句子时习惯于用指人的名词开头，导致句子在形式上千人一面、缺少变化。英语句子的开头方式应不拘一格。追求句法方面
5、的多样化，关键在于学会月灵活的方式开头。试比较下列几组句子的优劣。He says one thing but does anotherWhat he does is not consistent with what he says他言行不一。He still keeps thinking of the hunger he suffered in his childhoodThe memory of hunger in his childhood still haunts him儿时忍饥挨饿的回忆仍萦绕在他心头。We know very little about the nature of hu
6、man beingsLittle is known about the nature of human beings我们对人性知之甚少。Many people think birth control is essential in ChinaIt is widely held that birth control is essential in China人们普遍认为，在中国实行计划生育非常必要。More and more people are aware that women should enjoy full equality with men.There is a growing awa
7、reness that women should enjoy full equality with men.越来越多的人认识到，妇女应该和男人完全平等。英语的书面表达一直以来就是英语学习的瓶颈。以下是突破英语写作的十字建议，即研习、背诵、默写、互译、模仿，概括出培养写作能力的五个方面，如能严格遵循，定能柳暗花明。（一）研习“没有规矩，不成方圆。 ”对于一般英语学习者而言，写出优秀的文章有赖于后天习得，但并不意味着机械背诵、生吞活剥，或者照搬照抄、人云亦云。所谓研习，需要有独立思考和个人的判断，本着“他山之石，可以攻玉”的精神，汲取文章的精华部分加以研究。研习主要侧重两个方面，包括文章章法和语言
8、表达。文章章法指文章的行文思路、布局谋篇、结构安排、逻辑顺序。许多学习者面对一个话题，可能存在两种不同的困惑，一是下笔千言，但离题万里；二是思绪万千，却无从落笔。导致两种困惑的根源皆在于欠缺思考问题、组织思路的恰当方式，以至于文章不得要领、章法紊乱。这就要求我们从全篇脉络角度多研习范文，之后领悟如何以演绎法行文、怎样用归纳法谋篇以及如何围绕特定话题拓展思路等等。此外，研习还要侧重于语言表达，包括遣词造句和句子、段落之间的各种衔接手段，以期在自己日后的写作中派上用场，因为英文写作皆通一理。只有善于借鉴，勤加研究，才会借他人的优势和长处，提高自己的写作水平。怎样写好英语句子要写好英语句子，首先需要
9、大量读写练习。通过阅读，发现并模仿表达准确、清楚、得体的英语词语和句子形式，积累句型和词组，再通过写作实践，吸收、巩固所学语言材料，最后使其成为熟练掌握或己成习惯的写作技巧。其具体方法是：学写正确句子，避免常犯语法错误保持主谓语一致避免碎句与串句避免垂悬修饰明确指代关系避免不平衡结构避免用错词类使用正确的动词形式注意主、被动语态的选择注意动词词组的固定搭配使用正确的时态、注意不规则动词的使用对比英汉句子词序的异同，便用正确英语词序，避免错置修饰语注意英语词组的搭配习惯和典型的英语习惯表达方式用词准确、清楚、达意注意英语单词、词组的文体色彩选择具体、生动的词语句子形式要有变化交替使用长句和短句交
10、替使用简单句，复合句强调句，疑问句等不同句子形式。1,避免使用空洞,多余的词语空洞的词语是给文章添加的累赘.写作中应掌握这样的原则:能用单个单词表达的尽量不用空洞的短语去表达.例:冗长:At this point of time Allen has not yet reached a decision about whether he will offer her a job.简练:At present Allen hasnt decided whether he will offer her a job.2,避免不必要的重复重复使用某些词语有时可以构成平行的句子结构,或达到强调的目的,但是,
11、无目的的重复则会导致冗长,笨拙的句子的产生.写作时,应根据表达需要,决定是否重复表达某些内容.例:冗长:My hometown is a quiet, peaceful(安宁的)place. It is quiet and peaceful because of the small number of people living there.简练:My hometown is a quiet, peaceful place because of the small number of people.3,避免过多地使用并列句过多地使用并列句指的是盲目地把几个并不同等重要的分句用并列连词连接在一起
12、,结果使全句逻辑关系模糊,读来令人感到单调乏味.修改这样的句子,可根据各个分句间的逻辑关系,将一些次要分句改为从句,修饰语或同位语等.例:冗长:We were driving out into the country, and we met our first English teacher riding in a bus, and the bus was crowded.简练:As we were driving out into the country, we met our first English teacher riding in a crowded bus.4,避免过多地使用从属
13、句英语中比较重要的从属概念可用从句的形式来表达,其他次要的概念则多用词或短语来表达,因为句子比短语显得更重要.过多地使用从句会把次要的与主要的概念混为一谈,从而削弱句子重点.纠正过多的从属结构,可以采用把从句改成修饰语,同位语或简单句等形式.例:冗长:He is a man who is honest and who never tells lies.简练:He is an honest man, who never tells lies.5,避免过多使用碎句碎句就是短句.书面表达中过多使用碎句,会破坏信息的连贯性,使表达的内容显得罗嗦,拖沓.通常通过使用同位结构,非谓语动词,介词短语,独立主
14、格结构,复合句等形式可将碎句巧妙地合并在一起.例:碎句:It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze(微风)is blowing.精练:It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing.碎句:Carl went to the airport. He wanted to see Mrs Black off.精练:Carl went to the airport to see Mrs Black off.练习:在不改变句意的情况下 ,改写下列句子,使
15、其更加简洁凝练.1. There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet which is planned for next Sunday.2. Because of the fact that I had a lot of work to do, it wasnt possible for me to accept their invitation.3. The problem of pollution is serious in our city, but if
16、 we try our best to stop the pollution, the pollution will stop.4. He told us a story; the story was very interesting.5. Eugene ONeill, was an American writer, and he had an unhappy childhood, and he told the story of his childhood in a play named A Long Days Journey Into Night and he said it was wr
17、itten in tears and blood.参考答案:1. Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.2. I was too busy to accept their invitation.3. The problem of pollution is serious in our city, but if we try our best , the pollution will stop.4. He told us a very interesting
18、 story.5. Eugene ONeill, an American writer, told the story of his unhappy childhood in a play named A Long Days Journey Into Night, which he said was written in tears and blood.（二）背诵背诵是提高写作的又一有效途径。要学好写作，首先要处理好语言输人与输出之间的关系。前者是后者的前提条件。如果头脑空空如也，就根本谈不上写出像模像样的文章。只有读过大量东西，并且有意识地将其中精彩部分储存于记忆之中(commit the
19、highlights to memory)，才能保证下笔流畅、文通字顺。因此，背诵对于写作极为重要。但背诵不是机械记忆，而是有选择性的背诵，是有意义的记忆。因为机械背诵的结果要么是记忆很快就荡然无存、了无痕迹，要么是无法活学活用、付诸实践。背诵包括五个方面：重点词汇、常用套语、精彩句子、优秀段落、经典篇章。1重点词汇美妙的用词及搭配皆在此列，像 fall victim（受害） ，stand a fair chance（大有希望）这种地道的动宾搭配要勤加记忆。为了积累写作词汇，应将文中同属一个话题的用词汇总归纳，组成主题词族(topic family) o 归类记忆可以使自己日后即写即用，得心应
20、手。下文是一篇阐释爱心的优秀文章，多处用词精巧，现将文中关于爱心这一主题的词汇总结如下：emotional strength 情感的力量the noblest of human emotions 人类最高尚的情感no thought of gain 不计得失the lamp of love 爱，心之灯help the victims of natural disasters 支援自然灾害受害者donate whatever they can 倾囊相助help their needy fellow citizens 帮助有需要的同胞be ready to give a helping hand
21、随时准备伸出援手When we use the word“love”，we do not simply mean an attraction to a person ofthe opposite sex，which is a very narrow definition of the wordLove is emotionalstrength，which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomesInfact，throughout history people of many different cultures
22、have regarded love as thenoblest of human emotionsAs an example of the power of love，we should remember how the Chinese people ofall nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every yearAlthough their incomes are still low by international standards，people all over th
23、ecountry do not hesitate to donate whatever they can-be it money, or goods-to help theirneedy fellow citizens Moreover，they do this with no thought of gain for themselvesIn my opinion，the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunatethan we areWe should always be ready to give a h
24、elping hand to those who are introuble，no matter whether they are family members or complete strangersIn this way，we can help to make the world a better place，for the darker the shadows of sorrowbecome，the more brightly the lamp of love shines2.固定套语套语指流行的公式化语言，在写作中适当使用颇有必要。如在商业信函结尾，期望对方早日回复的表达方式就要遵循
25、套语的基本模式，使表达规范得体。下面试举几个例子：Kindly favor us with an early reply.请早日赐复。Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.如能及时回复，将不胜感谢。We look forward to hearing from you soon.盼早日回复。We are expecting your prompt reply and thank you.急盼回复，谢谢。Please have the kindness to answer this letter quickly.请早日回信。Kindly let
26、 us have your reply at your earliest convenience.请在您方便时尽早赐函。We would appreciate it if you could respond right away.如能即刻回复将不胜感谢。当前流行应试写作模板，即套语的使用贯穿文章始终，为考生提供万能公式型的文章主架，每句表达皆由固定套语框定，考生只要背下套用句型、过渡词语，在考试中根据特定考题填充具体内容。这种应试策略使写出的文章矫揉造作，生硬刻板，虽可以让考生及格过关，但绝对得不到高分。套语的过多使用不妨可以比作大海中的救生圈，有了它，仅仅可以让不擅游泳者保全性命，却无法自在
27、畅游，一展泳姿。一般而言，套语较为空洞，如使用过多，文章容易流于空泛，言之无物。写作宜虚实结合，形式与内容相统一。下例是一篇比较“在家学习与在校读书谁优谁劣”的范文，文中巧妙地使用了一些固定句式和过渡词语，不仅增强了表达效果，而且实现了形式与内容的统一。There are two major arguments that can be made for studying at homeFirst，asadvances in the electronic media have brought the whole world of scholarship into thehome via the
28、Internet and educational courses on TV，the classroom is no longer the onlyplace for acquiring knowledge. Second， it is widely held that a person studies better inthe familiar surroundings of his own home and when he can arrange his own study timeBut we must not lose sight of the fact that there are
29、advantages to studying in theclassroom， tooBeing surrounded by people of roughly the same abilities and interestscan be a great stimulus to acquiring knowledge，whereas studying in solitude at home isboring for many people More importantly， there can be no substitute for a goodteacher，who must not on
30、ly be able to impart facts and theories，but also to appraise andencourage his studentsGiven the choice between these two methods of learning，I prefer the classroomThis is because I am the sort of person who finds it difficult to concentrate on study in themidst of household chores，and disturbances f
31、rom visitors and telephone callsTheclassroom environments is the only one in which most people feel comfortableapplying all their energies to the all-important task of acquiring knowledge3.精彩句子精彩句子指文章中句式优美、蕴含哲理的句子。精彩句子的背诵有助于写作时的引用和模仿。如在阅读 John F. Kennedy 的 Inaugural Address（就职演说）时，可以记住诸如“Ask not wha
32、t your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country.”（不要问国家能为你做什么，而要问你能为国家做什么。 ）这样的传世佳句，当你写关于爱国(patriotism)主题的作文时，则可以适时引用。现仍以上面谈“爱心”的文章为例，其中值得背诵的句子为数不少。摘录如下：Love is emotional strength，which can support us no matter how dark the worldaround us becomes爱心是情感的力量，不论我们周围的世界多么黑暗，爱心都能支撑我们。Pe
33、ople all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can 一 be itmoney or goods 一 to help their needy fellow citizens全国人民毫不犹豫地倾囊相助不管是钱还是物帮助那些有需要的同胞。The best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are表达爱心的最好方式是帮助比我们更加不幸的人。The darker the shadows of sorrow becom
34、e， the more brightly the lamp of love shines悲伤的阴影越黑暗，爱心之灯的光芒就越闪亮。4优秀段落阅读时，我们经常会碰到一些过目难忘的段落。这些段落或者表达流畅、文笔优美，或者逻辑填密、结构严谨。根据表达需要，有不同的功能段落，如现象说明段、观点陈述段、原因列举段、利弊解释段、结论归纳段、趋势预测段、措施建议段等。有些优秀段落可以作为写作的功能段落加以背诵，对于我们拓展思路、规范行文大有裨益。在背诵过程中，熟练掌握各种功能段落的行文规则，自己在表达时就能驾轻就熟。下面仅举观点陈述段和措施建议段各一例。观点陈述段（陈述“民族文化应该成为世界文化”的观点）
35、A culture of one nation may become international，which is beneficial for all mankindSince China has opened its doors widely to the outside world，many people from different countries want to visit ChinaThey will come to accept and love Chinese culture as a whole. In addition，Chinese culture should be
36、 shared generously with foreign people who show great interest in itMeanwhile，as more and more foreigners come to Chin; they bring aspects of their own culture to share with the Chinese peopleIn this way, people from various nations in the world will be able to acquire a better understanding of each
37、 other and live peacefully together一个国家的文化可能成为世界文化，这对全人类都有益。由于中国已经向外界敞 l了开国门，许多来自不同国家的人都希望来看一看中国。他们会开始接受并喜欢整个国文化，中国文化应该大大方方地让感兴趣的外国人分享。与此同时，随着来中国的（国人越来越多，他们也把他们自己的文化带给了中国人。这样，世界各国的人们就能越更好地相互理解、和平相处。措施建议段（建议“人口老龄化”的解决措施）The rapidity of the populations aging has made it more urgent for the adoption of
38、 countermeasuresNo doubt，the key is to build a solid economic foundationMeanwhile importance shall be attached to overall social progress by changing the backward situation in social security，welfare and service. Whats more, family care and community service shall also be encouraged.5.经典篇章古往今来，英语宝库中
39、涌现出大批经典佳作，如林肯的葛底斯堡演说(TheGettysburg Address) ,福克纳的诺贝尔文学奖获奖演说(Banquet Speech), 海伦一凯勒白给我三天光明(Three Days to See)。这些文章在文字的运用上技法高超，在思想内涵 1寓意深刻，读来字字珠现，文字优美，启迪心智，含义隽永(full of exquisite words antruth, satisfying the mind，appealing to the heart)。这样的文章如不能熟读成诵，则无法融会会贯通。背诵一定数量的经典名篇既有助于提高自己遣词造句的能力，也有助于加强自己表达思想的深度
40、。下面的一篇短文是英国哲学家罗素(Bertrand Russell) 自传的序言部分，题为 What I Have Lived for（我的人生追求） ，概述了作者一生追求的三种理想，文章在语言和思想两个方面都堪称经典，值得背诵。What I Have Lived forThree passions，simple but overwhelmingly strong， have governed my life：the longing for love，the search for knowledge, and unbearable pity for the suffering of manki
41、ndThese passions, like great winds, have blown me hither and thither, in a wayward course, over a deep ocean of anguish, reaching to the very verge of despairI have sought love，first，because“brings ecstasy-ecstasy so great that I would often have sacrificed all the rest of life for a few hours of th
42、is joyI have sought it，next, because it relieves loneliness-that terrible loneliness in which one shivering consciousness looks over the rim of the world into the cold unfathomable lifeless abyss I have sought it，finally，because in the union of love 1 have seen，in a mystic miniature， the prefiguring
43、 vision of the heaven that saints and poets have imagined. This is what I sought，and though it might seem too good for human life，this is what-at last-I have foundWith equal passion I have sought knowledgeI have wished to understand the hearts of menI have wished to know why the stars shineAnd I hav
44、e tried to apprehend the Pythagorean power by which number holds sway above the fluxA little of this，but not much，I have achievedLove and knowledge，so far as they were possible，led upward toward the heavensBut always pity brought me back to earthEchoes of cries of pain reverberate in my heartChildre
45、n in famine，victims tortured by oppressors，helpless old people-a hated burden to their sons，and the whole world of loneliness，poverty ，and pain make a mockery of what human life should beI long to alleviate the evil，but I cant，and I too sufferThis has been my lifeI have found it worth living，and wou
46、ld gladly live it again if the chance were offered me我的人生追求有三种简单然而无比强烈的激情左右了我的一生：对爱的渴望，对知识的探索和对人 类苦难的难以忍受的怜悯。这些激情像飓风无处不在、反复无常地吹拂着我，吹过深重的苦海，濒于绝境。我寻找爱，首先是因为它使人心醉神迷，这种陶醉是如此的美妙，使我愿意栖牲所有的余生去换取几个小时这样的欣喜。我寻找爱，还因为它解除孤独，在可怕的孤独中，一颗颤抖的灵魂从世界的边缘看到冰冷、无底、死寂的深渊。最后，我寻找爱，还因为在爱的交融中，神秘而又具体而微地，我看到了圣贤和诗人们想象出的天堂的前景。这就是我所寻
47、找的，而且，虽然对人生来说似乎过于美妙，这也是我终于找到了的。以同样的激情我探索知识。我希望能够理解人类的心灵。我希望能够知道群星为何闪烁。我试图领悟毕达哥拉斯所景仰的数字力量，它支配着此消彼涨。仅在不大的一定程度上，我达到了此目的。爱和知识，只要有可能，通向着天堂。但是怜悯总把我带回尘世。痛苦呼喊的回声回荡在我的内心。忍饥挨饿的孩子，惨遭压迫者摧残的受害者，被儿女们视为可憎负担的无助的老人，连同这整个充满了孤独、贫穷和痛苦的世界，使人类所应有的生活成为了笑柄。我渴望能够减少邪恶，但是我无能为力，而且我自己也在忍受折磨。这就是我的一生。我发现它值得一过。如果再给我一次机会，我会很高兴地再活它一
48、次。（三）默写默写也是提高写作的一个重要环节，即把背熟的东西付诸纸端。这个过程不仅是为了检验自己的记忆效果，更为重要的是训练正确的书面表达能力。在英语学习中，我们少有机会动笔写英文，长期以来，手笔生疏，导致提笔即错。再者，由于受汉语思维和习惯的种种影响，在潜意识里容易犯一些英语表达错误。（四）互译能够在英汉两种语言之间自如转换是英语学习的一个至高境界。尝试英汉互译，即把英语文章翻译成地道汉语，间隔数日再将汉语翻译回英文。英文和汉语在表情达意方面存在着诸多差异，可惜学习者往往观察不足，领悟不深。通过互译训练，比较异同，可以强化我们对两种语言之间差异的认知，可以加强英语表达能力。在复原成英文的过程
49、中，词汇表达、句式结构、段落组织、篇章布局等各个方面、多个角度都得到复习。同时，可以有效避免中国式英语在作文中的出现。中式英语在书面表达中屡见不鲜，根源在于学习者受到汉语表达和中式思维的制约。英汉互译有助于冲破两种语言习惯的壁垒，有助于超越两种语言思维的障碍，有助于思维与表达取得和谐的统一，有助于将中文的思想地道流畅地传达为英语语言。互译的实质在于巧妙地借翻译手段促进英语的创作性表达。（五）模仿在自己写文章时，应有意识地调用以前的积累，正向迁移，融人自己的写作，包括语言表达、文章章法、写作技巧等，最终达到学以致用的目的。如果记忆中有像“Not that Iloved Caesar less, but that I loved Rome more.”（不是我爱凯撒浅，而是我爱罗马深。 ）这样的经典名句，当写作有关
