1、钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材1雅思写作基础主语1) old people should offer young people opportunities to practice their abilities and talents.2) Smoking is just a personal hobby and entertainment.3) It is hard to come to an absolute conclusion.4) It is obvious that wearing uniforms would make school life dull and monotono
2、us.谓语1) they insist that the practice of censorship should be abolished. 2) Computer affects peoples daily life and does harm to people.3) Children should achieve success through their own efforts. 表语1) censorship is a violation of peoples freedom of expression. 2) The methods of farming and slaught
3、er of these animals are often barbaric and cruel. 3) What we should do is to tell children how to solve these problems properly.4) The focal point is that formal examinations are harmful to students creativity.宾语1) junk food impairs peoples health.钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材22) Studies reveal that there is a d
4、efinite link between smoking and some serious diseases such as lung cancer and heart disease. 3) It brings us a lot of pleasure and amusement. 定语 1) it is hard to come to an absolute conclusion.2) In recent years, the internet has been gaining popularity at an amazing rate.3) Individuals with limite
5、d budgets usually get their priorities right. 4) Those people who strongly oppose the practice claim that it violates peoples basic rights of working. Infringe upon/on birth rights. 5) 状语1) outdoor activities can improve our health greatly.2) According to the laws, advertisements must be completely
6、truthful and healthy.3) To dispel loneliness and kill the time, they can cultivate some other hobbies such as growing flowers, collecting stamps and learning to paint.4) Living far away from home, one will suffer from loneliness and homesickness.钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材35) I still like to travel with friend
7、s because I think the most important thing during travel is to get pleasure and relaxation.6) 同位语 1） shopping, a necessary activity in everyday life, is more convenient in the city. 2） Love can tear students away from learning, the students main task. 补语1） we consider compulsory military service a v
8、iolation of human rights. 2） Cloning technology can make humans redundant, replaceable and even extinct.3） I find the employment situation frustrating. 英语句子结构的分类a. 简单句1） television can widen our horizons.2） Students can get opportunities to experience a totally different culture.3） It brings us a lo
9、t of pleasure and amusement.4） More importantly, relatives, neighbors and his teachers should give the very kid as much love as possible to make him feel least abandoned.钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材4b. 并列句1) solving the problem of traffic jams is not an easy job and I dont think any individual or organization c
10、an easily handle it. 2) With the steady growth in the countrys economy as well as the peoples living standard, the rhythm of peoples living is speeding up and a lot of changes have taken place in their daily life. 3) Some professors prefer to control discussion, while others prefer to guide the clas
11、s without dominating it. 4) Television hasnt been with us all that long, but we are already beginning to forget what the world was like without it. 5) I used to meet several vegetarians but I have never heard of a nation that advocates vegetarian diet. c. 复合句1） they insist that the practice of censo
12、rship should be abolished.2） It is evident that it can relieve the traffic congestion in the streets, thus accelerating the flow of buses and cars. 3） At that moment only a language that can be accepted and understood by most of the people such as English, French and so on will function.4） However,
13、we cannot think that parents should accept responsibility and be punished if their children behave badly.钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材55） But the problem is that the cost for telephone calls is so high that many cannot afford it. 6） Nowadays, more and more people agree that smoking is an unwholesome hobby, which
14、 is equivalent to committing suicide. 句型翻译练习（即席）雅思写作常见错误一， 词性使用不当1) It is benefit to children. Beneficial 2) I am agree with the later view. Latter , former 3) The population was increased to 20 million in the past three decades. 4) I think we should sending old people to nursing homes.5) With the d
15、evelopment of society and economy, communication through internet has instead of the traditional means of letters. Replace substitute supplement 二， 用词不当1) The government will cost a large sum of money on the mass transit system. Investment2) My father and mother are all old. A doctor and nurse 3) Th
16、e present situation becomes serious and serious. 4) It is a tough job to handle the question of youth drug abuse. 钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材65) The old are inevitable to have generation gap with their children.6) Please write to me if you are convenient. At your convenience 7) I am easy to catch cold.8) May I
17、 borrow your phone?9) It seems that most of families are not as close as before. 10) As the progress of the society, more and more peoples begin to be aware of the problem of 11) It is not an easy work to master a foreign language. 三， 代词使用问题 sexual discrimination , racial discrimination 1） If one ha
18、s talents and self-confidence, we will likely succeed.2） If you try your best to get more aerobic exercise and practice it whenever and wherever possible, we can maintain good physical condition. 3） It is June now. Many students are busy preparing for the Entrance Examination to college. The great n
19、oise always makes him crazy.4） The output of 1999 is more than 1998.四， 句子结构混乱1) One of their reasons is the old buildings have a long history.2) As one of the most popularity thing is study abroad.3) First of all, foreign countries, which create a wonderful language atmosphere for students. 钱汪海 IELT
20、S 写作自编教材74) Young people go to abroad is difficult. 五， 存在句使用的问题1) There are more and more people go abroad nowadays.2) In nowadays, there is a great number of people choose to study abroad. 六， 时态和语态问题1) with the opening up to the outside world, greater changes have been taken place in peoples attitu
21、de towards marriage. 2) More and more children has been gone abroad to continue their study.3) Now more and more parents sent their children to study abroad. 七， 主谓一致1) Exploring the unknown places are a great pleasure to many people. 2) Rejecting the changes are unwise and passive. 3) The above-ment
22、ioned disadvantages which are brought about by environmental pollution is very detrimental but often miss peoples attention4) One of the most pressing problem confronting human beings are old age boom.钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材8八， 非谓语动词1) I think set up a camera in the residential area is the best way to ensu
23、re the security of the dwellers.2) Comparing with the advanced western countries, China is a bit slow in information technology.3) Rescue the adventurer in danger is a time-honored virtue in china. 4) The moral education plays an important role in bring families closer. 5) It is commonly accepted th
24、at respect the old is a virtue. 九， 重复复累赘1) I could not bear my roommate who shares the room with me now. 2) It is a true fact that3) From what we have discussed above, we may safely draw a final conclusion that 4) In my opinion, I think the owner is justified to do so. 十，综合1) one of the most signifi
25、cant change is families are not as close as before.2) As the internet comes into our life, our life has taken place many changes. 钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材9翻译练习 1. 国际贸易是一个公众感兴趣和关注的话题。The international trade is a topic that people are interested in and show concern about. / The international trade is an issue
26、 of public interest and concern. 2. 在交流领域，最热门的话题也许就是因特网的广泛使用。In the domain of communication, perhaps the hottest topic is the widespread use of the Internet. 3. 英语作为全球语言的发展是 20 世纪末和 21 世纪初最瞩目的现象之一。In the late 20th and the early 21st centuries, the development of English as a global language is one o
27、f the most remarkable phenomena. 4. 文化和旅游业之间的关系已经在世界范围内引起了广泛的关注。The relationship between culture and tourism has aroused worldwide concern. 5. 教育已经成为一个重要的产业，它对社会的重要性无可比拟。Education has become an important industry, which is second to none in terms of the importance to our society. 6. 由于健康和生活条件的改善，人类的
28、寿命快速延长，这是21 世纪所有发达国家的一个特征。Due to the improvement of health and living standard, life span of human beings has been prolonged rapidly, which is a characteristic of all 钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材10developed countries in 21st century. 7. 媒体自由是否应该被限制是一个激烈争论的话题。支持者和反对者之间的争论一直没有平息。Whether the freedom of the press s
29、hould be restricted is a topic of fierce controversy. A debate between supporters and opponents remains unsolved. 8. 近年来，人们已经对不加控制的汽车尾气排放的严重影响表示了关注。In recent years, people have shown concern about the serious consequences caused by unrestricted car emission. 9. 先天和后天的争论是心理学领域最经久不衰的话题之一。The debate be
30、tween nature and nurture is one of the most enduring topics in the domain of psychology/ sociobiology. 10.近几十年来社会上的暴力的不断增加已经引起了公众的关注。It has raised public concern over the past decades that the violence in the society is on the rise. 11.在过去的 20 年里，环境保护已经上升成为最热门的话题之一。In the past two decades, environme
31、ntal protection has arisen as one of the hottest topics. 12.随着世纪的不断推移，女性权益和女性在当今社会的角色已经得到更大的重视。With the progress of centuries, womens rights and their social role have been attached greater importance to. 钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材1113.研究人员赞同一个观点，基因影响人的性格特点。Researchers agree on the point that genes influence
32、personality traits. 14.随着因特网的使用变得普遍，它的优缺点已经成为争论的话题。With the popular use of the Internet, its pros and cons have become a subject of debate / a matter of debate. 15.在这几年里，没什么话题可以像围绕保护动物的争论那样吸引如此之多的注意。 No issue in recent years has drawn as much attention as the debate surrounding animal protection. 16
33、.在过去大约 20 年的时间里，贫富之间的差距这一话题受到无休止的争论。For the last twenty years or so, the issue of the gap between haves and have-nots has caused endless dispute. 17.电视暴力是否导致现实生活中的暴力行为这一问题是许多研究的主题。The question of whether violence on television leads to violent behavior in reality has become the topic of numerous stu
34、dies. 18.在一个文明社会，或许没有什么比接受教育更为重要的了。In a civilized society, presumably there is nothing more important than the access to education. 19.在近年来，体育运动员和艺人高收入的持续曝光，已经引起社会上对这些名人价值的新的讨论。Recent years, the ongoing exposure of the high income of sportsmen and 钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材12entertainers has ignited / trigger
35、ed / sparkled a new round of discussion about their values. 20.关于城市扩张和其影响一直很受关注。There is an ongoing concern about urban sprawl / the expansion of cities. Task one (小作文) requirements:(1) Describe the main features of the charts.What is the main feature?(2) Perspective clarity Trend vs. Proportion （ti
36、me sequence and space concept）(3) Dont cite the data directly and try to make comparisons.(4) A relatively wide range of vocabulary and varied sentence patterns. (5) Linkers are always important in writing.(6) Try to avoid grammatical mistakes and misspellings.(7) Try to make your paper tidy and par
37、agraphing acceptable. How to read the charts. Pie chart, line chart, bar chart, table Tendency, proportion Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main 钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材13features, and make comparisons where relevant. （Examples）表示趋势的句型 (核心句型+衍生句型)(1) A increased from 1 to 2 + time. I
38、n the past 2 decades, the population in Japan increased from 1 million to 2 million. (2) A witnessed an increase + data + timeTime witnessed an increase in A.The past 2 decades witnessed an increase in the population of Japan. Witness experience- see undergo go through (3) There was an increase in A
39、 + time + dataThere was an increasing tendency/trend in A + time +data(4) Time + A increased + data before decreasing to + data. Time + A increased + data before it decreased to + data. Variation: after.钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材14(5) 高分句 (1) /(2) /(3), + rising +data. / which clause. Population in Japan incr
40、eased, rising from 1 to 2 million. The production of cotton declined, falling from 20 tones to 15 tones in the surveyed years. The number of private cars witnessed an increase, which rose from 1 million to 2 in the period. (6) and 句型A increased in the first 20 years from 10 to 35 and continued to ri
41、se in the following decade. (7) A increased in a steady way from 1995 to 2000, arriving at the peak of 1 billion. / reaching the peak (summit) of/ reaching the low point of + data.表示增减的动词：Increase / rise / climb / go up / grow / soar / rocket. Decrease / fall / decline / go down / drop / reduce / pl
42、ummet. 表示增减幅度的词：Steadily , slightly, stably, slowly.Dramatically, substantially, considerably, remarkably, significantly.钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材15表示波动且增减：It increased with some fluctuation. It fluctuated in an upward trend. / in a downward trend. 表示持平（无变化）：There was almost no change in the number of privat
43、e cars with the figure of 20 million. The number of private cars remained unchanged, standing at 20 million.The number of private cars kept steady/ stable at 20 million. 如何引入时间而避免过度重复：From 1995 to 2005, In the first 5 years, / in the first decade, In the following 5 years, In the same time frame, /
44、in the meantime, / meanwhile In the period under survey/ in the surveyed periodIn the time under view, in the viewed time period, Afterwards, since then, following this, 如何表示预测数据(剑 5 p29):Be projected to 、Be predicted to 、Be expected to 、Be estimated to In the following 4 decades（from 2010）, the pop
45、ulation 钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材16aged 65 or more is projected to increase substantially. And specifically, the percentage of the old population in Japan is likely to experience the most dramatic increase, arriving at the peak of about 28% which is the highest of the surveyed three countries. In the meantim
46、e, the other two countries also increases and are predicted to reach the figure of around 25%. To sum up, the population aged 65 or more increased generally from 1940 and is projected to increase in the following years. Clarity -classification -standard -perspective How to make comparison:(1) A is m
47、ore than B. A is the largest one of all the items. Compared with B, A is more/ largest. (2) A is 3 times as much as B.A is 3 times more than B. (3) A is two thirds of B.A is just a quarter of B.（4） Order : A was the largest one of all items, which is followed by B. 钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材17B ranked the sec
48、ond, with the percentage of 70%. How to cite the statistics:(1) A increased from 10 to 20. (2) A increased by a margin of 10. (3) A witnessed an increased, arriving at 20. (4) A is larger than B, 30 and 20 respectively. (5) A is the largest of all items, accounting for/ constituting / representing 7
49、0%.A accounted for / constituted 70%, the largest part of all items. (6) A took up the smallest of the chart with the figure of 20%.The figure of A is 20, the lowest in the surveyed 10 years. (7) A, which accounted for 30% / which was 50 million, was the largest of all items. / was much larger than B. (8) A is larger than B (20 and 15).How to achieve clarity:【清晰结构】 先总后分 分门别类+ 合并同类 (根据趋势和反差分类) 主要特征 句型，段落，用词，连接。剑 5， P 52According to the first chart, / having an overview of the chart, 钱汪海 IELTS 写作自编教材18we can find / it is clear that with the increase of ag
