1、英语高考专题复习,短 文 改 错天星桥中学 周一业,In our everyday life, if we make some mistakes, we should correct them, then we are still good fellows. Chairman Maos words,How to correct a composition,Any rules？,Any skills？,Whats the main trouble when correcting a composition?,1. 看不出句子有错。2. 看出句子出错的地方, 但无法改正。3. 知道改正句子错误的地
2、方, 但答案不正确。,摘自同学的日常作业/作文.,1、I met student yesterday. _,2、He is looking a missing book. _,3、He wants have a rest. _,a,for,4、 He praised by the teacher several times. _,to,was,5、 Im looking forward your letter. _,to,可数名词，单数前要加冠戴帽，复数后要加尾巴,固定短语 look for 常用搭配要注意介词,want to do sth,要留意动词不定式符号to,注意判断动词是否要用被动语
3、态, be+ 过去分词,look forward to (doing )sth 盼望,Steps of correcting a composition:,1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）,2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）,3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the diffic
4、ult ones. （检查核对，攻克难点）,1.缺词: 是指由于漏掉某个词而使句子成份或固定搭配残缺不全。多表现为缺少冠词，连词，介词，物主代词，助动词和不定式符号to,被动语态的be等。,The factory at the corner of Friendship Street and Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports center has been built in its place . (2009全国卷1),分析：sports前加a。 sports center是可数名词单数，表示不确定。,1. Som
5、e friends of his go to see him every day, they take him lot s of good books and fresh fruit. (2009陕西卷),分析：they take him- and. 前后文是并列关系，用并列连词and。,2. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expecting anything in return. (2009浙江卷),分析：考查固定句型。此处用 It is/was possible to do sth.句型,2. 多词 多词现象
6、主要表现为词义重复。做题时不仅应注意分析句子结构，词义内涵，还应重视语篇整体构成。某些句子，独立分析似无懈可击，但根据行文逻辑进行分析，则错误迭现。,The market at the corner of Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket. (09全国卷1),分析：去掉been。短语give way to“让路”，用主动语态。,1. Im sorry that I wasnt able to return to your bike on time yesterday. (2009全国卷2
7、),分析：去掉to ，return归还，是及物动词，这里to多余,2. I stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger was so thoughtful. (2009浙江卷 ),分析：去掉believe后的in，这里不是信任而是相信的意思,3.错词 此类错误涉及面较广，较为常见的是搭配错误和语法 错误。考生平时写作中易范的错误常常是命题的焦点。,时态错误,B. 名词单复数误用,C. 代词误用,D. 介词错误,E. 非谓语动词错误,F. 主谓不一致错误,G. 词性误用,H. 连词误用,I. 冠词误用,A. 时态错误,1
8、. Im sorry that I wasnt able to return your bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，but was hold up on my way back. 2009全国卷2,分析： mean改为meant, hold改为held;文章是描述过去发生的事情。,2.Im glad to know that you had an interest in Chinese food. 2009重庆卷,分析:had-have描述现在的事情,B.
9、名词单复数误用,1. I stayed here for one and a half hour .2009全国卷2,分析： hour改为hours,2. One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to stop beside us. 2009浙江卷,分析：考查名词数。one of 后必须用名词复数形式，应改为friends.,C. 代词误用,1.This man might need the umbrella himself, buthe preferred to give it to
10、 everyone else.2009 浙江卷,【解析】 everyone-someone/somebody。 考查不定代词用法。everyone else 错误说法，每个人，就不可能再有别人；“别人“应表示为someone/somebody else。,2. Im glad to know that you have an interest in Chinese Food. Here Id like to tell you something about them . 2009重庆卷,分析：them-it依语境知。,D. 介词错误,1. Im a newcomer here of a sma
11、ll town. (NMET2004),分析： of 改为from。 from “来自于”,2. Im sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool.,分析： to改为at。 Laugh at 是固定搭配。,3.After five years away in my hometown, I find that the neighborhood which I used to live in has changed a lot. 2009全国卷1,分析： in改为from。句意是我离开家乡五年，away from属于固定搭配。,E.非谓语动词错误
12、,1. So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. 2009全国卷2,分析： going改为go考查非谓语动词的复合结构：help sb( to) do sth,2.My classmate, John, is at present in hospital with a breaking leg. 2009陕西卷,【解析】 breaking- broken非谓语动词做定语，与所修饰词是被动关系，用过去分词,F. 主谓不一致错误,1. There exist now a park that has a small river running t
13、hrough. 2009 全国卷1,分析：主语是a park.应改为exists,2. He looked up at us and said，“I just want to know what the sign say.” 2008四川卷,.,分析：宾语从句中主语是the sign,谓语应该用单数says.,G. 词性误用（常发生在动词与名词、名词与形容词，形容词与副词之间）,1.He has a comfortable room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read. 2009 陕西卷,分析: patiently- pati
14、ent.,2.So I grateful accepted the offer . 2009浙江卷,分析：grateful-gratefully考查副词用法。副词修饰动词accept.,H.连词误用,分析：while引导延续性动作。应选择when,1.Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. 2009浙江卷,2.He thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the an
15、imal. 2007四川卷,分析： but改为and前后文是顺承关系,I. 冠词误用,1.Every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying. 2009重庆卷,分析： 去掉the，没有特指,【解析】考查冠词用法。由umbrella 的发音可知，元音前应使用冠词an,2. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella. 2009浙江卷,短文改错应注意的问题,四不改:标点符号不改。大小写不改。词序错误不改。在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。,Dear Ms, Ann
16、a,Im writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. Ive 1. . hear that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. . have been learning about its rich culture and long history. 3. . Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. . know whether you have seen the old buil
17、dings here. We have 5. . learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. . experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. . help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. . us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. . think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .,.,to,heard,its,there,your,knowledge,with,hope,possible,_,短篇练习,Thanks forattending our class!,
