1、英语漫画作文写法探讨,江苏省郑集高级中学 王芳,Tasks:,1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons 2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing 3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing,解读：,书面表达示例增加到两个。一个是根据汉语提示的信息用英语写一篇150单词左右的短文。第二，根据对所给漫画的理解，描述一下他们可能的做法并发表考生的看法。,示例讲评：,海口市的一位官员在接受海南新闻记者”海口污水问题
2、为何长年未解决？”的采访时说：”经济越发达的地区水越黑。”请你结合以上文字和下面漫画，就“经济越发达的地区水越黑”这一说法发表个人看法。 1仔细品味图示，要适当发挥想象，不要做简单描述。 2词数150左右。,写作思路：,1. What does the cat stand for ?- the government official 2. What comments does the cat make?-The more developed the economyn.经济, the dirtier the water 3. What phenomenonn.现象 does this pictu
3、re reflect?-In recent years, with the development of agriculturen.农业 and industryn.工业, our environment is worseningvi.恶化 day by day.,写作要点：,1 图画中的猫代表 2 当污水横流时，猫 3 记者问：河里的水为什么这么黑？猫答4 环境被严重污染是因为 5 建议追查那些玩忽职守的官员的 6 大家一起行动来,某环境监测官员,视而不见,经济越发达的地区水越黑,政府官员的玩忽职守,责任,保护环境,The government official monitorsvt.监测
4、the environmental protection. The more developed the economy, the dirtier the water. With the rapid development of industry, our environment is worsening day and day. Some government officials neglect vt.疏忽their duties. They want to make more profitsn.利益, which has a negative effect on the sustainab
5、leadj.可持续的 development in the future. Our environment becomes worse and worse. We must take action to protect the environment from now on.,Key points:,单词拼写错误：,This has become a common phenomenon in our morden socity. We cant just put importance on enomic development but also on environmental protect
6、ion. We should strenthen our awareness of social responsibility. Government can publish those people who pollute environment in right ways. Through developing our economy is important, protecting our environment is also equally important. Their managers always ingore the pollution. Only in this way
7、can we build a humour society. A picture vividly descripes a phenomenon in our country.,_,modern,_,society,_,economic,_,strengthen,_,punish,_,Though,_,ignore,_,harmonious,_,describes,Water have been polluted very much in some developed areas.A large quantities of areas are developing economy. What m
8、ore, the people who is in charge of the polluted water dont punish illegal factories.,_,主谓不一致：,_,has,quantity,_,is,_,are,单词句型的用法没掌握：,Waste from some factories is still poured straight into rivers, which leads to the water polluted seriously.I firmly convinced that only with combined efforts can we c
9、reate our happy future. Concerned governments take a blind on the phenomenon. Its high time that we take effective measures to solve this problem. He thinks the worse water, the development of economy is faster. As the picture shows that our environment is getting worse and worse.,_,which leads to t
10、he water being polluted seriously. which causes the water to be polluted seriously. making the water polluted seriously.,_,am firmly convinced,_,Governments concerned,_,turn a blind eye to,_,took,_,the worse water is, the more developed economy is.,_,The researcher answers that it is because the dev
11、eloped economy. As a Chinese people, we should work together so that build up a clean and tidy country. We fail to take it into account that protecting water while we develop our economy. Citizens are lacked of the awareness of environmental protection. The economy develops very fast is at the cost
12、of polluting water. Does it true?,_,because of,_,so as to,_,we should protect,_,lack,_,_,environment,_,Is,佳句欣赏：,A large amount of waste water from factories pollutes water, making our rivers fishless and our water unfit to drink. As far as I am concerned, the importance of protecting our environment
13、 cant be overemphasized. The picture vividly describes a common phenomenon among some districts in our country, which has aroused public concern. Reasons accounting for this phenomenon can be listed as follows. This picture mirrors a common social phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern and
14、 is in fact thought-provoking.,感知漫画的特点:,幽默诙谐、 形象生动、 深刻含蓄,一、观察漫画,确定立意二、找关键词，关键句三、结构成篇,写作步骤,观察漫画，确定立意,1、由图画到生活（特点：把握漫画的寓意）2、由结果推原因（揭示事件的本质）,Topic for this cartoon,In recent years, with the development of agriculture and industry, our environment is worsening day by day.,找关键词，关键句,1.紧扣漫画主题 2.抓住画面有效信息，合理
15、发挥想象 3.尽量用一些新颖词汇、句型结构 4.确立人称、时态,结构成篇,1.描述 describe the picture 基本步骤：描述漫画-引出暗含主题2.阐明原因 interpret its meaning 基本步骤：引出原因-列举原因3.提出对策 give your opinions about the phenomenon 基本步骤：引出对策-列举对策,Part 1 Describe the picture,As is shown in the picture As we can see in the picture The picture is trying to tell us
16、 that The picture reflects a common phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon. In the picture, there are/is (are) doing The picture above is about Lets look at the picture above/first.,From the picture we can see a cat standing by a water pipe that is pouring waste water into the r
17、iver. Obviously the cat represents the government official who monitors the environmental protection. When he is asked why the water is so dirty, he replies that the more developed the economy, the dirtier the water.,品品看,Lets practise!,Lets practise!,From the picture we can see that Sun Wukong toget
18、her with his master and brothers is walking across a river. Suddenly his master falls off the horse by the bad smell of river water. They find the water so dirty that they can hardly breathe.,1.简要描述漫画内容 2. 分析原因及后果 3. 发表个人看法 （150）,Practise again!,As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, a student
19、 is trying his best to reach the full score of important subjects including English, maths, physics, and Chinese while neglecting the more important aspects such as psychological quality and moral standards. This drawing mirrors a common social phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern and is
20、 in fact thought-provoking.,Part 2 Interpret the picture,It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of The picture indicates that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon that This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which
21、 describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among,Part 3 Give your opinions,I think/believe that As far as Im concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view,must have to Do/Dont,be supposed to It is better/advisable to I consider it necessary,Only in this way can we. Only with combined efforts c
22、an we,Group work,随着因特网的普及，越来越多的青少年上网成瘾。如何帮助这些青少年解除网瘾已成为家长和教育工作者关注的社会问题。请你结合下图的内容写一篇短文，并发表个人的看法。,要求： 仔细品味图示，要适当发挥想象，不要做简单描述 词数150左右 参考词汇：对入迷的人 addict,Polish up your article!,1. To use linking words if necessary2. To use complicated structures if possible,再叮嘱几句：,1. 保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确,体裁：议论文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第
23、三人称,时态混乱！,再叮嘱几句：,1. 保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确 体裁：议论文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第三人称 . 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误,误解图意 大忌！,再叮嘱几句：,1. 保证三要素体裁、人称、时态正确 体裁：议论文 人称：第三人称 时态：一般现在时 . 避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误 . 控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆） . 写一精辟的结尾！,Too short!,Too long!,As far as I am concerned, our government should perform their duty to protect the environment for
24、generations to come. Whats more, high technologies should be introduced to ensure economic development. Only with combined efforts can we live in harmony with nature.,Enjoy this excellent ending!,一篇好的英语漫画作文,仔细审题 准确立义 规范行文 整洁书写,评评看,Not good,Worse,评评看,Neat,Tidy,评评看,Homework,Finish this composition after class and hand it in in the evening class,Every piece of your advice is appreciated! Thank you!,
