1、考试范文In the picture ,the parents hold a bar over the heads, urging their child to jump over it while the child stares up at the bar in panic and frustration ./ with a tired and upset look on his face.In fact , it is a common phenomenon in many Chinese families that parents are always setting too high
2、 expectations of their children .Surely/On the one hand ,high expectations play an essential role in bringing up children .However / On the other hand, going to extremes may lead to the opposite .Besides ,if the goals are far beyond the childrens reach, they will be less confident and eventually los
3、e heart ,which can do great harm to their character building .So it is time for the parents to adjust their standards according to the childrens abilities and encourage their children by telling their children how proud they are of them .Only in this way can their children gain all-round development
4、 and lead a happy and healthy life.注意文中 1. 词汇短语的正确运用2. 句型和特殊结构的巧用3. 连接词的适时使用漫画作文指导参考句型Part 1 Describe the pictureThe picture is talking about/showsThe picture shows a common phenomenon. The picture describes As is vividly shown in the picture,The picture above is about Lets look at the picture above
5、/first.Part 2 Interpret the pictureIt seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere.What the picture shows is the exact reflection ofThe picture indicates that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon thatThe implied meaning of the picture should be taken into account se
6、riously. And the social problem has aroused great concernThis is a ironic (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon amongPart 3 Give your opinionsI think/believe thatAs far as Im concerned,In my opinion,From my point of view,(should It is better/advisable to I consider it nec
7、essary)Polish up your article!1、To use linking words if necessary2. To use complicated structures if possible 合理使用连接词,使文章层次分明,行文连贯,但要注意决不能牵强附会,让人感到别扭。1. 表平行、对等或选择 and; bothand; as well as; neither. nor; also; not only but also.2. 表转折 but; yet; however; nevertheless; in spite of; although; otherwise;
8、 while3. 表对比 on the contrary; instead of; one one hand on the other hand; just like4. 表因果 so; for;therefore;as a result; because; owing to; due to; thanks to5. 表时间、顺序 shortly after; first, second; first of all; to begin with; five days later; since then; for the first time; the moment; at last; afte
9、r that; then; next; finally; for one thing; for another thing; in the end6. 表递进、强调 besides; furthermore; what is more; in addition; worse still; above all; to make matters worse; otherwise; in spite of; in fact; after all7. 表解释、说明 namely; actually; such as; for example; that is to say; in other word
10、s; and so on; to tell you the truth; according to this; for instance; takeas an example; takefor example; as follows 8. 表结论 in short; in brief; in a word; in general; as you know; as far as I know; on the whole; to sum up;9. 表观点、意见 as far as Im concerned; in my opinion/eyes/view; personally;from my point viewSentence structures 从句/with 复合结构 / 非谓语动词 / it 句型活用 /倒装句型 练习 网络时代有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通,请根据下面图画,简要说明图画中所表达的内容,阐述这种现象的原因和你的看法。写一篇120字左右短文。