1、1各类作文结构四级作文主要涉及两个方面：一是与学生学习、生活相关的话题；二是与人们生活息息相关以及有关社会发展变化的热点话题。从体裁来看，四级作文主要以议论文和说明文为主，主要包括图表阐释类、说明现象类、对策方法类、对比分析类和观点论证类，叙事类和应用文。1. 图表阐释类作文结构图表阐释类作文一般需要考生描述图表或图画中的数据或画面，解释这些数据或画面反映出的裱花、现象或问题，并对其产生的原因、影响或存在的问题进行分析说明。例：Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the
2、 topic Do Athletes and entertainers Deserve Such High Salaries?. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the chart and the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 对表格内容进行描述2. 说明出现这种现象的原因3. 你的观点下图为 2007 年福布斯中国名人榜部分收入排名姓名 姚明 刘翔 巩俐 刘嘉玲 胡军 余华职业 运动员 运动员 演员 演员 演员 作家排名 1 4 5
3、 8 9 96结构公式陈列第一段 概述图表1.From the chart/graph/table/picture,we clearly learn that 总述现象、变化或问题。2.图表中初期的数据或情况。3.However, 图表中数据或情况的变化。第一段 概述图表1. 主题句：概括图表所反映的总体现象、变化或问题。2. 扩展句一：概述图表中显示的初期的数据或情况3. 扩展句三：概述图表中数据或情况的变化第二段 说明原因4.The following reasons can account for现象、变化或问题。5.First of all/ To begin with,第一点原因。6
4、. What is more/Moreover,第二点原因。7.In addition/Besides 第三点原因。第二段 说明原因4. 主题句：引出下文对原因的说明。5. 扩展句一：说明第一点原因。6. 扩展句二：说明第二点原因。7. 扩展句三：说明第三点原因。第三段 说明影响、问题或表达观点 第三段 说明影响、问题或表达观点28.From my point of view/As for me, “我“的思考或看法。9.可能的影响、问题或注意事项一。10.Besides，可能的影响、问题或注意事项。11. Therefore/To conclude,作出总结。8. 主题句：“我”的思考或看法
5、。9. 扩展句一：第一点影响、问题或注意事项10.扩展句二：第二点影响、问题或注意事项11.结尾句：经常是提出建议或作出展望。参考范文DoAthletes and entertainers Deserve Such High Salaries?From the chart above we can see that athletes and entertainers earn much more than writers. Yao Ming, as the most famous basketball star, is the rechest while the famous writerYu
6、 Hua has lagged far behind.The major reason for this phenomenon is that athletes and entertainers get more attention from the public than the writers, and by taking advantages of their fames they can earn money through ads very easily. As we know, writers cannot be more popular than sports or movie
7、stars.Mayve some people think that this is unfair, for in their opinion, scholars should earn more than stars. But I dont think so. First, the stars salary is just an indication of their hard work and fierce competition; and whats more, the stars splendid career is rather short and many of them have
8、 to retire even before theri thirties. Finally, the stars bring us so much pleasure and fun, and release us form stressful life. To sum up, they indeed deserve what they have got.点评这是一篇图表作文题。文章第一段描述表格，得出结论：体育、娱乐明星收入远远超过作家。第二段具体分析了产生这种现象的原因。注意 The reason for sth. Is that 结构，用来陈述原因。第三段进行总结，说明明星获得高收入的原
9、因，指出他们对此当之无愧。注意连接词 First, whatmore,Finally,To sum up 的使用，使得文章结构更加紧凑，行文流畅。强化训练1. Rush for Postgraduate StudyDirections: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Rush for Postgraduate Study You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition o
10、n the table and the outline (given in Chinese) below:Year Number of Candidates in X Province2000 16002002 56002004 120002006 360002008 520001. 根据上图描述近几年 x 生报考研究生人数的变化。2. 说明导致这种变化的原因3. 你对考研热的看法。32. 说明现象类作文结构说明现象类作文一般是需要考生描述所给提纲中反映出的现象的总体情况，对该现象的原因、相关因素或影响进行解释说明，并分析该现象中可能存在的问题或将来的发展趋势。例：Directions: Fo
11、r this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic of The Celebration of Western Festivals. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日。2. 产生这种现象的原因。3. 这种现象可能带来的影响。结构公式陈列第一段 描述现象1. no
12、wadays/In recent years, 概述现象。2. 现象表现。3.In addition/Also, 进一步描述现象表现或变化。第一段 描述现象1. 主题句：概括指出现象2. 扩展句一：现象的具体表现或变化3. 扩展句二：进一步说明现象的表现或变化第二段 说明原因4. Many different reasons contribute to 该现象。/There are many different factors 决定该现象。5. Among them, 第一点原因或因素play/plays a critical role. 6. Moreover,第二点原因或因素。7. Bes
13、ides, 第三点原因或因素或说明影响4. 该现象 has brought great influence on 影响对象。5. firstly，第一点影响。6.secondly，第二点影响。 7. Finally，第三点影响。第二段说明原因4. 主题句：引出下文对原因的说明。5. 扩展句一：说明第一点原因6. 扩展句二：说明第二点原因7. 扩展句三：说明第三点原因或说明影响1.主题句：引出下文对影响的说明2. 扩展句一：说明第一点影响3. 扩展句二：说明第二点影响4. 扩展句三：说明第三点影响第二段 总结评述8. In my opinion/As for me, 本人对现象的总结或述评。9.
14、具体作出评述.10 进一步作出评述.11. 作出总结。第三段 总结评述5. 主题句：可能现象的发展趋势或利或弊评述，或是本人对现象的看法。6. 扩展句一：具体评述7. 扩展句二：进一步评述8. 结尾句：总结全文（有时可以略去参考范文In recent years many Chinese people like to celebrate western festivals. Even some yongsters are paying （1） as great attention to Christmas （1）as our Spring Festival.（2） In addition, o
15、ther western festivals, like April Fools day and Valentines Day, are very popular among Chinese people.（3）Many reasons contribute to this phenomenon. Among them, relaxing and comfortable atmosphere from western festivals plays a critical role.(2) Moreover, more and more Chinese people begin to learn
16、 English,（4） which provides them with more 点评（1） 意为“或.一样”，同级比较（2） 衔接词语使文章条例清晰、意思连贯。（3） 益处原因重用句式（4） Which 引导非限制性定于从句。（5） 意为“暴露于”。（6） 用于引出个人观点。4chances（5） to be exposed to western culture and festivals. （2 ）Besides, many businessmen desperately try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals to attra
17、ct more customers.（6）As far as I am concerned, our paying too much attention to western festibals will（7） bring some side effects. The popularity of western festivals（8） to some extent has influence our traditions. （2）Therefore, I suggest that people should（9） not（10） be immersed too much in the wes
18、tern festivals （9）but ignore Chinese traditional festivals.（7） 意为“带来负面影响”（8） 意为“在某种程度上（9） 意为“不是而是.”，连接并列结构。（10） 意为“过分沉浸在.中”。2. Green FoodDirections: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Green Food. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your
19、 composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 近几年来，“绿色食品”变得越来越流行。2. 分析这种现象产生的原因。3. 你对该现象的看法。3. 对策方法类作文结构对策方法类作文一般需要考生描述提纲中所反映的问题，说明问题的危害和解决问题的必要性，然后针对该问题提出应对策略或解决方法。例：Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic of Getting to Know the World out
20、side the Campus. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 大学生了解社会的必要性。2. 了解社会的途径（大众传媒、社会服务等）.3. 你打算怎么做。结构公式陈列第一段 提出问题1.提出问题。2.问题的重要性或危害性。3.Besides/additionally,进一步阐述问题的重要性或危害。4.Therefor/No doubt, it is very important/necessar
21、y/urgent for 问题涉及的对象 to learn how to 解决该问题第一段 提出问题1. 主题句：概括提出问题。2. 扩展句一：指出问题的严重性或危害性。3. 扩展句二：进一步阐述问题的重要性或危害性。4. 结尾句：承上启下，表达解决问题的必要性，引出解决方法。第二段 说明方法5.The following ways are effective in解决问题。/There are many ways which can be adopted to 解决问题。/The 第二段 说明方法5. 主题句：引出问题的解决方法或决定因素。6. 扩展句一：说明第一点解决方法。5followi
22、ng factors play an important role in 解决问题。6.Firstly, 第一点方法。7.Secondly,第二点方法。8. Finally,第三点方法。7. 扩展句二：说明第二点解决方法。8. 扩展句三：说明第三点解决方法。第三段 总结评述9.As far as I am concerned/As for me,本人的观点或选择 10.具体观点或选择依据。11.To conclude/Therefore,总结或建议。第三段 总结评述9. 主题句：引出本人对该问题或解决方法的观点或选择。10.扩展句：具体阐述观点或选择依据。11.结尾句：作出总结或提出建议。参考
23、范文Getting to Know th World outside the CampusIt (1) is of great significance for a college student to know the world outside the campus. In this (2)fast-developing “Information Age”, college students must(3) keep pace with the progress of the world.(4) Additionally, by contacting the off-campus worl
24、d, college students can have chance to more practical skills.(4 )Therefore ,(5) how to know the world outside the campus (6)is worth our attention.Many ways can be adopted by our college students to increase our knowledge of the world.(4) Firstly, mass media, such as radios, televisions, newspapers
25、and the Internet, are a good choice,(7)by which we can (8)be well informed about what is happening. (4)Secondly, providing volunteer services is an efficiently way to contact and know the society.(4)Thirdly, we can take part-time jobs to increase our practical experience.(4)As for me, I wll try jto
26、create and grasp more chances to contact the society. In my opinion, getting to know the off-campus world is (9)as important(9) as improving academic performance.(4) Therefore, I suggest every college student should(10) not(11) confine himself to the campus(10) but often go outside.点评（1）“be of+n.”相当
27、于”be+adj.”。（2）符合形容词做定语，意为“迅速发展的”（3）意为“跟上”（4）衔接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。（5）“疑问词+不定式”结构充当主语。（6）be worth sth./doing sth.意为“值得”。7Which 在定语从句中充当介词宾语。（8）inform 是及物动词，一味“通知，告知”，经常用作被动结构“be informed about/of”.(9) 同级比较结构。（10）连接并列结构，意为“不是而是“。（11）意为“将自己局限于”。Should Class Attendance be Required?6Directions: For this part,
28、 your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Class Attendance be Required?. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 很多大学都实行上课出勤点名制度，大多数人都认为这样做很有必要。2. 但也有一些人认为这样做弊大于利。3. 你如何看待？理由是How should College
29、Students Relieve PressureDirections: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How should College Students Relieve Pressure?. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 当今大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力。2
30、. 大学生缓解压力的方式有那些。3. 你一般是如何缓解压力的。4. 对比分析类作文结构对比分析类作文主要有两种：一种是需要考生对比阐述两种观点或做法及各自的理由，人后表明自己的观点或做法并说明理由；另一种是需要考生对比阐述某事物的利和弊、好处和坏处或优点和缺点，继而表明自己的看法或态度。下面的结构公式是针对第一种类型来讲解，至于第二种类型，考生只需要在掌握第一种类型结构的基础上进行适当变形即可。例：Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic of Shoul
31、d One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 有人做好事期望得到回报。2. 有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报。3. 你的观点。结构公式陈列1. 观点或选择 A1.简述要讨论的主题，引出对其的的不同观点或选择/When it comes to 谈论主题，there is no complete agreement am
32、ong people.2. Some people think/prefer to/choose 观点或选择 A。3.观点或选择的第一点理由。4.观点或选择的第二点理由。第一段 观点或选择 A1. 主题句：提出要讨论的主题，引出两种不同的观点或选择。2. 扩展句一：指出一种观点或选择。3. 扩展句二：阐述该种观点或选择的第一点理由。4. 扩展句二：阐述该种观点或选择的第二点理由。2. 观点或选择 B5.However, there are many others who观点或选择 B。6.In their opinions/They maintain/they point out 观点或选择
33、B 的第一点理由。7.Besides，观点或选择的第二点理由。第二段 观点或选择 B5. 主题句：转折出另一种观点或选择。6. 扩展句二：阐述该种观点或选择的第一点理由。7. 扩展句二：阐述该种观点或选择的第二点理由。7第三段“我”的观点或选择8. As for me, I agree“我”的观点或选择。/Weighing up these two arguments/choices, “我”的观点或选择。9. “我”的第一点理由。10.“我”的第二点理由。11.Therefore/To conclude,作出选择第三段“我”的观点或选择8. 主题句：综合两种观点或选择，表明“我”的观点或选择
34、。9. 扩展句一：阐述“我”的第一点理由。10.扩展句二：阐述“我”的第二点理由。11.结尾句：经常是提出建议或作出展望。参考范文Nowadays, （1）different people hold different views about whether or not one should expect a reward when doing a good deed. Some people think that a good deed should be given a certain reward. They say it is agreeable with the rule of f
35、airness. （2）Also, rewards can stimulate peoples enthusiasm to to good deeds.（3）However, there are many others who take Leifeng as a model and be always ready to help others without expecting any reward. Everyone may be in trouble.（5）Only if you help othres unselfishly, you can get others help when y
36、ou nedd it. （ 2）Besides, they maintain that one can enjoy happiness in doing good deeds, （6）they think, （7）which is the best return.（8）Weighing up these tow arguments, I prefer the second one. （2）First, being happy to help others is one of Chinese peoples traditional virtues.（2） Second, this virtue（
37、9） is of more significance for the creation of a harmonious society. （2 ）To conclude, （10）it is every citizens responsibility（10）to do good deeds without expecting any reward.点评（1）用于引出对某事物的不同观点。（2）衔接词语使文章条例清晰、意思连贯。（3）转折出另一种观点。（4）意为“不期望任何火爆”，介词短语充当状语，注意此处 without的用法。（5）意为“只要”，引导条件状语从句。（6）插入语。（7）which
38、 引导非限制性定于从句。（8）用于引出个人观点，weigh up意为“权衡”。（9）“be of +n.”相当于“be+adj.”。（10）固定句式：It is.for sb.+to do sth.其中 it 是形式主语，不定式短语是实际的主语。To Become a Specialist or a Generalist?Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic To Become a Specialist or a Generalist?. You sh
39、ould write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:81. 有人认为一个学生应该努力成为一个“专才” 。2. 然而其他人认为学生应该成为“通才”才能在现代社会立足。3. 你的看法5.论证观点型作文结构论证观点类作文一般需要考生按照提高要求提出论点，通过举例等方式论证观点，最后再对论点进行总结。例：Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a comp
40、osition on the topic Haste Makes Waste. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 为什么说“欲速则不达”？2. 试举例说明。结构公式陈列第一段 提出观点1. 通过背景描写益处论点或直接提出论点。2.论点中的道理或正确性表现。3.Besides/In addition,进一步阐述论点中的道理或正确性表现。/The truth of it is deep and prof
41、ound./The truth of it is self-evident.第一段 提出观点1. 主题句：提出观点2. 扩展句一：阐述论点中蕴涵的道理或正确性表现。3. 扩展句二：进一步阐述论点中蕴涵的道理或正确性表现，或是强调论点的正确性。第二段 列举论据4.There are numerous examples supporting this argument./Many remarkable examples contribute to this argument.5.A case in point is 第一个例子。6. 进一步说明例一。7.For another example, 第
42、二个例子。8.进一步说明例二。第二段 列举论据4. 主题句：引出论据，开始论证观点。5. 扩展句一：列举第一个例子6. 扩展句二：进一步说明例一7. 扩展句三：列举第二个例子8. 扩展句四：进一步说明例二第三段 总结观点9.All the above-mentioned tell us that/It is no doubt that/Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that 重申观点。10.提出建议或指出注意事项。11.To conclude/Therefore,总结全文，呼应论点。
43、第三段 总结观点9. 主题句：承接上文，重申观点。10. 扩展句：提出建议或指出正确的做法或态度，呼应论点。参考范文Haste Makes WasteThe Proverb “Haste makes waste”has been widely accepted for many years. It reminds us that if we are to achieve our final goal we have to do it in a （1）down-to-earth way. （2）The truth of it is deep and profound.（3）There are n
44、umerous exmaples suppoorting 点评（1） 意为“脚踏实地”。（2） 意为“其中蕴涵着深远的道理”（3） 用于引出例证。9this argument. （4）A case in point is the ancient Chinese story of （5）“Helping the shoots grow by pulling”. This story proved that the haste caused not only waste but great loss. （6）For another example, some parents and teacher
45、s,（7） in order to improve childrens academic performance in a short time, tend to put too heavy burden on children. This, （7） as a result, brings the children（8） nothing but great pressure.（9）All the above-mentioned tells us that we shouldnt（10） be over anxious for quick results. Everything has its
46、own （11）developing law. Therefore, （12 ）whatever we do, we should not pay too much attention to the speed and ignore these laws.（4） 意为“典型的例子”。（5） 引用“拔苗助长”的故事（6） 用于引出另外的例子（7） 插入语（8） 意为“只是，仅仅”。（9） 常用于得出结论（10） 意为“急于求成”。（11） 意为“发展规律”。（12） 引导让步状语从句，意为“无论什么”。Man Proposes, God DisposesDirections: For this
47、part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Man Proposes, God Disposes. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 如何理解“谋事在人，成事在天”这句谚语？2. 试举例论证其中的道理。6.叙事类作文结构四级写作中设计的叙事类作文一般是要求考生叙述一个时间发生的经过，如车祸、生病或一次难忘
48、的经历，然后谈谈自己的感受或得到的启示。例：Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic pickpocketing. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 描述一下你在公共场所亲眼目睹的扒窃事件。2. 谴责这种犯罪行为3. 在构建和谐社会的进程中，人人都应该有正义感。
49、结构公式陈列第一段 交代时间背景、1.引出时间背景。2.进一步描述背景情况或概述事件的特点。3.有背景引出具体时间或说明事件的重要性。第一段 交代事件背景1. 主题句：总数时间发生的背景。2. 扩展句一：进一步描述背景情况或概述事件的特点。3. 扩展句二：有背景引出具体事件或说明事件带来的重要性。第二段 叙述事情经过 第二段 叙述事件的经过104. Now I still remember clearly 引出事件/There is one thing that is still vivid in my mind until now.5.事件发生的事件和当时的情形。6.接下来的情况.7. 进一步发展。8.As a result/However,事件结果。4. 主题句：概括引出要讲述的事件。5. 扩展句一：交代事件发生的事件和当时的情况。6. 扩展句二：描述接下来的情况。7. 扩展句三：描述事件的进一步发展。8. 结尾句：说明事件的结果或影响。第三段 谈个人感受10. Every time I recall 该事件，“我”的感受或得到的启示。/该事件 left me in deep thought/gave me a significant lesson.10.第一点感受。1111. 第二点感受。第三
