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1、每天前 20 名注册可获免费名师辅导 名额有限真人一对一口语训练抢注网址: 竭诚为您服务自 2011 年 12 月英语四六考试(CET-4话题为 Man and Computer; 内容要求为“英文提示“:by commenting on the saying, “The real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man, but that man will begin to think like the computer.“ 字数为 150 到 200.试想,题目明确要求对“话语“进行评论,考生如果没有丝毫提

2、到话语内容,则会被直接扣 3-6 分。此外,字数最好不少于 150 词,也不要超出 200 词过多。2012 年 12 月 CET-6 范文根据审题“三要素“分析和上文所列汉语提纲,本文可以写成三个段落:首段“话语评论“;第二段“揭示主旨“;尾段“建议“。范文如下:首段:话语评论Some experts utter a thought-provoking remark: “The real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man, but that man will begin to think like the

3、 computer.“ This saying can be naturally associated with the significance of creative thinking: if one intends to be creative, it is not advisable to think like a machine. (56)二段:揭示主旨: 现象+危害+意义(现象)In contemporary society, it has become a trend for computers to be designed increasingly smart. Meanwhi

4、le, a growing number of people deem it rather convenient and efficient to use computers to deal with various complex tasks. (危害) Unfortunately, many individuals have become too dependent on computers, and if we let this situation continue as it is, humans may lose their own creativity. (意义)However,

5、it is of great significance for us to maintain creative minds. It is creativity that enables human beings to invent computers, to be superior and to be masters in the world. Without creativity, it is impossible for us to create smarter computers and other devices. Therefore, if man tends to think li

6、ke computer, it is a real danger. (123)尾段:看法+建议As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for humans to keep a creative mind. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our classmates, friends and acquaintances to practice their independent thinking. (37)结语关注审题“三要素“,结合“内容要求“去写相应的段落或内容是避免作文跑题的关键要素。每天前 20 名注册可获免费名师辅导 名额有限真人一对一口语训练抢注网址: 竭诚为您服务“成千上万人疯狂下载。 。 。 。 。 。更多价值连城的绝密英语学习资料,洛基内部秘密英语,技巧,策略请在 网上 申请报名”

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