1、TEM 8 专八作文评分标准题目:1 分结构:1 分主题句(个人观点) 2 分Content and development 3 分Language and grammar 2 分Length 1 分 My summary:1. HttpAs an arena for individual achievement, the Olympics bring a strange sort of solidarity. N2. The GuardianThe more commercialized reality of the contemporary Olympics is going agains
2、t the original spirit of the Olympics, namely for sports competition. 3. The New York TimesThe financial burden of the host city and the use of the Olympic constructions after the event 4. Olympic cheating received harsh punishment and the Olympic spirit brings hope and peace to the world. 1. 先仔细研读材料,对材料的主旨内容进行提炼,找出作者的观点,形成一个 thesis statement.2. 对各个 statement 进行归类(分类) ,再确定自己的观点,形成自己的 thesis statement3. 初步的段落提纲(写作提纲)4. 初稿写作5. 修改初稿