1、2011 年湖南省湘潭市中考英语 类比法写看图作文书面表达 (计 10 分) 假如你是图片中的人物,请你根据图画内容及所给提示,完成下面的日记。字数不少于 20. 类比法写看图作文-看图作文跟提纲式作文类比做看图作文要学会读图。咋一看:这一幅图是一个故事;(有的图是说明文;有的图是寓言;有的是议论文)每个图都是一个情节发展的一个细节,等同于提纲式作文。这样可将看图作文转化为比较熟悉的,比较常见的提纲式作文。提纲:1)我 7:10 醒来 I woke up at 7:102)我到车站时,我错过了学校班车 by the time I arrived at the bus station, I mi
2、ssed the school bus.3)我 9:10 到学校,我上课迟到了,我把家庭作业落在家里。It was 9:10 when I went into the classroom. I was late for school. I left my homework at home.接着,利用学习过的语法把提纲连句成篇,适当增加一些句子,丰富文章的内容。范文和点评June 7th,2011 Tuesday Sunny This morning I woke up at 7:10 because my alarm clock didnt work. So I washed my face
3、in a hurry and run to the bus station with fast food. By the time I arrived there, I missed the school bus . I had to walk to school. It was 9:10 when I went into the classroom. The class had started and I was late for it. In class the teacher asked me to turn in my homework. I found I had left it at home. I was too hurrying to take it to school. I said sorry to my teacher. What a bad day it was.本文的过渡词因果型:so译文2011 年 6 月 7 日 星期二 晴天 今天早上,我 7:10 起床,因为我的闹钟不工作了,因此我匆忙洗刷,买了早点,跑步到车站。待我到达那里时,我错过了学校班车。我不得不步行到学校。我进教室时,9:10 了。已经开始上课了,我迟到了。在课上,老师要交家庭作业,我发现我把它落在家里。我太匆忙了没有带家庭作业。我跟老师说对不起。今天好糟糕啊!