1、1,Skills in Compositions,- complex structures and advanced expressions,2,写作的评分标准： 第五档（2530分）： 很好地完成了试题规定的任务。 *对题中所提供的信息进行了恰当的描述,清楚地 表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证。 *语法结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富。 *语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用 较复杂语法结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 *有效地使用了语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,3,How to write a good composition,实战演练,4,一、学会使用丰富的句式,“既
2、求达，也求雅”已成为高考高分评判的依据，所以要讲究句式结构的变化，避免单调、呆板和千篇一律的句子，尽量多使用各种句式，使句子丰富、灵活。,5,使用分词,Once it is held, it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing and make it more prosperous and modern.,Once held, it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing, making it more prosperous and modern.,Faced with the environmental prob
3、lems to be solved, some people dont approve of it.,Weighing the advantages and disadvantages, we should welcome the Olympic Games.,6,使用定语从句,Many pollution problems can be more serious, and it can eventually do damage to our surroundings.,Many pollution problems can be more serious, which can eventua
4、lly do damageto our surroundings.,More visitors from all over the world will flood into China, which financially benefit Beijing.,Whats more, more people will be attractedto Beijing, which will contribute to thedevelopment of tourism to a great extent.,7,使用 with 结构,When the number of tourists is inc
5、reasing, traffic will become more crowded.,With the number of tourists increasing,traffic will become more crowded.,With more and more visitors going to Beijing, tourism will be flourishing .,With everyone doing his bit, the game will be a great success.,8,使用被动句,Measures should be taken to avoid the
6、 bad effect mentioned above.,Only in this way can we hold a successfulOlympic Games.,使用倒装结构,9,二、学会使用较高级词汇,用词准确、得体是写作的前提，在此基础上使用高级词汇和短语，既可以体现出作者的语言驾驭能力，又有助于获得高分。,10,How to use advanced expressions,In my opinion, it is difficult to hold the Olympics.,In my opinion, it is challenging to hold the Olympi
7、cs.,It will have a great effect on the development of Beijing.,far-reaching profound significant,11,In a word, the Olympic Games will make Beijing more beautiful.,fascinating,In the long run, hosting the Olympicswill play a necessary part in prospering economy as well as booming tourism.,an indispen
8、sable,The advantages of the Game is over heavier than its disadvantages.,outweigh,12,Tourism is becoming a booming industry with the development of the city.,China will enjoy a boom in economy.,促进 繁荣经济旅游发展,Some students see it as a good opportunity to boost economy and accelerate the pace of thecons
9、truction of our modern society.,Holding the Olympic Games will promote the development of economy, making the city more booming and modern.,13,“中国位于太平洋西岸，地大物博，历史悠久，面积960万平方公里”。,China lies on the west bank of the PacificOcean. It is very big and has a lot of things. Its history is very long, and its
10、area is 9.6 million square kilometers.,Practice to challenge yourself,14,China, which lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean, is rich in natural resources. It is a great country with a long history, covering an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.,China, a large country with a long history,lies on
11、the west of the Pacific Ocean. It is abundant in natural resources, covering an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.,15,Replace the underlined expressions,Among all the people going to work, car drivers make up 18%. 2.The Internet can help us finish many tasks.3.The library is important to us. 4.
12、One can only become a skilled one after many failures. 5. Last year saw a more and more fierce competition in the job market. 6. He tried to pass the exam, but failed.,complete,accomplish,fulfill,vital,essential,endless,countless,numerous,witnessed,attempted to,amount to,account for,get through,16,7
13、. Some students dont value their money at all.,8. It is also essential that you get some skills for taking exams.,treasure,cherish,acquire,obtain,gain,9. It would take me a great deal of time, which would surely invite numerous inconveniencesto me.,undoubtedly,unquestionably,10. More and more people
14、 come to big cities, which causes serious housing problems.,flood into,crowd into,pour into,definitely,17,A Campaign Speech,Im sure I well satisfy the conditions for working as chairman. Since senior middle school, Ive been serving as monitor of my class, which has offered me invaluable experience.
15、More importantly, my job has always been sung high praise of by both my classmates and teachers, which has fully proved my strong capability of being a student leader. As far as my character is concerned, Im optimistic, enthusiastic,18,easygoing and always ready to offer help. In addition, I enjoy a
16、 variety of hobbies, ranging from literature to sports. All of the above demonstrates that I can be a qualified and competent chairman. If I were elected, I would try every means to cope with whatever problem we might encounter. Moreover, taking all our interests into consideration, I would organize
17、 diverse activities so as to enrich our university life as well as improve,19,our ability in a comprehensive way. To sum up, I would devote myself to serving you as well as possible and trying to develop everyones potential.If you believe in me, please cast your vote for me. Thank you for your suppo
18、rt.,20,precious,various,diverse,reveal,indicate,come across,priceless,ability,different,deal with,meet with,show,able,valuble,run into,talent,21,Assignment,假如你是一名大学生，对近年来大学毕业生 就业情况颇有己见，请根据下面提供的信息 向报社写信谈谈你的看法。词数120-150。,22,Dear editor, Im writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college
19、 graduates. Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.As a matter of fact, there are not enoug,23,opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside, talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us. Rural areas are a vast world, you can put your abilities to good use and youll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.,
