1、贵学教育 -北京雅思 版权所有 专注雅思培训十六年 1 / 27 关注新浪微博 雅思 教父 刘洪波 公众微信： liuhongbo-guixue 更新考试材料及资讯 雅思写作真经总纲 刘洪波版权所有 内部资料 该讲义为刘洪波老师雅思写作班专属讲义，配合公开出版物最简化雅思写作使用。包含： I. 写作真经总纲 II. 不知道自己已经跑题、偏题； 其实一开始你就输了 III. 解决审题，构思问题 IV. 十五句语法句型对应推荐 解决时间不够，写不出句子 ，形不成逻辑文章 的问题 V. 十五句最新范文 VI. 十五句逻辑模板个性化升级 解决看上去象模板问题 VII. 最新 真题 清单 贵学教育 -北
2、京雅思 版权所有 专注雅思培训十六年 2 / 27 关注新浪微博 雅思 教父 刘洪波 公众微信： liuhongbo-guixue 更新考试材料及资讯 写作真经总纲 学以致用 雅思写作考试为什么设计成两个部分？学会了雅思写作除了拿个高分还能帮你做什么？ 评分标准 全球雅思考官是怎样给你评分的？哪些重点是不同分数段的标志特征？ 中西合璧 什么是好作文？字数多，词汇大，语法复杂，还是条理清楚？ 循序渐进 写作能力提升的正确途径。是不是一上来就学习官方满分范文？ 读写互通 学习范文的正确方法，是不是要读，要背很多范文？ 自成风格 什么是模板？要不要学习模板？如何形成自己的写作风格？ I. 赢在起跑线
3、 正确审题，不再跑偏，高分从这里开始 5 分钟认真审题，构思，写提纲。 高手审题 4 大技能 正确判断题目重心 紧扣核心词汇拓展论据 洞察本质联系立意高远 抽象具体同义替换 12-12-08 More men and women decide to have children later in life. Why is it happening? What influences does it have on society and family life? 原因 1.现代人均寿命增长，生育期相应延后； 2.社会竞争压力大，选择事业收入稳定后生孩子。 影响 1.父母与孩子的年龄差会变大，交流中
4、代沟会明显； 2.会出现劳动力缺口，老龄化社会。 In order to learn a language well, we should learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some industrialised countries have serious environmental problems. The damage to the environment i
5、s an inevitable result when a country tends to improve the standard of living. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 贵学教育 -北京雅思 版权所有 专注雅思培训十六年 3 / 27 关注新浪微博 雅思 教父 刘洪波 公众微信： liuhongbo-guixue 更新考试材料及资讯 Some people said the government should not spend money on building theaters and sports stadiums.
6、Instead, it should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree? In the last century when a human astronaut first arrived on the Moon he said “it is a big step for mankind” but some people think it makes little difference to our daily life. To what extent to you agree or
7、disagree? II. 十五句语法句型对应推荐 1 Doing sth. is one of the important sths. that Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about 2 However, whether is a controversial issue. However, some people question whether However, the question remains whether 3 My view is that 4 Doing sth. is It is clea
8、r that 5 This is because This means that If When Compared with A that., B can While A can , what B can do is More specifically, 6 So, it is important/essential/necessary for sb. to do sth. 7 Moreover, A is B that The fact that (also) suggests/demonstrates that 8 For example 9 If When/once While A, B
9、 It /Doing these can not only , but 10 This is not to say that It is also true that 贵学教育 -北京雅思 版权所有 专注雅思培训十六年 4 / 27 关注新浪微博 雅思 教父 刘洪波 公众微信： liuhongbo-guixue 更新考试材料及资讯 Those who harbor that may argue that Some people think that because they believe 11 Of cause This is probably true to some extent. 12
10、 But 13 In sum, it is indispensable for sb. to do sth. It is sth. that What we need most is not A, but B, which may 14 Meanwhile, we should not ignore 15 By doing so we can make sure that In sum, we should emphasize on A coupled with a focus on B. In sum, we should find a proper balance between A an
11、d B since both have value. Without A, without B Sb. who simply depend on A will surely, and sb. who completely rely on B may 读写互通，剑桥经典句型语法集锦 剑 8 1.1 The revolutionary aspect of this new timekeeper was neither the descending weight that provided its motive force nor the gear wheels (which had been ar
12、ound for at least 1,300 years) that transferred the power; it was the part called the escapement. 1.3 Some researchers say the results constitute compelling evidence that telepathy is genuine. Other parapsychologists believe that the field is on the brink of collapse, having tried to produce definit
13、ive scientific proof and failed. Sceptics and advocates alike do concur on one issue, however, that the most impressive evidence so far has come from the so-called ganzfeld experiments, a German term that means whole field. 2.2 The Little Ice Age was far from a deep freeze, however; rather an irregu
14、lar seesaw of rapid climatic shifts, few lasting more than a quarter-century, driven by complex and still little understood interactions between the atmosphere and the ocean. 2.3 While it is true that the olfactory powers of humans are nothing like as fine as those possessed by certain animals, they
15、 are still remarkably acute. 3.3 It follows from the above that sparing use of energy reserves should tend to extend life. 3.1 Discussion now centres on whether the route through the maze is communicated as a left-right sequence of turns or as a compass bearing and distance message. 3.3 Forests are
16、one of the main elements of our natural heritage. The decline of Europes forests over the last decade and a half has led to an increasing awareness and understanding of the serious imbalances which threaten them. 贵学教育 -北京雅思 版权所有 专注雅思培训十六年 5 / 27 关注新浪微博 雅思 教父 刘洪波 公众微信： liuhongbo-guixue 更新考试材料及资讯 4.2
17、The MSC has established a set of criteria by which commercial fisheries can be judged. 4.3 It was found that children from the noisy schools had higher blood pressure and were more easily distracted than those who attended the quiet schools. Moreover, there was no evidence of adaptability to the noi
18、se. In fact, the longer the children had attended the noisy schools, the more distractible they became. 剑 6 1.2 Theoretically, in the world of trade, shipping costs do not matter. Goods, once they have been made, are assumed to move instantly and at no cost from place to place. The real world, howev
19、er, is full of frictions. 1.3 Some scientists doubt the value of traditional knowledge because the occupation of the Arctic doesnt go back far enough. Others, however, point out that the first weather stations in the far north date back just 50 years. 2.1 It is common for supporters of road networks
20、 to reject the models of cities with good public transport by arguing that such systems would not work in their particular city. 2.3 Perhaps the most fundamental step in developing a sense of number is not the ability to count, but rather to see that a number is really an abstract idea instead of a
21、simple attachment to a group of particular objects. 3.1 But it is worth trying, for to understand the initial shock of those images is to understand the extraordinary power and magic of cinema, the unique, hypnotic quality 3.3 The monkey projects demonstrate that, compared with control animals that
22、eat normally, caloric-restricted monkeys have lower body temperatures and levels of the pancreatic hormone insulin, and they retain more youthful levels of certain hormones that tend to fall with age. 4.3 The more effort put in and the wider the whole school involvement, the more substantial the res
23、ults are likely to be. 剑 5 1.3 （媒体负面） People are clearly more curious about bad news than good. Newspapers and broadcasters are there to provide what the public wants. That, however, can lead to significant distortions of perception. 2.1 The impetus behind the development of these early plastics was
24、 generated by a number of factors - immense technological progress in the domain of chemistry, coupled with wider cultural changes, and the pragmatic need to find acceptable substitutes for dwindling supplies of luxury materials such as tortoiseshell and ivory. 2.3 There were several reasons why ori
25、ginal science continued to be written in Latin. The first was 贵学教育 -北京雅思 版权所有 专注雅思培训十六年 6 / 27 关注新浪微博 雅思 教父 刘洪波 公众微信： liuhongbo-guixue 更新考试材料及资讯 simply a matter of audience. A third reason why the writing of original science in English was delayed may have been to do with the linguistic inadequacy o
26、f English in the early modern period. 3.2 According to Siegel, international environmental organisations are beginning to pay closer attention to the region, partly because of the problems of erosion and pollution of the Nile delta, but principally because they fear the impact this situation could h
27、ave on the whole Mediterranean coastal ecosystem. But there are no easy solutions. 4.1 （开发旅游业） The market for tourism in remote areas is booming as never before. Countries all across the world are actively promoting their wilderness regions - such as mountains, Arctic lands, deserts, small islands a
28、nd wetlands to high-spending tourists. 剑 4 2.1 （语言习得 ） What makes a language endangered is not just the number of speakers, but how old they are. Language is also intimately bound up with culture, so it may be difficult to preserve one without the other. 2.2 Part of the incentive was financial, Dr L
29、aver said. The bottom line is that most general practitioners are business people. If they see potential clientele going elsewhere, they might want to be able to offer a similar service. 3.1 Many children may choose entrepreneurship because it allows them a degree of independence, is less exploitati
30、ve than many forms of paid-employment, and is flexible enough to allow them to participate in other activities such as education and domestic task. 4.1 No one theory can explain improvements in performance, but the most important factor has been genetics. Identifying genetically talented individuals
31、 is only the first step. 4.3 The problem of how health-care resources should be allocated or apportioned, so that they are distributed in both the most just and most efficient way, is not a new one. III. 十五句最新范文 【十五句逻辑模板范文之一】 【经典考题 -流行服饰讨论】 Nowadays the trend of fashion changes very rapidly, and gra
32、dually people become the slaves of it. Some people think that a person should choose comfortable clothes he or she likes, regardless of fashion. Do you agree or disagree? 贵学教育 -北京雅思 版权所有 专注雅思培训十六年 7 / 27 关注新浪微博 雅思 教父 刘洪波 公众微信： liuhongbo-guixue 更新考试材料及资讯 【刘洪波作品】 写作提纲 中立观点，两者皆可，个人选择。 穿着时尚增加自信自尊 穿着时尚是融
33、入流行文化，与时俱进的体现 The improvement of the living standard is believed to have caused higher demand for fashion, because people have much more money to afford it. However, there is a fear that people will lose their own tastes, and never find what they really need. My view is that to dress up fashion shou
34、ld be respected and it is also correct to choose the clothes people like. Being fashionable is healthy and brings some benefits to us. This is because seeking for beauty and wanting to look good are part of human nature. When some people start to wear stylishadj.时髦的 clothes like a superstar, they fe
35、el more confident and have good self-esteemn.自尊 , which is of course helpful and essential in some social and business occasions. Moreover, fashion is one element of the popular culture. For example, South Korean modern clothes and TV drama have been popular in other Asian countries for some time, a
36、nd lately PSYs “Gangnam Style” has even swept the world and almost everyone imitates his horse-riding dance. Being in fashion and following idols make people understand and involve in the popular culture and feel up-to-date in this fast-changing world. This is not to say that everyone should be fash
37、ion-consciousadj.时尚意识的，时装意识的 . Certainly, it is a personal choice to put on the comfortable clothes people are interested in. And since fashion changes over time, it would be better for people to pay more attention to something more meaningful in life, like pursuing knowledge, loving family and cher
38、ishing friendship. In sum, fashion should be respected, and at the same time people should have their own tastes of clothing style rather than blindly following the so-called “fashion”. Sometimes the plain clothes may mirror a persons inner peace. (279 words) 【参考译文】 生活水平的提升导致了对时装的需求提高，因为人们的购买力提升了。 但
39、存在一种担忧，人们将会失去自己的品味，找不到自己真正的需求。 重点句型 我的观点是穿着时装值得尊重，同时穿自己喜欢的衣服也没错。 穿着时尚是健康有益的，并带给我们一些好处。这是因为追求美和想外表好看是人类天性的一部分。当一些人开始像明星一样穿着时髦的衣物时，他们感觉更加自信和拥有良好的自尊，这在一些贵学教育 -北京雅思 版权所有 专注雅思培训十六年 8 / 27 关注新浪微博 雅思 教父 刘洪波 公众微信： liuhongbo-guixue 更新考试材料及资讯 社交和商业场合当然是有帮助和必要的。 而且，时装是流行文化的一个元素。例如，韩国的现代 服饰和韩剧在亚洲国家已经流行了一阵子， 最近鸟
40、叔的江南 Style 又席卷全球，大家都在模仿他的骑马舞。 有共鸣的例子让读者印象深刻 穿着时尚和追随偶像让人们理解和融入流行文化，并会感到在这个快速变化的世界中他们是与时俱进的。 这并不是说每个人都应该有意识的追求时装。当然，穿自己喜欢的舒适衣服是个人的选择。而且因为时装随着时间改变， 人们更应该把更多的注意力放在生命中更有意义的事情上，比如追求真知，热爱家庭，和珍惜友情。 思想升华 总之，时装应该被尊重，同时，人们应该有自己的穿着品味而非盲目的跟随那些所谓的时尚。 有些时候，朴素的衣着可以映射出一个人内心的平静。 思想再一次升华 【十五句逻辑模板范文之二】 【经典考题 -科技】 WRITI
41、NG TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Write at least 250 words. The range of technology is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. To what extent do you agree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
42、knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. 【刘洪波作品】 写作提纲 观点：不是科技而是社会财富分配不均导致的。 原因 1：政府的责任。 原因 2：科技其实还缩小贫富差距。举例：利用网站创业。 MODEL ANSWER The application of new technologies is one of the most important ways of making millionaires such as Bill Gates. However, discussion now centers on whether the t
43、echnology has also widened the gap between the rich and the poor. My view is that the improper distribution system of social wealth, rather than modern technology, has caused such a social problem. First, it is obvious that the government is the one most capable and responsible for solving any socia
44、l issue and ensuring social equality. In order to bridge this wealth gap, the most effective and direct method should be taxation leverage, by which the government can use the rich peoples tax money to subsidize the unfortunate. So, the technology should not become the scapegoat of the issue. Conver
45、sely, modern technologies indeed have provided great opportunities for the poor to be rich. For example, many people have become wealthy by setting their own commercial websites on 贵学教育 -北京雅思 版权所有 专注雅思培训十六年 9 / 27 关注新浪微博 雅思 教父 刘洪波 公众微信： liuhongbo-guixue 更新考试材料及资讯 Internet. Compared with traditional
46、companies that require large initial investment and higher operation cost, Internet is the cheaper and more accessible platform for ordinary people to make fortune. Those who harbor the view that the technology has polarized the distribution of wealth around the world believe that the poor countries
47、 are getting poorer due to lack of creative technologies. Of course, this is a real phenomenon. But paradoxically, the right solution for those nations is just to introduce advanced technologies to improve the social productivity, which is like the age-old chicken-or-egg question. In sum, modern tec
48、hnology plays a key role in filling the gap between the rich and poor not only for individuals, but for nations as well. In the era of the knowledge-based economy, the one who is diligent and can capitalize knowledge will eventually prevail. (292 words) 【参考译文】 新科技的运用是创造像比尔盖茨一样的百万富翁的重要方式之一。 但是现在的争论集中在科技是否也增大了贫富差距 。 读写互通 我的观点是不合理的社会财富分配体系而非现代科技，导致了这样一个社会问题。 首先，政府显然是最有能力和责任来解决任何一个社会问题和确保社会公平的。 为了缩小财富差距，最有效和最直接的方法应该是税收杠杆，通过它政府可以用富人纳税的钱去补贴穷人。因此，科技不应该成为这一问题的替罪羊。 重点句型 相反，现代科技事实上提供了巨大的机会为穷人致富。例如，通过在互联网上建立他们自己的商业网站，很多人已经变得富裕。 和需要巨大的初始投资和高昂的运营成本的传统公司相比，互联网对常人来说是一个更加便宜和可企及的制
