1、高分作文标志1:高考100词左右;四级120-150字;六级150180字;2、是否长短句交叉;3、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;,写好一篇作文的注意事项,1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approac
2、hes were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.,2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that
3、 ,3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge代替enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力),Computer and I By SimmyI never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my
4、mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.,very,
5、exciting,sb. be interested in sth.,search,a lot of,The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggerat
6、ion to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!,more and more popular,“与一致With ,development,( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into,now,sb. be interested in sth.,more and more people,The dawn of the new century witnessed 精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;,It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型说某事是毫不夸张的
7、,For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.,For a start 替换 To begin with,W
8、e can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法,our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动,Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides,Deliver 替换 send,There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the gro
9、wing violence ,*, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.这个句子有三个精彩之处,,首先There is no denying that这个句型,还有,however作为插入语,function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to,Emerging 代替 appearing ( fading 代替 disappearing ),Net citizen 网民,属于精彩用词,As a class
10、ic proverb goes, no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.We should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入语Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象,
11、 merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ),Every coin has two sides,important / good 等,a part of,bad,effects / influences,aspect,各位同学,上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点,作文怎么会不得高分呢!,1.individuals,characters, folks代 (people ,persons),2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect, pleasurable
12、 , excellent, outstanding代替good,3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad 如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive代替eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a resul
13、t, they find their academic records are less impressive.,4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many.注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用most, if not all ,代替most.,5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替so
14、me6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,hold the view that, it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因为是书面语,所以要加that)Ask not what your country can do for you; ask what you can do for your country.,7:affair ,business ,matter 代替thing,8: shared 代 common,9.reap huge f
15、ruits 代替get much benefit ),10:for my part ,from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion,11:Increasing(ly),growing 代替more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.,12.little i
16、f anything, 或little or nothing代替hardly,13.beneficial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of,14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 代替customer,15.exceedingly,extremely 代替very,16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable . 代替 necessary, evitable,17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb
17、代替sb take interest in,18.capture ones attention代替attract ones attention.,19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect,20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear,21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 代替cause.,22. There are several reasons behind sth 代替.reasons for sth,23
18、.desire 代替want.,24.pour attention to 代替pay attention to,25.bear in mind that 代替remember,26. enjoy, possess 代替have(注意process是过程的意思),27. interaction代替communication,28.frown on sth代替 be against , disagree with sth,29.to name only a few, as an example代替 for example,30. next to/virtually impossible,代替nea
19、rly impossible,Wish you success,; http:/ 酒店布草 cth36dwc 天的神,说起居室太冷些,先叫关严了窗子、拉紧了帘子,还说冷,就移到里头拔步床里了。闺房里的事,悄没声儿的,外头也不知道。那鬼哭,就挨着起居室的窗子响起。宝音惊醒,陪睡的是洛月,也早被吓醒了,抚慰宝音:“姑娘莫怕”自己牙关却打战来。手挨着宝音,指头也是抖的。宝音笑了:“原来你比我还怕。”反过来搂着她,洛月觉着 的怀抱比自己温暖、手也比自己稳定,不由问:“姑娘您不怕?”宝音含笑道:“我有个不怕鬼的法子。”鬼哭声恰在此时停了。窗外沉寂得不怀好意。不知什么时候、从凭什么方向,又会来一次可怕袭击
20、。洛月瑟缩着身子,问:“什么法子?”“你我都会死,死了都会变成鬼,”宝音冷然,“被鬼所侵,大不了一死,死之后,又可与它斗一场。老鬼狠么?你只要死得比它惨,大可比它更狠,届时谁强谁弱还不一定呢。”洛月闻所未闻,难免骇然,转念一想,却大大的有理,任它窗外鬼哭又起,胆子顿时肥了,依偎在 身边,竟安然睡去。第二十三章 芙蓉泣血移宝屋(1)第二天早晨,明蕙急不可耐等韩毓笙垂危的消息,等来的却是她自己的人面青唇白过来报告:“那花成精了!”饶明蕙胆大包天,脑子里也“嗡”一下:“胡说八道!什么精不精的?”“是真的呀!”那几个男女,都是走刘四姨娘的路子进苏府做事的刘家人,园子里搬搬弄弄,赚了不少,都是刨土,合着
21、比田里赚得多,平常唯刘四姨娘母女之马首是瞻,但这会儿,再借他们八个胆子,看他们也不敢再到表 院子里去了!他们抽抽答答道:“昨天挖的那树流血了!”是天刚蒙蒙亮,起得最早的人就发现,红白两棵芙蓉树,挖断的根须、剪断的枝子,断口都在渗出血来。“一派胡言!”明蕙怒道,“准是表姐在枝上抹了红颜料,吓唬你们!”刘家人们很不满意的回答她:“姑娘!咱们吃了这么多年饭,抹上去的、还是渗出来的,那还是分得清的。”再说,那么多断口,大大小小、有的还藏在泥土、其他根须或枝叶的里头,居然全能抹一遍?也近乎神迹了吧!明蕙自己也心慌,但再慌不能露出来,色厉内荏喝问:“那流出来的红汁,有血腥味吗?”“这倒没有”“却又来!”明蕙找到了主意,“没有血味,叫什么血?你揉坏了指甲花、劈开西瓜,都有红汁,这怎么能叫血呢?!”说是这么说的但又不是这么说的!刘家人不跟七姑娘吵,规规矩矩的告退,告退前劝一句话:“姑娘还是小心些罢!”明蕙是要小心了,还用他们讲?芙蓉泣血,兹事体大,如何瞒得住?连着那“半夜鬼哭”,一下子传出去,并且到了老太太的耳朵边!不用宝音拜谒老太太诉苦,老太太自己过问了:“那几棵树为什么要移?”下头回答:“生了虫病”老太太哼一声,都已经,