1、短文改错 1假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。Dear Grandpa,How are you those days? I have been missing you very much after I went to college a y
2、ear ago. Whenever I think of the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant view there. You told me the name of different plants and their characteristics.
3、 Gradually, I became interesting in biology and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since well do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then. 121
4、短文改错 1【小题 1】those these【小题 2】after-since【小题 3】happilyhappy【小题 4】was child-was a child【小题 5】fallfell【小题 6】name-names【小题 7】innteresting interested【小题 8】enter into the college-去掉 into【小题 9】arere going to do-is going to do【小题 10】use-used【解析】【小题 1】指这些日子，你怎么样？而不是那些日子。【小题 2】根据上下文时态及句子的意思：自从我一年前上大学，我一直在思念你。
5、【小题 3】feel 后面接形容词而不是副词构成系表结构。【小题 4】child 是可数名词单数形式，这里指当我是一个孩子的时候。【小题 5】本文是过去时，所以这里使用 fall 的过去式 fell.【小题 6】根据下文的 different plants and their characteristics 说明这里使用复数形式。【小题 7】对人作主语进行修饰，使用 interested.【小题 8】enter 是及物动词，后面直接接宾语，不需要接介词。【小题 9】本句的主语是 my friend Ann 与 together with me,没有关系，谓语动词使用单数形式。【小题 10】本句
6、为被动语态。短文改错 2Which is known to all, nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life. In it, we can not only read news at home and abroad but also get so much information as possible. We are often send e-mails to our classmates or our teachers or make telephone call to
7、our families as well as our friends. However, we can go to school on the net, read different kinds of books and even teach myself English. We can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer games on the net. We could do shopping even without leaving our homes.短文改错 2【小题 1】Which 改为 As； playing
8、 后加 a 【小题 2】In 改为 On； so 改为 as【小题 3】去掉 are； call 改为 calls【小题 4】However 改为 Besides/Moreover； myself 改为 ourselves【小题 5】watching 改为 watch【小题 6】could 改为 can【解析】【小题 1】定语从句，从句中缺少主语，只能用 as 做代词，指代 nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life.这句话，which 不能指代一句话。固定搭配 play a p
9、art in 在。中是。的一部分【小题 2】“it”指代“Internet” 在网上，用 on on the Internet 为固定搭配固定搭配 as much as possible 尽可能的多【小题 3】句意：我们通常给老师同学发邮件 这里是一般现在时，不用 are打电话 make telephone calls 由上下文可知，不止一个电话，故用复数形式【小题 4】前后两句话不存在转折，由递进的意味，故用 Besides/Moreover句子的主语是“ 我们” 故此处应是“我们自学英语”故用 ourselves【小题 5】watch sports 是与 enjoy music 和 pla
10、y computer games 并列存在的，都是 can 后面的宾语。都应该用动词原形【小题 1】本文时态为现在时，故用 can 不用 could短文改错 3It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free. China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for them. The Chinese once used about 300 million of p
11、lastic shopping bags a day, which has caused environmentally pollution because plastic bags are not easy to break down. So the Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea. They use
12、 old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use these cloth bags instead of plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help protecting the environment. 短文改错 3【小题 1】get 改成 Got 【小题 2】but 改成 and/so【小题 3】去掉 of 【小题 4】environmentally 改成 environmental 【小
13、题 5】is 改成 are 【小题 6】student students【小题 7】 a 改成 an【小题 8】去掉 then【小题 9】our 改成 their【小题 10】protecting 改成 Protect【解析】【小题 1】since 后面的句子用过去时表示自从过去发生的事情到现在【小题 2】上下文之间存在着因果关系而不是转折关系【小题 3】量词前面有确定数词修饰时，后面通常不要 of,(除非表示特定范围【小题 4】后面的名词，那么应该使用形容词修饰名词【小题 5】中国人做主语，谓语动词用复数形式【小题 6】some 后面接复数名词【小题 7】后面的词以元音开始【小题 8】The
14、n 多余，已经有了 and 连接【小题 9】句子主语是 they，他们认为是他们的责任【小题 10】it 是形式主语，不定式是真正的主语短文改错 4 Yesterday I attended a classmate partyI was very happy to see my old friends, that I hadnt met for years So I drank a lotAfter the party, I drive home though my classmate had tried to persuade me not to I always believed that
15、 as a skilled driver, drinking a little did no harm to drivingOn the way to home, the wine began to take effectAll of sudden, I cracked my car against a sign on the roadLuckily, a policeman came towards meHe fined me and said: “Drunk driving is a terribly thingYou can end up hurt yourself, and other
16、 innocent people life” Till then, I realized that the effects of drunk driving could be deadly for all those involvedMany people who drink and drive do not think of the serious consequences of their action unless it is too lateSo I appeal to everybody never to drink and drive! Cherish your life! 短文改
17、错 4.【答案】【小题 1】that who/whom 【小题 2】drive-drove【小题 3】classmate- classmates【小题 4】on my way home【小题 5】all of a sudden【小题 6】luckily- unluckily【小题 7】terribly- terrible【小题 8】hurt- hurting【小题 9】people- peoples 【小题 10】unless - until【解析】【小题 1】非限制性短语从句不能用 that 引导。【小题 2】本文是过去时为主。【小题 3】根据上文可知参加同学聚会，那么应该有很多同学。【小题
18、 4】home 是副词，前面不要加介词。【小题 5】固定词组 all of a sudden 突然【小题 6】这里应该使用副词，修饰整个句子。【小题 7】后面是名词 thing，应该使用形容词修饰。【小题 8】固定词组 end up doing 以做某事结束【小题 9】根据后面的 life 可知这里应该使用所有格的形式。【小题 10】固定句型 notuntil直到才短文错误 5Dear Wang Ping，Im very glad to have received a letter you sent me two weeks beforeIve been thinking about the
19、question you ask meIn my opinion，you should come back after you finish your studies at abroadFor one reason，what you are studying is bad needed nowadays in ChinaIt will be quite easy of you to find a good jobIn fact，I know that a few big company in our city are hoping to hire people like youFor othe
20、r reason， I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as we are getting oldTherefore ，I think its a good idea for you to returnSo what are you waiting? Best wishesYours，Li Hua短文改错 5【小题 1】a 改为：the【小题 2】before 改为：ago【小题 3】ask 改为：asked【小题 4】at 去掉 【小题 5】bad 改为：badly【小题 6】o
21、f 改为：for【小题 7】company 改为：companies【小题 8】other 改为：another【小题 9】we 改为：they【小题 10】waiting 加入 for【解析】【小题 1】特指你寄给我的信 【小题 2】两周前用 two weeks ago 表达【小题 3】你问我问题是过去发生的事情，使用用过去时。【小题 4】abroad 是副词，前面不需要介词【小题 5】副词：迫切地 用 badly 表示。 【小题 6】Easy 不是表示性格特征的形容词，所以用 for,不用 of【小题 7】a few 修饰可数名词复数形式【小题 8】后面给的是单数名词，所以用 anothe
22、r:另外一个【小题 9】they 指代 your parents【小题 10】固定词组 wait for 等待。短文错误 6What should you do when your parents become angrily? If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them about it. Remembering not to shout at them. They usually will try to change. But they will take some times to change becaus
23、e they always get angry, and that is all they know. You might have to change for your method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your parents that they expect like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the floors. If this doesnt work, bring in friend that you feel comfortable, a
24、nd have them help you. 短文改错 6【小题 1】angrily-angry【小题 2】got-get【小题 3】remembering-remember【小题 4】they-it【小题 5】times-time【小题 6】Change for 去掉 for【小题 7】any-some【小题 8】clean-cleaning【小题 9】friend 前加 a【小题 10】comfortable 后加 with【解析】【小题 1】系动词 become 后面接形容词。【小题 2】本文是现在时为主。【小题 3】本句是祈使句，以动词原形开头。【小题 4】it 指代上文提及的父母努力
25、改变这件事情。【小题 5】time 指时间是不可数名词。【小题 6】change 是及物动词，直接加宾语。【小题 7】肯定句使用 some.【小题 8】这是几个并列结构，都是动名词形式。【小题 9】根据下文的 him or her 可知这里是指一个朋友。【小题 10】定语从句中的介词，that 指代 a friend 作为 with 的宾语。短文错误 7A Frenchman was once visiting LondonHe wished to take a walk to see a cityBut he was afraid he might get lost because he k
26、new no words of EnglishSo before he left his hotel, he stopped in the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street that he was stayingThen he walked onAt last, he got being lostAfter several hours he found a policemanThe Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman
27、that he didnt know the name of his hotel, and he knew the name of the streetHe then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebookIt was read: “One-way street” 短文改错 7【小题 1】a 改成 the【小题 2】before 改成 after【小题 3】in 改成 at【小题 4】names 改成 name【小题 5】that 改成 where【小题 6】去掉 being【小题 7】explain 后面加 to【小题 8】an
28、d 改成 but【小题 9】that 改成 What【小题 10】改成去掉 was【解析】【小题 1】前面已经提到 London 这个城市，故用 the。【小题 2】在他离开宾馆后，他在第一个拐角处停了下来。【小题 3】在外面的拐角处应用 at.【小题 4】这条街道的名称，不可能是复数。【小题 5】先行词 the street 在定语从句中做地点状语， 故用 where。【小题 6】get lost 迷路【小题 7】explain to sb. sth 向某人解释某事【小题 8】他不知道宾馆的名字，与知道街道的名字是转折关系，故用 but。【小题 9】他给警察看他所记录的东西，copy 后面缺
29、少宾语，故用 what。【小题 10】笔记本上写着什么，用 read 或 say。且不能用被动。短文错误 8An old man whose eyesight was failing comes to stay in a hotel, with a bottle of whisky in his hand On the wall was a fly he took for a nailThe moment he tried to hang the bottle on it, they fell and brokeWhen the landlady discovered what had bee
30、n happened, she decided to do him favorThe next morning when he was out, the hotel worker hammered a nail exact where the “fly” had beenWhen the old man came back, the smell of the whisky reminded him to the accidentSeeing the “fly” was there again, he was so angry that he slapped it with all his st
31、rengthsAt hearing the loud cry, the landlady rushing inTo her surprise, the poor old man was seating on the floor with his teeth clenched and the palm of his hand bleeding短文改错 8【小题 1】comes-came 【小题 2】they- it 【小题 3】been 去掉 【小题 4】him 后加 a 【小题 5】exact- exactly【小题 6】to-of 【小题 7】strengths- strength 【小题
32、8】At-On 【小题 9】rushing- rushed 【小题 10】seating-seated 【解析】【小题 1】本文整体都是过去时。【小题 2】it 指代上文的 bottle.【小题 3】happen 没有被动语态。【小题 4】固定词组 do sb a favor,帮某人一个忙。【小题 5】用副词修饰动词短语 hammered a nail【小题 6】固定词组 remind sb of sth 让某人想起某事；【小题 7】strength 是一个不可数名词，没有复数形式。【小题 8】On 一就.【小题 9】这里要的是一个谓语动词。【小题 10】seated 是一个形容词，表示状态。
33、短文错误 9Our class recently has had a heated discussion about if the historic old buildings should be tear down. Opinions varies from one to another. Some students support the protection of those buildings so they are carriers of history through which the future generations can deep understand the deve
34、lopment of our city. Beside, the historic old buildings can also arouse peoples love for the city. In the contrary, some other students think that the old buildings may hold back the development of economy and the process of modernization. It may affect the beauty of the city. As far Im concerned, I
35、 approve of the former opinion. But if a building is worth of little, it may be proper to demolish(摧毁) it and make better use of that area. We should just weight the advantages and disadvantages. 短文改错 9.【答案】【小题 1】if 改成 weather, 【小题 2】tear 改成 torn; 【小题 3】varies 改成 vary, 【小题 4】so 改成 because, 【小题 5】dee
36、p 改成 deeply； 【小题 6】Beside 改成 Besides, 【小题 7】In the contrary 改成 On the contrary； 【小题 8】As far Im concerned 改成 As far as Im concerned；【小题 9】worth of little 改成 worth little；【小题 10】weight 改成 weigh 【解析】【小题 1】if 引导的宾语从句不能放在介词后面。【小题 2】本句是被动语态，应该使用过去分词。【小题 3】opinions 是主语，是复数形式，故谓语动词也要用复数。【小题 4】后面是解释原因的句子。【小
37、题 5】修饰动词用副词。 【小题 6】副词 besides 而且，表示递进关系。【小题 7】固定词组 On the contrary 恰恰相反。【小题 8】固定结构 As far as Im concerned 在我看来；【小题 9】worth 后面可以直接加代词。【小题 10】动词 weigh 表示衡量；短文错误 10One day, did not feeling well, Mr. Smith went to the hospital to have him examinedWhen he was given the test paper, he greatly shocked“Am I
38、 dying?” He immediately feels very sick Filled with sadness, he went back home, taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will“Maybe a doctor made a mistake”, Mr. Smith thought and went to the hospital to have other examinationTo his great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didnt have cance
39、r in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautifulMr. Smith went out for his most favourite sport happily . 短文改错 10.【答案】【小题 1】删除 did【小题 2】him 改成 himself【小题 3】feels 改成 felt 【小题 4】shocked 前面加 was【小题 5】taking 改成 took【小题 6】a 改成 The【小题 7】other 改成 another【小题 8】but 改成 and【小题 9】in 改成 at【小题 10】去掉 most 【解析】【小题
40、 1】分词的否定式前面宾语组动词【小题 2】反身代词表示强调【小题 3】全文都是过去时【小题 4】形容词前面应该有系动词【小题 5】连续 3 个动词并列都用过去式【小题 6】通知那个医生【小题 7】这里是指再做一个检查【小题 8】上下文是顺接关系而不是转折关系【小题 9】notat all 一点也不【小题 10】favourite 本身就是最高级短文错误 11Over a year ago, my friend was ready to return after complete his tour in Singapore. He didnt expect that he was about
41、to get on his airplane when he stopped politely by one of the worker of the airport. He was told that he was not allowed to aboard. My friend had thought that there must be anything wrong with his ticket. The worker told him that was not his ticket but the book he hadnt return to, which he had borro
42、wed from a library, that caused the trouble. Certainly, my friend didnt board but missed the flight. He wasnt permitted to take the flight home a week late until he returned the book to the library.短文改错 11【小题 1】complete 改成 Completing 【小题 2】He 后面加 was【小题 3】worker 改成 workers【小题 4】aboard 改成 board【小题 5】
43、Anything 改成 something【小题 6】that 改成 it 或 that 后加 it【小题 7】 去掉 to【小题 8】but 改成 and【小题 9】the 改成 a 【小题 10】late 改成 Later【解析】【小题 1】after 是介词，后面要接动名词【小题 2】was（这里是被动语态）【小题 3】one of +名次复数【小题 4】动词登机【小题 5】这里是肯定句【小题 6】it 指代上句内容【小题 7】return 表示归还，是及物动词【小题 8】上下文是并列关系【小题 9】泛指任何一个航班【小题 10】放在一段时间以后用 later短文错误 12Dear Ed
44、itor,Recently, my classmates have had a heated discussion about that we should have optional courses in high schools. Some students were in favor of optional courses. They say interest is best teacher and our spare time will be colorful and meaningful. Students can not only enlarge their knowledges
45、but also improve their abilities.However, others are against the idea, said that optional courses will take up too much time as well as energy. In addition to, some optional courses have something to do with the College Entrance Examination. They are afraid theyll fall behind their classmates if the
46、y will take the optional courses. Id like to take one or two of the optional courses, which, I think, will certain benefit me a lot.Yours trulyLi Hua短文改错 12【小题 1】thatwhether【小题 2】wereare【小题 3】is 后加 the【小题 4】ourtheir 【小题 5】knowledgesknowledge【小题 6】saidsaying【小题 7】去掉 to【小题 8】somethingnothing【小题 9】去掉 i
47、f 后的 will【小题 10】certaincertainly【解析】【小题 1】后面的宾语从句讨论的是不确定的事实，用 whether.【小题 2】本文的基本时态是现在时。【小题 3】形容词最高级前面加定冠词 the.【小题 4】上下文可知是指他们的时间是多姿多彩的。【小题 5】知识是不可数名词。【小题 6】分词在句中作状语。Other 与 say 构成主动关系，使用现在分词。【小题 7】In addition 单独使用表示：另外。【小题 8】根据上下文可知这些选修课与高考关系不大。【小题 9】条件句中用一般现在时代替将来时。【小题 10】副词修饰动词。短文错误 13Once upon a
48、 time there was a rich man. He had a lot of money, but he felt unhappy all the times. Finally, the rich man left for home to look for happiness. He visited many places and met many rich men. All of them said they were not happy, too. On his way home, the rich man saw a farmer work in the field. He w
49、ent up to the farmer and asked, “Could you tell me if you felt happy?” “Yes, Im quite happier. I always feel satisfying about everything in my life,” the farmer answered. “Please tell me how you find happiness,” asked the rich man. The farmer answered with smile on his face. “Its very easy of me to answer the question. If you work hardly, have three meals a day and go to bed early without worries, youll be the h
