1、Unit 1 Friendship,写作训练与指导,Week 1 建议信,例题展示：（2014年安徽）为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开设了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假如你是该栏目的编辑Jamine,收到了一封署名为Worried 的求助信。 信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，让正常的生活和学习受到了影响。请用英文写一封回信。,Hi, Worried, Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. And Im willing to help to get out of the
2、situation. Here are my suggestions for you.First of all, the most significant thing is to set a goal, work out a plan and carry out your plan step by step.Having realized that your time is limited, youll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation. Secondly, If I were you, I would take
3、a walk in the evening with my,friends. Moreover, listening to some soft music does relax your mood and give you a new start. In the end, kid as we are, its our duty to control ourselves, which will greatly help your lives and study.I sincerely hope you could take my suggestions into consideration.Yo
4、urs,Jamine,语言积累： 1.significant adj. 重要的，意义深远的，有重大意义的 2. moreover adv.而且，此外。 The new manager is intelligent and hardworking. Moreover, he is very charming.,建议信的写作攻略,1)建议信是对收信人关于某是提出建议和忠告. 2)建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由. 建议的内容,和原因要合情合理,语气一定要缓和. 3)建议信要简明扼要,目的明确,合情合理,且要有说服力.,满分模板,Dear Bob,Im glad to receiv
5、e your letter asking for my advice on how to _(引出对方需要建议的主题）. Here are a few suggestions.(引出作者建议）.First, its important to _.Then , it also helps to _ . Besides, it should be a good idea to _.You can also_. (根据要求用不同的句式表达）.As to _, I suggest _(有时根据需要要提到另一方面）. In addition, _(其他的建议）.,Im sure _(预测可能的结果， 对
6、方以行动的信心和决心）.Im looking forward to _(表达愿望）./ I hope you will find the suggestions useful.Yours sincerely,Lihua,夺人眼球的首句,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to develop good learning habits. 2. Im glad to know that you are going to enter university and its my great pleasur
7、e to give you some suggestions of choosing a major. 3.Concerning your request, I would like to offer my advice on how to keep fit.,韵味无穷的结尾句,1.I will be glad if you will consider my suggestions. 2.I hope my suggestions will prove of value. 3.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/ recommend
8、ations practical/ useful/ helpful.,练习以下表示建议的句子,既然你这么喜欢英语，为什么不参加一个英语俱乐部呢？ 我建议你多读一些关于中国文化的书籍。 如果你能每天都读英语文章是一个不错的主意。为什么不少喝点酒，参加锻炼，不抽烟，多吃水果和蔬菜呢？如果我是你，我就尝试另一种办法。 6. 在你目前的情况下，似乎找一个兼职工作会有帮助。 7. 如果您能在说英语的国家找一个笔友也是一个不错的办法。 8. 我真诚地希望你能考虑我的建议。,1.既然你这么喜欢英语，为什么不参加一个英语俱乐部呢？ Now that you like English so much, why
9、not join an English club? 2.我建议你多读一些关于中国文化的书籍。 I suggest that you read as many books about Chinese culture as you can. 3.如果你能每天都读英语文章是一个不错的主意。It would be a good idea if you read English articles every day.,4.为什么不少喝点酒，参加锻炼，不抽烟，多吃水果和蔬菜呢？ Why not drink less, take exercise, stop smoking and eat more fru
10、it and vegetables? 5.如果我是你，我就尝试另一种办法。 If I were you, I would try another way.,6.在你目前的情况下，似乎找一个兼职工作会有帮助。 In your current situation, it seems to be helpful to find a part-time job. 7. 如果您能在说英语的国家找一个笔友也是一个不错的办法。 It would be also a good idea if you could find a pen pal in English-speaking countries . 8.
11、 我真诚地希望你能考虑我的建议。 I sincerely hope you can consider my suggestion.,Writing Task,假如你是李琼，你的两位朋友Anna 和Mary 前几天发生了争吵，5 月22 日是Anna 的生日，Mary想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情， 因此特地发来邮件咨询你的建议，请你以以下要点给Mary 回一封邮件： 1.送礼物的目的。2.礼物的选择。3.选择的理由。 4.其他建议。5. 你的愿望。 提示词: 与某人和解 make up with采用其他方式 adopt other means Dear Mary，Yours， Li Qio
12、ng,Remember: good handwriting also matters/counts.,Dear Mary，Im glad to hear that you are considering making up with Anna. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for her.As far as I know, Anna likes taking exercise by riding a bike. In the meanwhile, you can often go on an outg
13、oing by bike together, which is helpful in rebuilding your friendship. Besides ,riding a bike is an environmentally friendly means of transport. Its convenient for her to get around as well. Apart from giving her a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling ,seeing a movie, having dinner or going shopping together. No matter what you do ,being sincere is the most important. I really hope that you can be good friends forever.Best wishes!Yours， Li Qiong,
