1、课 题 Writing 第 5 教时教学目标1. How to reply the suggestion letter2. How to write better sentences and combine several sentences into one sentence重、难点 How to reply the suggestion letter教学过程 修改意见Step One: GreetingStep Two: Review the methods of writing the suggesting letterStep Three: Lead in 在第一单元我们学习了如何写建
2、议信。在日常生活中，我们常会对别人的建议作出回复。为了帮助同学们写好回复建议信， 特提出几点简要的建议。(1)信文要素要齐全。(信文要素见第一单元“语篇写作”)(2)感谢对方的建议。(不管你接受或拒绝对方的建议都需表示感谢)(3)表明态度，扼要说明你接受或拒绝对方建议的理由。Step Four: An example of replying the suggestion letter假设你是李华，也是高二学生。请阅读下面王颖的建议信，然后表明你是接受或拒绝她的建议，并说明理由。写作要求：五句话基础写作。字数：80100 词左右。Dear Li Hua，Its a long time since
3、 I wrote to you last time. I hope everything is going on well with you. Recently we have learnt simple English poems，which are easy to learn and to recite. So I suggest you should learn to write some and share them with your classmates. If you would like to do this，I will be willing to help you.Your
4、s，Wang Ying写作步骤第一步：审题，阅读王颖的建议信，找出信中内容重点I suggest you should learn to write some and share them with your classmates. If you would like to do this，I will be willing to help you.第二步：表明自己的态度-接受或拒绝她的建议第三步：接受或拒绝建议的理由理由 1：英文诗歌押韵、节奏感强，令人难以选词表达感受理由 2：缺乏自信和丰富想象力第四步：想得到更多的有关于写诗歌的建议Task One: Translate them int
5、o English 在我的观点看来 in my opinion/ view, from my point of view受到某人的来信 receive ones letter和别人分享思想看法 share thoughts with others表达某人的感受 express ones feeling缺乏信心和丰富的想象力 be lack of confidence and rich imagination尽某人最大的努力做某事 try ones best to do sth.Task Two: translate the Chinese sentences into English 1. 我
6、很高兴收到你的来信，很多谢你宝贵的建议。Im glad to receive your letter and thank you for your valuable advice. 2. 在我看来，对于我们来说学习写简单的英文诗歌是必不可少的。From my point of view，its essential for us to learn to write simple English poems.3. 和别人分享我们自己的观点是不可或缺的。Its essential for us to share our thoughts with others.4. 大多数英文诗歌有很强的节奏感Mo
7、st English poems have strong rhythm. 5. 我不知道怎么选最好的词语表达我的感情，因此我感到很迷惑。I dont know how to choose best words to express my feelings. So I feel very confused.6. 更糟糕的是，我缺乏信心和丰富的想象力。Worse still, I am lack of confidence and rich imagination.7. 我仍然想知道如何写诗歌。I still wonder how to write poems.8. 我会尽我最大的努力克服困难的。
8、Ill try my best to overcome difficulties.9. 无论如何，成为一名著名诗人是我的梦想。Anyway，to be a famous poet is my dream.Task Three: Combine night sentences into five ones.2. 在我看来，对于我们来说学习写简单的英文诗歌是必不可少的。From my point of view，its essential for us to learn to write simple English poems.3. 和别人分享我们自己的观点是不可或缺的。Its essentia
9、l for us to share our thoughts with others.合并: From my point of view，its essential for a senior 2 student to learn to write simple English poems and share our deepest thoughts with others.4. 大多数英文诗歌有很强的节奏感Most English poems have strong rhythm. 5. 我不知道怎么选最好的词语表达我的感情，因此我感到很迷惑。I dont know how to choose
10、 best words to express my feelings. So I feel very confused.合并： I dont know how to choose best words to express my feelings for most English poems have strong rhythm, so I feel very confused.6. 更糟糕的是，我缺乏信心和丰富的想象力。Worse still, I am lack of confidence and rich imagination.7. 我仍然想知道如何写诗歌。I still wonder
11、 how to write poems.8. 我会尽我最大的努力克服困难的。Ill try my best to overcome difficulties.合并：Worse still，being lack of confidence and rich imagination，I still wonder how to write and Ill try my best overcome difficulties.答案：Dear Wang Ying，Im glad to receive your letter and thank you very much for your valuable
12、 advice. From my point of view，its essential for a senior 2 student to learn to write simple English poems and share our deepest thoughts with others. However，most English poems rhyme，have strong rhythm with a lot of repetition which requires to be mastered，making me confused sometimes as I dont kno
13、w how to choose best words to express my feelings. Worse still，being lack of confidence and rich imagination，I still wonder how to write but Ill try my best to conquer it with your encouragement.Anyway，to be a famous poet like you is my dream.Thank you!Yours，Li Hua教学注：课题用三号字加粗，其它用五号字，行距用固定值、20 磅，双面打印。反思
