1、高中英语写作：把低分词变高分词，让作文上一个档次,Excellence comes from constant and intensive practice!,优秀来自恒久而专注的练习！,在英语作文阅卷过程中，老师会对一些“高级”词汇尤为偏爱。但是，大多数同学根本不具备单词升级意识，一想到“好”，就是“good”;一想到“坏”，就是“bad”;一想到“美丽”就是“beautiful”。当老师一天批阅上千份“内容相同、语言低龄”的作文时，他的痛苦感受可想而知。因此，你一定要避免这些“低能词汇”，让自己的词汇升级、升级再升级!那么，什么样的单词最能够吸引阅卷老师的好感?,原则一：晚词优先老师偏爱“
2、学得晚”的单词，因为使用学得比较晚的单词，可以体现一个人“学以致用”的意识。如果一个意思既可以用初中单词来表达，又可以用高二、高三单词来表达，那尽量选择高二、高三的单词，如：,困难的重要的美丽的,1.difficult2.important3.beautiful,challenging,vital; essential; significant,appealing动人的; attractive; charming; fascinating迷人的,原则二：短语优先在阅卷老师看来，活用短语是一个考生能力的体现。因此，我们可以掌握一些将某些常见单词转化为短语的用法，如：,1. 参加 join2. 使
3、用 use3. 拜访 visit最常见的换词手段 very important very difficult very beautiful very useful very helpful very harmful very significant very necessary very beneficial very valuable,take part in ; participate in,make good use of; take advantage of,pay a visit to,of great importance,of great difficulty,of great
4、beauty,of great use,of great help,of great harm,of great significance,of great necessity,of great benefit,of great value,原则三：“具体化”单词优先请先对比以下几组句子：,I go to school everyday.2. I ride to school everyday.,感觉到例句2要比例句1好。究其原因，是例句2中的 ride 比例句1中的 go 更加具体：go只表达了“去”的意思，而ride不但表达出“去”的意思，还能表达出具体的交通方式。也就是说，例句2表达的信
5、息量比例句1更加丰富。,Mr Wang is a good teacher.Mr Wang is a kind, patient and knowledgeable teacher.,例句1只表达出Mr Wang是一个“好”老师，而到底“好”在哪些方面，却没有具体说清楚; 例句2则清楚地告诉读者，Mr Wang好在三个方面：和蔼(kind)、耐心(patient)以及知识丰富(knowledgeable)。因此，我们必须学会换用更为具体的单词表达我们的思想，如：,1. learn-; 2. a good teacher-,1. learn-;,researchpick up 偶然学到；顺便学到
6、；轻松学到master,2. a good teacher-,A kind, patient and knowledgeable 博学的English teacher.,当然，除了替换某些表意抽象的单词，我们还可以通过增加细节成分，使表达更为具体，如，例句2可以加上同伴、心情等信息，进一步改写成：,I ride to school everyday.,I, together with Tom and Jerry, rode to the Zhongshan park yesterday, feeling rather excited.,同样的，例句4也可以加上一个定语从句，写出Mr Wang到
7、底擅长哪些事情，如：可以看到，例句5和例句6两个句子采用“具体化”的手段，将原本毫无生气的句子顿时变得生动形象了。综上所述，想让你的表达“具体化”，一共有两种常用方法：,原则四：大纲词汇的衍生词优先 在高中英语中，我们已经涉及到了词根词缀的知识。运用这些知识，可以将很多高中词汇衍生为四六级词汇甚至托福、雅思词汇。如果能够熟练使用一两个这种词汇，你的作文肯定“碉堡了”!举例如下，看看后面的替换词都是由哪些单词变来的?,1.当然 certainly2. 不开心 sad,obviously明显地Undoubtedly毫无疑问地Evidently显然地,discouraged气馁的Depressed沮
8、丧的Downhearted垂头丧气的low-spirited意志消沉的,可以看出，这里列举的“大纲词汇衍生词”看上去都相当“有水平”，但都是由大纲中的简单单词加上某些前缀、后缀变来的，可以说又好记，又好用，你学会了吗?只要运用以上四种方法，在平时的学习中不断积累和使用“闪光高分词”，一定能让你的作文绽放出最美的光辉!,Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party. T
9、hey usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular. But I think that its better to help other people. We know that its important to learn to help other people. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. People will help y
10、ou because youve helped them and youll be happy,Improve this composition, try!,( 1) Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party.（用where定语从句）(2) They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes.（合并句子）(3)
11、Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular （用which定语从句）. (4) But (替换） I think （替换） that its better to help other people.(5) We know that its important to learn to help others. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. (6) People will help you in return and youll be
12、 happy （用For one thing, For another 替换）.,Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways.,Usually, a party is held where best friends as well as relatives can get together and have fun.,They usually buy a small gift with which to express their best wishes.,Sometimes, people send
13、 short messages too, which is becoming very popular .,However, as far as Im concerned, its better to do something for others.,As is known to all, its of importance to help others. Helping others on ones birthday can be not only meaningful but also do you a lot of good.,For one thing people will help
14、 you in return; for another, youll get happiness out of that.,Nowadays, students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways. Usually, a party is held for best friends as well as relatives can get together and to have fun. They usually buy a small gift with which to express their best wishes.
15、 Sometimes, people send short messages too, which is becoming very popular . However, as far as Im concerned, its better to do something for others. As is known to all, its of importance to help others. Helping others on ones birthday can be not only meaningful but also do you a lot of good. For one
16、 thing people will help you in return; for another, youll get happiness out of that. In short, the best way to celebrate our birthdays is to help others.,提高句子档次的小结：1. 用高级结构和词汇 2. 用分词短语合并句子 用介词短语合并句子 用独立主格结构合并句子 用连接词连接句子3. 用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句4. 用不同结构和词汇5. 合适的过渡性词汇,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词, Kate is a new student.
17、 She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find it hard to understand her dialect.,Kate, a new student from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.,用一句话表达,不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。,第
18、二步：分别翻译这几个简单句, Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., Thi
19、s will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study,because not everyone is good at learning English., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn
20、English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese study,方法2：,because not everyone is good at learning English.,学会使用复合句和非谓语动词,你来试试,参考词汇：错别字: wrongly-
21、written characters网络语言：web language,要求：1. 用两句话表达表格内容 2. 两句话要有连贯性,第一句（两个信息点）： 1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。, There are many wrongly-written characters in students compositions.,The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages
22、 when chatting on line.,合并句子：, They often use web languages when chatting on line.,1. They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters,第二句:1. 每天有很多作业做 2. 没有记住生字。, They have much homework to do every day.,2. With so much homework to do, they fail to memorize th
23、e new characters.,3. Because they have so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.,合并句子：, They fail to memorize the new characters.,连接两句话： The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line
24、. Moreover, they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.,1. I used to like reading and writing poems at middle school.2. Suddenly I thought of a good idea.3.You can find my house easily.,I used to be fond of reading and writing poems at middle school.,All
25、 of a sudden, a good idea occurred to me.,A good idea suddenly struck me.,You have no trouble/difficulty in finding my house .,You can find my house without any difficulty .,一. advanced vocabulary较高级的词汇、短语,4.Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 5.The old photo made me think of
26、my happy childhood.,Thanks to the good weather , our journey was comfortable.,The old photo reminded me of my happy childhood.,6.His invention will be good for people greatly.,His invention will ( ) people. His invention will ( )people. His invention will ( ) people. People will ( )his invention. Hi
27、s invention will( ). His invention will ( )people.,be of great benefit to,bring a lot of benefits to,be greatly beneficial to,benefit greatly from,benefit people greatly,do much good to,1. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.2. I was walking along Park Road towards the east. At tha
28、t time, an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.,二.varied grammatical structure丰富的语法结构,On hearing the bad news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.,I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.
29、,3. The flat is in a building on Beijing Road. It is not far from our School.4. He is surprised that the little girl knows so many things.,The flat is in a building on Beijing Road, which is not far from our School.,To his surprise , the little girl knows so many things.,What surprises him is that t
30、he little girl knows so many things.,5. We can achieve our goal only in this way.6.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.,Only in this way can we achieve our goal .,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,Not unti
31、l he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened.,7.The teacher required all the students to hand in their compositions after class. ( 复合宾语),All the students were required to hand in their compositions after class.The teacher required that all the students should hand in their c
32、ompositions after class.It was required by the teacher that all the students should hand in their compositions after class.The teachers requirement was that all the students should hand in their compositions after class.,（被动语态）,（宾语从句）,（主语从句）,（表语从句）,1.恰当使用关联词, 如:but, when，so，if，because，so that等。,1) P
33、eople have found mobile phones very convenient _they can get in touch with each other whenever and wherever they like.2) This village used to be very small and poor _it has changed a lot since 1978 .,because,but,三. proper linking words or sentences使用恰当的连接词,2.巧妙使用意思有联系的词或语句 如:First, Second, Third, So
34、on, most excitingly, Whats more, whats worse, As a result等。,All the school-age children can study here._, they enjoy free education in it.The birds dodo were killed for food on a large number. _, they died out at last.Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _, it may make us fat.,As a result,Whats worse,
35、Whats more,3.适当使用过渡性语句 如:The reasons are as follows. Every coin has two sides. All roads lead to Rome. As the result/survey shows. We can draw an conclusion.等,Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. _. First，most families are too poor to send their children to school . Secon
36、d, some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. Third, ,The reasons are as follows,Television is not only a convenient source of entertainment, but also a comparatively cheap one. But_, television also has disadvantages, such as its effects on young people.,every coin has
37、 two sides,4.适当使用过渡性语句 如:The reasons are as follows. Every coin has two sides. All roads lead to Rome. As the result/survey shows. We can draw an conclusion.等,练习一：众所周知，词汇就像建造大楼的砖块，是语言的重要组成部分。 (2010 江苏) a.As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building
38、.b.It is well known that vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building .c.What is known to all is that vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building .,1.鼠标是一个有用的装置。人们用它来和电脑进行对话。 (2009 江苏) a. The mouse is a most effective device. It is used
39、by people to communicate with a computer.b. The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer. (过去分词短语作定语),3我站在讲台上，很窘迫，不知该怎么做。 (2009湖南) a. I stood on the platform, feeling embarrassed and not knowing what to do. b. I stood on the platform, felt embarrassed and didnt
40、know what to do.c. I stood on the platform, and I felt so embarrassed that I didnt know what to do.,2我认为，仅仅送给父母贵重的礼物是不对的。(2006江西)a. I dont think it good only to provide our parents with expensive gifts. b. In my opinion, it is not good only to provide our parents with expensive gifts.c. We only provide our parents with expensive gifts, which is not good.,
