1、TEM-4 Writing,Target-restricted Type,Given a topic with a specific requirement or attitude (positive or negative), and then required to give further argumentation or presentation. e.g. I . The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood (2003)The Benefits of Volunteering (2008) II. The Harmfulness of Fake Pro
2、ducts Problems Brought by the Aging of Chinese Population Travel Broadens the Mind People Are Becoming Isolated from Each Other,Positive Attitudes,Nowadays, with the surging cases of mental problem, committing suicide, or killing reported, _. In my point of view, it is really important to keep an op
3、timistic attitude towards pressure. _ _keeping a good mood helps you to get along well with others. Nobody would like to make friends with one who always complains._: “ A bad work man always blames his tools.” _good mood benefits your health. Life is always full of ups and downs. When you are in tro
4、uble or frustration, you should take it in a reasonable way and overcome it as soon as possible. _keeping a good mood brings you not only friendship, but health as well. _, we should learn to look at things from a positive angle, face challenge and pressure with optimistic attitude.,The Importance o
5、f Keeping a Good Mood,Nowadays , with 现象，people are becoming increasingly aware of the significance of 主题词. In my point of view, 把标题变成陈述句. There are numerous reasons to support my point of view, and I would like explore only a few of the most important ones here. One of the primary causes is that 支持
6、论点的理由1. As the saying goes, 引用名言证明理由1. / For example,引用实例证明. Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 支持理由2. 并阐述. Taking into account of all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that 重述标题论点. Therefore, 提出建议或意见.,Model 1,Recently, a top liberal arts student in Chongqing, who faked
7、his ethnic identity to get bonus points in the college entrance exam, has been punished. Also Peking University reported a second ethnic-identity faking case. However, the two cases are just the tip of the iceberg. There could be a lot more. What do you think of this phenomenon?The Importance of Int
8、egrity,Exercise,Nowadays , with 现象，people are becoming increasingly aware of the significance of 主题词. In my point of view, 把标题变成陈述句. There are numerous reasons to support my point of view, and I would like explore only a few of the most important ones here. One of the primary causes is that 支持论点的理由1
9、. As the saying goes, 引用名言证明理由1./ For example,引用实例证明. Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 支持理由2. 并阐述. Taking into account of all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that 重述标题论点. Therefore, 提出建议或意见.,Model 1,Phenomenon description A growing number of students in China plagiar
10、ize in college. The sights of plagiarism /cheating are not rare on campus today. Some copy from classmates or schoolmates to save the trouble of doing assignments; some cut and paste sentences from various web sources to cook up their own work; worse still, some others simply download a ready-made p
11、aper to meet the project deadline.,Reference,Nowadays , with 现象，people are becoming increasingly aware of the significance of 主题词. In my point of view, 把标题变成陈述句. There are numerous reasons to support my point of view, and I would like explore only a few of the most important ones here. One of the pr
12、imary causes is that 支持论点的理由1. As the saying goes, 引用名言证明理由1./ For example,引用实例证明. Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 支持理由2. 并阐述. Taking into account of all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that 重述标题论点. Therefore, 提出建议或意见.,Model 1,Integrity is the fundamental/core quali
13、ty of a person.University students , who are at the threshold of their career and adult life, should therefore regard it as sacred to lay a solid foundation for their future. Our education would be open to corruption and destruction.If scholars and university students plagiarize or cheat , there wou
14、ld not be any progress in the academic field and the whole academia would be in chaos.,Reference,Upon the benefit (importance ,significance) of 题目中关键词, people share a common view that 论点. As to me, I cant agree more with them. 题目中关键词 should ,undoubtedly, be an indispensable part of our life. On the
15、one hand, 支持理由1，并阐述. On the other hand, 支持理由2，并阐述. Finally,支持理由2，并阐述. So , based on the above discussion, there is no doubt that 综述支持论点理由1,2,3. e.g. The Benefits of Travel,Model 2,Upon the benefit (importance / significance) of travel, people share a common view that As to me, I cant agree more with
16、 them. Travel should undoubtedly, be an indispensable part of our life. On the one hand, On the other hand, Finally, So , based on the above discussion, there is no doubt that,it relaxes our body and broadens our mind.,travel enables us to know more about the geography and history of the outside wor
17、ld.,travel enables us to understand different culture and interests.,we can see with our own eyes many places read from books. we can gain much beyond written in the books.,travel is beneficial to our minds with the knowledge of geography, history, people and culture.,The Benefits of Travel,The Bene
18、fits of Book Reading Today,Owing to the global recession, it becomes more and more difficult for most college graduates to find a job recently. However, some graduates open a new path and prefer to work as village officials. The Benefits of Working as Village Officials,Exercise,Students can make goo
19、d use of their knowledge leant in universities. Students can gain more practical experience from local farmers. It contributes a lot to the development of the countryside. The gap between the city and the countryside can well be bridged. Conclusion College graduates working as village officials is a
20、 win-win choice which bring many benefits to both students and villages. Graduate students should take advantage of this opportunity to realize their dreams and do more for our country.,Reference,Low-carbon lifestyle means a kind of lifestyle that people do their best to reduce energy consumption and carbon greenhouse gas emission. It has been so popular that people mention it everywhere all the time. The Importance of Low-carbon Lifestyle,Exercise,
