1、Picture writing,同济中学 高海蓉,简要描述图片内容，就图片主题谈谈自己感想。,你们让我自己骑好吗？,Three steps to write the beginning of a picture writing i) Describe the _ .ii) Relate the _ to a certain _iii) Present your _,picture,picture,phenomenon,opinion,简要描述图片内容，就图片主题谈谈自己感想。,Useful skills to describe a picture,1.在图中， 2.正如我们在图片 中所能看到的
2、， 3.正如图片所示，,As we can see in the picture, ,As is vividly shown in the picture, ,In the picture,Useful skills to introduce a phenomenon,当谈到时2. 是很普遍的3. 最近现象引起了广泛的关注,When it comes to,Its common that,Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern that,Useful skills to present your opinion,就我而言In my op
3、inion/In my view/As far as Im concerned/From my point of view 我认为I hold the view/opinion thatIm of the opinion thatI think/believe/consider that 我的理由如下My reasons are listed as follows.The following are my reasons.,Practice writing the first paragraph,Write a clear beginning of a composition, followi
4、ng the 3 steps.,picture,phenomenon,opinion,briefly,reasonably,clearly,Polish the beginning,Step I Step 2Step 3,Describe the picture briefly.,Relate the picture to a certain phenomenon reasonably.,Present your opinion clearly,Polish the beginning,_ ， when a young girl was riding a bike, almost all he
5、r family members were around, protecting her _ anything unexpected should happen, which did _ the girl as she really wanted to manage it herself. Its a common _ that parents care too much about their children. _, I dont think it wise for parents to _. My reasons are_:,AS is vividly shown in the pict
6、ure,in case,annoy,phenomenon,As far as Im concerned,overprotect their children,listed as follows,（首先）_, too much love from parents will _ a child and _(使孩子很难)to _ with others because a spoilt child is usually _ and _. _,(其次) if parents take pains to pave way for their children , _ (很有可能) they will b
7、e _ how to deal with a tough problem in future, which will cause them to be _ from the _ competition. _,（最后） overprotection will prevent children from further _ their overall ability, thus having a _ effect on their _ development.,To begin with,spoil,makes it hard for children,get along well,unconfi
8、dent,self-centered,Whats more,Chances are that,at a loss as to,eliminated,fierce,Finally,developing,negative,all-round,_(正是家长和孩子做的时候了)to think over this situation。 _ (对家长而言)， they ought to _.And for children, _ (很有必要) to _ (independent) .,Its high time for parents and children,As for parents,give ch
9、ildren more space to try ,to succeed and even to face up to the failure,Its essential,to be independent of their parents.,_ （总之），its parents duty to show love for their children; however, they should find the balance between _.,In conclusion,holding and letting-go,Q1. What do you see in the picture?
10、,Q2. What phenomenon do you think of in real life after seeing the picture?,Q3. Whats your opinion on this phenomenon?,Practice,Practice,reference version,As is vividly revealed in the cartoon picture, the boy is tied up with so many belts of extra classes that he feels tired and depressed. Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern that students are burdened with a lot of extra classes in their spare time. From my point of view, taking too many extra classes does more harm than good to students.,Thank you !,
