1、英语写作特训,让主动成为一种习惯。,1.清楚连贯地传递信息，表达思想。 2. 有效的运用所学的语言知识。,平均分：峰值：,约15分,1719分,最吃亏学生群：,中等左右学生,书面表达是提高平均分最大的潜力股,全方位、多层次,词汇 短语 句型 谋篇 漂亮、地道,词汇层面,Adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的 clever smart wise bright intelligent,词汇层面,Adj.令人惊奇的 surprising amazing astonishing,词汇层面,1.越晚学到的词汇，越有水平。 2.越往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有水平。人靠衣装，文靠词装词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇
2、制胜。,短语层面,电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。 1.Computers are very important in our life. 2.Computers play a very important role in our life. puters are of great importance in our life. 4.后面还有很多技术层面高，精彩的表达。,句型层面,他昨天下午来的。 1.He came here yesterday afternoon. 2.He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon. 3.Not until y
3、esterday afternoon did he come here. 4.It was yesterday afternoon that he came here.,换位思考评卷人的视角,评卷人的弱点 评卷人的兴奋点,失分原因：,1.语言表达有错误 。 1）大错误 2）小错误 2.要点有所遗漏。 3.使用掌握不准确的结构或不易掌握的结构。 4.离题句太多. 5.词汇量。 6.书写。,Bad sample,卷面不整洁; 涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得11分,字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。,对比鲜明,写作基本要求,1.字数达到要求。2.卷面整洁，字迹清楚。3.语法正确。 4.标点
4、正确。 5.文章内容是否切题 。6.格式正确。,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,Five steps for writing (写作五步骤）,passage,书面表达六步法,简单句,五种基本形式 简单句的功效。 The beauty of Jinan is Surprising. 化腐朽为神奇 Without respect ，love can not go far. 四两拨千斤,相当于中文的“
5、接读某月某日来信，一切知悉”。 a. l thank you very much for your letter of May 20th b.Your letter of May 20th has been received with thanks. c. It gives me great pleasure to receive your kind letter of May 20th. d. ln answer to your kind letter of May 20th, l deeply regret that e. l have received your kind letter
6、of May 20th. f.Words cant express my delight on finding your favor of yesterday on my desk this morning. g.Your letter dated May 20th has been received,(6)结束语(Complimentary Close),结束语的一般写法如下： Yours truly, Truly yours, Sincerely yours, Yours sincerely, 公函常用： Yours faithfully, Faithfully yours, Yours
7、respectfully, Respectfully yours,私人书信常用： Sincerely yours, Yours very sincerely, Yours affectionately, Yours ever, 给亲戚朋友的信常用： Love, All my love, You(ever)loving son/daughter/cousin, etc. Your affectionate nephew, Yours lovingly, Lovingly yours,2005书面表达（满分25分）,假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报
8、社写一封自荐信。 * 表示感兴趣 * 说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历 * 希望得到回复 注意： 1词数：100左右 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,Dear Sir or Madam,Im a student from Xinhua Middle School. Im glad to learn that you want a few part-time English reporters. Im quite interested in it.I think Im fit for the job . As a student, Ive read a lot and have m
9、uch knowledge in many fields. Im fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing.,Besides, Im easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others. Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position.Im l
10、ooking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully,Li Hua,写人记叙文（人物经历、简历）,样貌特征 兴趣爱好 经历（注意时间的演进与时态） 行为 人物特征,议论文（ 观点对比型、各抒己见型）,观点对比型 1.提纲式作文：按照表格或提示言之有序，老师是找点给分的。 2.开放式作文：找到最本质的特征。 思维训练模式：a. listing;b. reasoning;c. brain storm.,2001年高考书面表达,假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈
11、一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。,2001年高考书面表达,Dear Dick,How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I dont know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing en
12、dless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is h
13、appy about this new arrangement of things. Best wishes,Li Hua,2002年高考书面表达,最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。,Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions are divided on the que
14、stion. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and
15、walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.Yours truly,Li Hua,观点对立型写作模板,1.正反观点对比The topi
16、c about 话题 is becoming more and more popular in 范围 recently. There are two sides of opinion about it.Some people prefer to consider doing sth.They think that 理由一，whats more,理由二，moreover,理由三。However,others belive 观点is a better choice for free reasons. To begin with, 理由一，next，理由二，inaddition, 理由三。From
17、my point of view, the formmer is surely a wise choice. The reason is that 原因。,2.优缺点对比In recent years, 所要讨论的问题has been popular. There are many advantages in First, 优点一，second，优点二，third，优点三。However，there are some disadvantages. First, 缺点一，besides，缺点二，also，缺点三。In my opinion, it is true that advantages
18、are more than disadvantages. I think 自己的观点。,2008 山东省高考书面表达,假定你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：帮他分析原因；给他提出建议；陈述你帮助他的具体打算。,分析原因,Dear Li Ming,I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. Thats because you are new here and peopl
19、e dont know about you. But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advice below.,提供建议,First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other peoples views. Second, you should learn about your cl
20、assmates likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with them. This way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. Last but not least, Im always here ready to help. we can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.,
21、今后打算,With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above.,文章的架构,Dear Li Ming,I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. Thats because you are new here and people dont know about you. But I
22、think you can make it if only you can follow the advice below.First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other peoples views. Second, you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. Then y
23、ou can have much in common with them. This way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. Last but not least, Im always here ready to help. we can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.With time going on, people will know
24、 you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above.Yours,Zhang Hua,各抒己见类作文模板,In recent days, we have to see a problem A（一种问题的现象）, which is becoming more and more serious. First, 说明A的现状. Second, 举例进一步说明现状.Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, 解决方法1. For another thing,解决方法2. Finally, 解决方法3.Personally, I believe that 我的解决方法. Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because 带来好处。,祝大家在2010年的初夏心想事成,
