重庆市中考英语总复习课件：题型七 书面表达.ppt

1、第三部分 重难题型精讲,题型七 书面表达 2018中考新变化,.,.,精练版习题,依据2017年重庆市初中英语教研工作会 提出的2018年书面表达题型的分值由18分增 加到20分。分析近8年重庆中考真题可知，书面表达 有以下命题特点：,考情概览,1. 形式：除2017B卷、2010年外均不给标题，且以 邮件和书信形式为主，也会涉及发帖、演讲稿、留言等，一般都会给出开头和结尾。 2. 文体：以应用文为主(8年9考)，也会考查记叙文 (2017A，2017B)和说明文(2014A，2012)。,3. 话题：贴近学生学习与生活，引导学生思考和关心身边的人和事，让学生有话可说，有内容可写。主要包括五大

2、类：说明介绍(2016A，2013B，2012)、做法建设(2015A，2013A，2010)、观点看法(2015A，2013A，2010)、写人叙事(2017A，2017B)以及学生学习与生活(2016B)。,4. 词数：2015年之前词数为80词左右，2016年调整为 80120词。 5. 要求和参考要点：一般均给出3个参考要点，且第 3个为省略号，需要学生自由发挥；还会给出23个写作要求。,书面表达是对考生的语言组织、行文表 达、词汇、语法、基础知识等能力的综合考 查。写作时要注意以下几点：,解题方法与技巧,一、解题步骤 1. 审题：确定写作要点、文体、时态、人称等细节。 2. 列提纲：

3、根据题目要求在草稿纸上列出规定的要点，然后列出每个要点所需的短语和句型，并适当拓展。,3. 写作：将所列语言材料组合写成连贯的文章。注意使用合适的连词和承上启下的句子。要在开头点题，结尾要有合适的结束语。 4. 复查：检查语法、拼写和标点等问题，并对拿捏不准的词语和句子进行替换或删除，注意控制词数。,5. 誊抄：尽量不做任何涂改，字母大小以占横线2/3为准，字体向右倾斜5左右，卷面整洁，清晰悦目。,二、满分作文要点 1. 整洁悦目的卷面。如果能做到赏心悦目更佳，可以得到一个比较好的印象分数。 2. 长短合适的篇幅。近2年真题中要求词数为80 120词，因此词数尽量控制在90130词之间。,3.

4、 条理清晰的层次。多用引导词、过渡词，让文章看起来层次分明、逻辑清晰。 4. 准确地道的表达。选词准确、句型恰当、语句流畅。做到删繁就简。,5. 鲜明突出的主题。审题到位、要点全面、画龙点睛、升华主题。 三、 常用过渡词 表示顺序：first(ly); second(ly); to begin with; to start with; at first; at last; next/after that/ finally; in the end,表示并列：either.or; neither.nor; both. and; not only.but also; as well as 表示递进：

5、besides; whats more; whats worse; in addition 表示原因：because (of); for; since; thanks to 表示结果：so; as a result; so.that; therefore 表示目的：so that; in order that/to,表示对比：while; prefer.to; on the one hand, on the other hand; would rather do.than do; prefer to do.rather than do 表示转折：however; but; although/t

6、hough; after all; unluckily; unfortunately,表示举例：for example; for instance; such as; like; that is to say 表示总结：(all)in all/short; in a word; in brief/total; last but not least; last; to be short 表达个人想法：I think/believe.; (as)for me; in my opinion; from my point of view; as far,as Im concerned 其他：in ge

7、neral; generally speaking; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; in a way; in that/this way,分析重庆近8年中考真题可知，介绍类分 为人物介绍和地点介绍，主要考查3次。,类别剖析,命题探索,类别1 说明介绍,2016A卷写一封自荐信，2013B卷介绍“中华 梨园”，2012年介绍“翠湖公园”。,假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生，他 们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示为,他们写出前往的路线，并简介公园情况。 要点提示：1. 路线(见下图)；,2. 公园环境优美，凉爽，还可游泳、野餐等；3. 要

8、求：1. 词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入 总词数。2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的 名称。,Cuihu Park is not far from here. Its easy to get there. Just go straight_ _ _ _ _,【审题指导】 1. 文体：要求介绍前往翠湖公园的路线以及公园情况，因此文章为_； 2. 时态和人称：介绍路线以及公园情况，时态用_，人称用_人称；表,表达希望，时态用_，人称_ 人称； 3. 写作要点：介绍去“翠湖公园”的路线；介绍公园的具体情况；表达希望。,【写作导图】,【普通习作】Cuihu Park is not far

9、from here. Its easy to get there. Just go straight and turn right at the first corner. Walk along the road. Turn left, you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.,The park is really a good place. Its beautiful and cool. It has many trees an

10、d flowers. You can swim, play games or have a picnic there. Its very relaxing. You can also get a good place to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.,【句子升格】 Walk along the road. Turn left, you find a hospital. (用and和when引导的从句升格) _ The park is really a good place. (用have fun升格) _, Its b

11、eautiful and cool. It has many trees and flowers.(合并为一句并且用with升格) _,【范文升格】Cuihu Park is not far from here. Its easy to get there. Just go straight and turn right at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from

12、the park is a restaurant.,The park is really a good place to have fun. Its beautiful and cool with many trees and flowers. You can swim, play games or have a picnic there. Its very relaxing. You can also get a good place to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.,人物介绍类 1. He/She is good

13、at/is fond of.他/她擅长/喜欢 2. Thank you for.谢谢你 3. She is friendly/warmhearted/. 她是友好的/热心的,积累与运用,4. He is of medium height and he has. 他中等身高而且他有 地点介绍类 1. different kinds of 不同种类的 2. It lies in the city center and它位于市中心， 并且 3. There are manyin our在我们有许多 ,4. I would like to introduceto you because its a c

14、ity with我想给你介绍，因为 它是一个有着的城市。 5. It is popular with tourists not only for but also for它很受游客们欢迎，不仅因为还因为,节日介绍类 1. is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals. 是中国最重要的传 统节日之一。 2. It has a long history, which is in honor of sb. 它有着悠久的历史，是为了纪念某人。 3. People celebrate the day byand 人们通过和庆祝这一天

15、。,4. It is our duty to respect the traditions and make Chinese culture known to the world. 尊重传统、使中国文化发扬光大是我们的责任。 事物介绍类 1. has a positive influence/effect on peoples life. 对人们的生活有积极的影响。,2. is playing an increasingly important role in peoples life. 在人们的生活中扮演着 日益重要的角色。 3. In spite of the disadvantages,

16、 it has more advantages.尽管有缺点，但是它有更多的优点。 4. is my favorite activity in my spare time. 在我的闲暇时间，是我最喜欢的活动。,第1篇假设你叫王林，你校正在为英语角活动 招募主持人，你想应征该职位，请你按要求 给负责人刘老师写一封自荐信。 要求：1. 必须写出三点以上自荐理由；,写作练兵,2. 80120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学 校的名称。 参考要点：1. 表明身份(男孩、几年级几班)；,2. 自荐理由(身体健康，精力充沛、有出 国留学的经历、英语口语好)；3. De

17、ar Mr. Liu，Im a boy from_ _ Yours， Wang Lin,第1篇 【高分范文】 Dear Mr. Lin,Im a boy from Class 1, Grade 9. And my name is Wang Lin. Id love to be the host of our schools English Corner. I think Im capable of doing this job because of the following reasons.,First, Im healthy and energetic. Second, I once sp

18、ent a year in America and my spoken English is excellent. Third， Im willing to help others and communicate with others. And last, it may have a better effect on my future life.,If Im lucky to get the chance, I will work hard to make our English Corner more interesting and popular. Yours, Wang Lin,分析

19、重庆近8年中考真题可知，做法类主 要考查了3次。2015B卷提醒参加夏令营的注意 事项，2014A卷针对如何创造良好的阅读环境 给出建议，2011年针对如何办好国际学校给出 建议等。,类别2 做法建议,命题探索,一家知名外资企业准备与当地政府合作 修建一所国际学校。为了建好、办好学校， 该企业总裁Mr. White广泛征求学生意见，并 公开了他的邮箱地址。请你以“周杉”的名义 给他写一封Email，谈谈你的建议及理由。,内容要点：1. 学习环境(如：教室、操场)；2. 特色课程(如：网球、钢琴)；3. 要求：1. 词数：80词左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2. 文中不能出现自己的姓

20、名和所在学校 的名称。,Dear Mr. White，Im glad to hear youll build an international school, and Id like to give you some advice _ _ I hope I can enter the school. Sincerely yours， Zhou Shan,【审题指导】 1. 文体：要求写一封Email，因此文体为_； 2. 时态：介绍自己的建议及理由，时态用_； 表达自己的期望用_；,3. 人称：介绍自己的理由，写作时用_人称； 介绍学校用_人称； 4. 写作要点：表明写作目的；具体介绍自己的建

21、议及理由；表达期望。,【写作导图】,【普通习作】 Dear Mr. White，Im glad to hear youll build an international school, and Id like to give you some advice. I think the new school should be nice and pleasant. Students need to study in bright classrooms, open There should be some special courses in school for,up their eyes in

22、modern libraries, and play different kinds of sports on large playground. There should be some special courses in school for students. They are art, tennis or piano lessons. These courses can make students relaxed and encourage them to develop freely. Having some,chances to practice in your school w

23、ill be better for students. They can get some useful experience. I hope I can enter the school. Sincerely yours， Zhou Shan,【句子升格】 Students need to study in bright classrooms, open up their eyes in modern libraries, and play different kinds of sports on large playground.(用 不定式作后置定语升格) _, There are so

24、me special courses in school for students. They are art, tennis or piano lessons. (用provide.with.和such as升格) _, Having some chances to practice in your school will be better for students. They can get some useful experience.(用it作形式主语以 及so that升格) _,【范文升格】 Dear Mr. White，Im glad to hear youll build a

25、n international school, and Id like to give you some advice. I think the new school should be nice and pleasant. Students need bright classrooms to study in,modern libraries to open up their eyes, large playground to play different kinds of sports on. The school may provide students with some specia

26、l courses, such as art, tennis or piano lessons. These courses can make students relaxed and encourage them to develop freely.,It would be better for students to have some chances to practice in your school so that they can get some useful experience. I hope I can enter the school. Sincerely yours，

27、Zhou Shan,1. Its time for us to.对我们来说是时候做 2. You are supposed to do.你应该做 3. Its important/good to .做是重要的/好的 4. You should .as much as possible.你应该尽可能多地,积累与运用,5. I think its my duty to do sth. 我认为做某事是我的职责。 6. There are many reasons on.关于有许多原因。 7. We must take measures to do sth. 我们必须采取措施做某事。 8. The b

28、est way to. is. 最好的方法是,9. If we have difficulties in sth., we can.如果 我们在某方面有困难，我们可以 10. As a student, its necessary to.作为一名 学生，是有必要的。,第2篇假如你是李华，昨天你收到笔友Claire的 来信，她在信中询问你怎样度过课余时间。请 根据以下提示，给她写封回信。 要求：1. 必须写出三点以上的建议；,写作练兵,2. 80120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入 总词数； 3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校 的名称。 参考要点：1. 充分利用课余时间很重要；2. 具体介绍怎

29、样度过课余时间(参,加体育活动、阅读课外书籍、看电视、 听音乐)；3. Dear Claire，Im glad to hear from you. Now Im going to tell you something about how I spend my spare time.,_ _In a word, I always make full use of my spare time to make my life more colorful. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua,第2篇 【高分范文】 Dear Claire, Im glad to hear from y

30、ou. Now Im going to tell you something about how I spend my spare time.I always make full use of my spare time,though I have too much homework to do every day. I often take part in sports activities after school because sports can help me keep healthy. I usually do some reading after school, too. No

31、vels, newspapers and magazines can give me,much knowledge that I cant get at school. Besides, I watch TV or listen to music sometimes in the evening. It can help me relax myself after school hard work. At weekends, I often help my parents with the housework. It can help me,understand my parents bett

32、er. In a word, I always make full use of my spare time to make my life more colorful.Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua,分析重庆近8年中考真题可知，观点看法 类主要考查3次。2015A卷考查解决不文明行 为的方案，2013A卷针对“丁某某到此一游”发 表看法，2010年考查对“互帮互助”的看法。,类别3 观点看法,命题探索,加拿大中学生Peter在你校学习期满，回国 后写来一封感谢信，同时指出了同学们的一些 不良行为。假如你是学生会主席李华，请根据 要点提示给Peter回一封电子邮件。 要点

33、提示：1. 表示感谢；,2. 表达意愿(告别高声喧哗、乱丢 乱扔等不良行为)；3. 要求：1. 词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Dear Peter，Im glad to receive your email. _ _ _,_ _ Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua,【审题指导】 1. 文体：要求给Peter回复一封电子邮件，因此文体为_； 2. 时态：本文要重点写出对于学生不良行为的解决措施，时态以_和_为主；,3. 人称：给Peter回复电子邮件，人称用_； 4. 写作要点：表示感谢；介绍不文明行为；发出

34、邀请并表达期望。,【写作导图】,【普通习作】 Dear Peter，Im glad to receive your email. Thank you for telling us so much. Im very sorry for what we have done. As students, we should learn to have good habits. First, we will not speak or shout loudly in public. Also, we will no longer throw things here and there to keep,th

35、e environment clean and tidy. We wont write or draw on the desks and other places. We will be more polite to others.Id like to invite you to visit our school again. Im sure you will see a better school.Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua,【句子升格】 First, we will not speak or shout loudly in public.(用especially升

36、格) _ Also, we will no longer throw things here,and there to keep the environment clean and tidy. (用in order to升格) _ We wont write or draw on the desks and,other places. We will be more polite to others. (用Whats more和and升格) _ 【范文升格】 Dear Peter，Im glad to receive your email. Thank you for telling us s

37、o much. Im very sorry for,what we have done. As students, we should learn to have good habits. First, we will not speak or shout loudly, especially in public. Also, in order to keep the environment clean and tidy, we will no longer throw things here and there. Whats more, we wont write or,draw on th

38、e desks and other places, and we will be more polite to others. Id like to invite you to visit our school again. Im sure you will see a better school.Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua,1. I hear that a hot topic about.is under discussion. 我听说关于的热点话题正在被讨论。 2. There is no doubt that enough concern should be p

39、aid to the problem of.毫无疑问，对问题应该予以足够的重视。,积累与运用,3. The reason why. is that. 的原因是 4. Some people believe that., while others think that. 一些人相信，然而其他人认为 5. There are two sides of opinions on it. One is.the other is. 关于这点有两方面的观点。,一个是另一个是 6. On the one hand.on the other hand.一方面另一方面 7. First, .second, .la

40、st but not least, .首先，其次，最后但同样重要的是，,8. In spite of the disadvantages, it has more advantages/beneficial effects. 尽管有缺点，但是它有更多优点/有益的影响。 9. It is very important/difficult/useful/exciting to do. 做是很重要/困难/有用/令人激动的。,10. From all what I said, I agree to the thought that. 从所有我说的来看，我同意的看法。 11. As far as I a

41、m concerned/In my opinion (view) 我认为/在我看来 12. Only in this way can we.只有这样，我们才能,第3篇(2017乐山改编)某英文杂志中学生专栏正在征集“二孩政 策”开放后同学们的意见。你们班以“Do You Agree That Your Parents Have a Second Child？”为题，展开了一次讨论。请你根据,写作练兵,提示，写一篇短文，向该杂志社投稿，介绍 讨论情况。要求：1. 必须发表自己的看法；2. 80120词，开头已给出，不计入总 词数；3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。,参考要点：1. 赞

42、成的理由(不会感到孤独、可 轮流照顾父母)；2. 反对理由(担心父母更爱弟弟或 妹妹、害怕和弟弟或妹妹相处不好)；3. ,Do You Agree That Your Parents Have aSecond Child?Different students have different opinions on whether parents should have a second child or not. _ _,第3篇 【高分范文】 Do You Agree That Your Parents Have aSecond Child?Different students have dif

43、ferent opinions on whether parents should have a second,child or not.Some students agree with the idea. They think, if so, they wont feel lonely and there will always be someone to play with. Besides, if their parents get older or ill, they can take turns to look after them. However, some,students d

44、isagree. They worry that they will get less love from their parents if another child comes to the family. Whats worse, they may not get along well with, or even fight against each other.,As for me, Id love to have a brother or sister so that we can share our happiness and sorrow at any time.,分析重庆近8年

45、中考真题可知，叙事类考 查了2次。2017A卷分享照片背后的故事； 2017B卷描述我和朋友之间发生的故事。,类别4 写人叙事,命题探索,在过去的日子里，我们曾经欢笑，也曾 经哭泣照片，或将这些精彩定格，或勾 起你对往事的回忆。某英语网站向你发出邀 请，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章，分享你 照片背后的故事。,要求：1. 故事必须原创；2. 80120词，开头已给出，不计入总 词数；3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考要点：1. 描述你的照片(时间，地点，人,物)； 2. 分享你的故事(起因，经过，结果)； 3. 谈谈你的感受(感动，怀念，影响)。This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,_ _,【审题指导】 1. 文体：要求分享照片背后的故事，可知本文是一篇_； 2. 时态：描述的故事是之前发生过的，因此描述过去的事用_时，表达自己的感受用_；,