1、学优中考网 2012 中考英语书面表达专辑（昆明市）第 1 集1、 、书面表达 （原创） *因为在资源日益短缺、生态环境受到挑战的今天，发展低碳经济、倡导低碳生活、建设低碳城市正在成为国际上普遍认同的经济社会发展模式。假如你是李华，你的美国朋友 Chris 给你发邮件来，向你询问你校正在开展的低碳生活活动情况。请写回信。主题为行动改变世界。尽量少坐公车，步行，骑单车；使用电子贺卡；使用双面纸；节约水，电.注意：1.开头和结尾部分已写好。2.所写内容必须包括提示中的信息。可适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语，所写内容连贯。3.词数：70 个左右。Dear Chris,As you said in
2、the e-mail that my school are launching the low carbon living activity now. And I_.Yours,Li Hua萧山义蓬一中 高方英参考范文*书面表达Dear Chris,As you said in the e-mail that my school are launching the low carbon living activity now. And I am taking an active part in it. The theme of the activity is changing the worl
3、d by actions. It suggests us go to school on foot or by bike instead of by bus and car. Besides, we should use e-greeting cards rather than the 学优中考网 attritional cards. As to save the paper , it asks us to use both sides of every piece of paper. Of course, we should save water and electricity at the
4、 same time.Therefore, how do you think of the activity? I am looking forward to hearing from you again.Yours，Li Hua评分原则：各档次的给分范围和要求：第五档（很好）：（15 分一 13 分)完全完成试题规定的任务。 信息全。语言可读性强，语言结构基本正确，有少量错误。 第四档（好）：（12 分一 10 分）完全完成试题规定的任务。 有主要信息。语言基本正确，有一些错误。 第三档（还好）：（9 分一 7 分）基本完成试题规定的任务。 有主要信息。语言尚可读，有一些错误，但尚能达意。
5、第二档（较差）：（6 分一 4 分）未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。 信息不全。只有个别句子可读，语言错误较多，且不能达意。 第一档（差）：（3 分一 l 分 )未能完成试题规定的任务。 不能表达有关信息。只有几个有关单词，语言错误很多，不能达意。 注意:凡不写任何内容、抄袭其他内容、所写内容无法看清者一律给 0 分。*2、 、书面表达*请根据以下内容帮助 Linda 完成给她朋友的信,谈谈怎么陪妈妈度过即将到来的母亲节。1. 母爱是世界上最伟大的；2. 母亲节(Mothers Day)般在五月的第二个星期日；3. 孩子们用各种方式让母亲感受到对她的爱，如：送鲜花、贺卡和礼物给母亲；帮助母亲做家务
6、, 让母亲休息天等；4. 请再提出两个庆祝母亲节的建议。要求： 1）词数 90 左右。2) 短文必须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使文章连贯，通顺。Dear Wendy,Im very happy to hear from you. 学优中考网 _Lots of loveLinda书面表达评分标准:1评分时先根据短文内容和语言表达，初步确定其所属档次，然后根据该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。2本大题满分为 15 分，不设小数点以下分值。按五个档次给分。 3文中若出现真实的人名、校名，扣 2 分。4需提出两个庆祝母亲节的建议。一档 13-15 分 包含所有要点，应用了较丰富
7、的语言结构和词汇， 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。二档 10-12 分 基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。三档 7-9 分 内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。四档 4-6 分 只包含了少数要点，语言不规范，句子无条理，行文不连贯，语言错误严重，影响理解。五档 0-3 分 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言错误多。*3、 、书面表达 *一家美国杂志社正在调查不同国家孩子周末活动情况。假如你是王凯，请根据表中的信息并结合自身看法，给杂志社写
8、一封信。Names （2）减少作业量。 Dear Ann,I like to tell you something about the out- of-class activity in our school. We usually _ _学优中考网 _(参考答案：I like to tell you something about the out- of-class activity in our school. We usually have activities from 4:505:50 in the afternoon. We have different kinds of acti
9、vities. Some students are interested in sports. They play basketball and football. We also have some special interest groups, such as drawing, singing and dancing. And now, We computer games are the most popular. On Wednesday afternoon we go to English Corner. We like speaking English there. We hope
10、 to spend more time on such activities and less time on homework.) *8、 、书面表达*下面是 Sarah 给 Sue 的 e-mail, 请你仔细阅读原文, 然后根据你的情况,以 Sue 为名给Sarah 发一封 e-mail. 字数在 80 个词左右。 请注意：1. 不得写出自己或学校的真实名称；2. 不得照抄原文。（参考答案:Dear Sue,How are you? Summer holiday began last week. My brother and I are having our holiday. Durin
11、g the holiday we are planning to learn swimming, climb the mountains and do many other things. Yesterday we went to the museum with my parents. On the way home, we went shopping. My mother bought me a beautiful skirt and a new recorder for my English study. We are sure well have a very good time.How
12、 about you, my dear friend? Have you made any plans for your summer holiday? Please write me soon.SarahDear Sarah,Thanks for your e-mail. Im glad you are enjoying your holiday. Now let me tell you something about my holiday. _Sue 学优中考网 Dear Sarah,Thanks for your e-mail. Im glad you are enjoying your
13、 holiday. Now let me tell you something about my holiday. I didnt do well in my maths exam, so the most important thing for me in the holiday is that I must spend most of the time on it. Ill do some more exercises. When I have time, Ill visit some friends. Also Ill help my parents with their farm work. After the farm work we will make a trip to Yellow Mountains. I believe well enjoy it. I hope you can come to see me sometime in the holiday.Sue）*
