1、书面表达,话题写作（八） 学习提高篇,【话题点睛】针对的话题主要关于课堂学习方式与方法、课堂学习情况的评价、课外学习与提升等方面。主要涉及描述学校学习情况、帮助同学解决学习问题、通过阅读或其他方式进行自我提升等方面。,典例分析,随着中华诗词大会和朗读者的开播,全国上下再一次掀起了阅读的热潮,请以“Lets Read More!”为题,参照下表写一篇短文。内容包括:阅读的重要性、阅读的好处、阻碍阅读的原因以及在阅读方面的建议。,写作要求 (1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; (2)所写内容必须包括图表中所提供的信息,并适当发挥; (3)词数:不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数); (4)文中
2、不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。 参考词汇 get knowledge, make us clever and happy, encouragetoLets Read More!Reading is very important in our daily lives. _,【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:主题是号召大家阅读,结合参考词汇,写作内容可以从以下几方面展开: (1)开门见山,指出阅读的重要性,号召多读书; (2)具体阐述阅读在学习和生活方面给我们带来的好处; (3)拓展造成阅读少的原因,并提出克服的建议。 2.确定时态:一般现在时 3.确定人称:第一人称 【写作架构】,【基础写作】 .写
3、主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。) 1.我们可以通过阅读许多好书来获取知识。(by doing sth.) We can get knowledge . 2.阅读也有助于我们更好地成长。(help sb. do sth.) Reading also . 3.许多活动占用了我们大部分的阅读时间。(take up) Many activities our reading time. 4.我想建议大家都要读一些好书。(would like to do sth.) I that everyone should read some good books.,by reading a lot of goo
4、d books,helps us grow up better,take up much of,would like to suggest,.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。) 1.It can open our eyes. It makes us clever and happy. (用not onlybut also合并为一个句子)2.Our study can be improved. We read more important books.(用if改写为条件状语从句)3.Regarding the Internet as a good helper in our study is
5、better.(改为it作形式主语的句子),It can not only open our eyes but also make us clever and happy.,Our study can be improved if we read more important books.,Its better to regard the Internet as a good helper in our study.,【连句成文】 Lets Read More!Reading is very important in our daily lives. We can get knowledge
6、by reading a lot of good books. It can not only open up our eyes but also make us clever and happy. Our study can be improved if we read more books. Reading also helps us grow up better.However, many activities take up much of our reading time, such as listening to music, watching TV and surfing the
7、 Internet. What a pity! So I would like to suggest that everyone should read some good books. They will be very helpful to us!Lets start reading now!,拓展积累,【相关短语】 be helpful to 有助于; as much as possible 尽可能多地; be afraid of 害怕; make mistakes 犯错误; make good use of 充分利用; open ones eyes 开阔眼界; have a chanc
8、e to do sth. 有机会做某事; try ones best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事 【参考谚语】 1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 2.No pain, no gain.没有付出就没有收获。 3.Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. 天才不过是勤奋而已。 4.There is no royal road to learning. 书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟。 5.It is never too old to learn.活到老,学到老。,【亮点句型】 学习方法 1.We can ge
9、t knowledge by reading a lot of good books. 2.Im writing to offer you some advice on how to learn Chinese well. 3.It is helpful to read some good Chinese newspapers and magazines. 4.Try to speak Chinese as much as possible and dont be afraid of making mistakes. 5.Wed better make good use of time. 学习
10、体验 1.It can not only open our eyes but also make us clever and happy. 2.Reading also helps us grow up better. 3.In this way your reading ability can be improved. 4.The more you speak, the better your spoken Chinese will be. 5.Not only can they help develop our ability of independent study, but also
11、we can have more chances to show ourselves.,实战演练,A 2018泰州改编 假设你是李华,你们学校正在对本校学生英语学习的情况进行调查,并征求同学们对英语教学的建议。请按下表提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的英语学习情况以及你对老师教学的建议。,要求 (1)词数:不少于80。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; (2)所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息,并作适当发挥; (3)不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。I am Li Hua. _ _ _I wish our school will consider my advice.,One possib
12、le version:I am Li Hua. Here are my thoughts about English. English is the most widely used language in the world. It can help us not only understand different cultures in the world but improve our communication skills. And speaking more English can improve our confidence. At present,I can communica
13、te with my classmates in English simply. I also like speeches. I won the prize in the speech contest last year. And I believe I should be able to talk with others correctly when I go to a Western country. However, I have some problems with learning English. I cant use the grammar rules correctly. So
14、metimes I cant express myself clearly in writing. I often find it hard to remember more difficult words. I suggest teachers should communicate more with us in English and encourage us more and introduce more good English books to us.I wish our school will consider my advice.,B 2015衢州改编 最近,部分学校开设了一些特
15、色课(special classes), 诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等,你校校园网就你们学校开设此类课程的必要性广泛征求同学们的意见,以下是你们班同学的观点和理由,请就此并结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文,发表在校园网的英语论坛上。,要求 (1)文章应包括表格中的信息,并适当发挥; (2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名; (3)词数:不少于80; (4)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。 短文首句:Recently some schools offer their students some special classes, such as cooking classes, hand
16、icraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on. _ _,One possible version:Recently some schools offer their students some special classes, such as cooking classes,handicraft classes,traditional opera classes and so on.Is it necessary to offer these classes?We had a discussion in our class. Some
17、students think its really necessary to do it. First, its good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them more knowledgeable. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.However, others have different opinions. They dont think its so necessary. They think its a waste of time and its not helpful for their lessons.In my opinion, its a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.,
