1、题型六 书面表达,答题妙招,书面表达主要测试考生综合运用所学语言知识、社会语言知识、跨文化交际知识。以及以书面英语的形式进行沟通交流的能力。同时，还考查学生英文书写的规范性、美观性等。常见的书面表达题型有应用文体、看图作文、信息作文三种类型。,1应用文体： (1)日记。其格式是：第一行左边写日期，右边写天气状况；写日记时，常用第一人称和一般过去时。 (2)书信。信的开头称呼语用Dear . 开头；结尾是信函的落款，常写在信的右下角，写信人的姓名前常用Yours 或Your sincerely。,2看图作文 根据图片(或表格)的内容展开合理的想象，写出文章的一种写作方式。注意以下四点：(1)认真
2、读图，弄清大意；(2)理出要点，拟定提纲；(3)紧扣要点，扩写成文；(4)通读短文，修正错误。,3信息作文 写记叙文及谈论对某事件的观点和看法，并表明自己的简要观点，以及其他相关体裁的写作。,例1 (2009成都中考)下列5幅图画告诉了我们中学生小明在课堂内外是如何对待英语学习的。请你根据这5幅图画，以“How Xiao Ming Studies English”为题对小明的表现进行描述，说明这些表现对他学习英语带来的不良后果，并对英语学习的态度谈点自己的看法。,注意：(1)写作内容：要包括所有图画中的主要内容和文字提示中的必要内容。 (2)短文词数：80100个(短文的题目和开头已给出、且不
3、计入总词数)。 (3)词语提示：复习review vt. 考试成绩差 get bad marks,How Xiao Ming Studies English Xiao Ming is a middle school student. _ _ _,点拨 第一步，认真看提示，并仔细看图，获知五幅画的一些信息：1. 小明在家看电视到很晚，不复习英语。2. 小明在课堂上不认真听讲，经常和同学讲话。3. 小明在练习英语口语时不讲英语，而是说汉语。4. 小明做英语作业不认真，总是想着玩电脑游戏，英语考试成绩很差。5. 对英语学习态度的看法。,第二步：理出要点，紧扣图片内容，运用想象适度发挥，进行适当叙述，
4、使语句连贯通顺。,第三步：通读全文，看看所写的短文是否扣住图片的内容，要点是否遗漏。同时，还要检查是否有用法错误，拼写是否正确。,参考范文： How Xiao Ming Studies English Xiao Ming is a middle school student. At home, he usually watches TV till late at night and doesnt review his English lessons. In English class, he often talks with his classmate and doesnt listen to
5、 his English teacher carefully. When the teacher asks the class to speak English, he usually speaks Chinese.,While he is doing his English homework, hes always thinking of playing computer games. Because of what he does with his English, he always gets bad marks in English exams. From Xiao Mings sto
6、ry we know that we must be serious about English learning if we want to learn English well.,精彩再现： 1. 先描述故事再说明一个道理。 2. 文章结构合理，句子通顺。圆满完成了试卷所规定的内容。 3. 经典句型：(1)While he is doing his English homework, hes always thinking of playing computer games. (2)From Xiao Mings story we know that.,例2: (2009绍兴中考)你在和E
7、ric的交流中了解到中美两国课堂有各自不同的一些特点，请你根据下表简要描述这些特点，并就此谈谈自己的想法：,要求： (1)文章必须包括表中所有信息，可适当增加细节，但不要逐条翻译； (2)想法必须在2个句子以上； (3)文章的开头已给出(不计入总词数)，你只需接着写； (4)词数在80左右。,There are some differences between a Chinese class and an American class. Lets have a look. In China, _,点拨 第一步：认真仔细地阅读提示，观察表格中的内容。,第二步：根据表格的内容紧扣要求遣词造句，连词
8、成文。,第三步：通读全文，纠正错误，书写整洁。,写作要点：,(1)中国课堂的特点；,(2)美国课堂的特点；,(3)自己的想法。,参考范文：There are some differences between a Chinese class and an American class. Lets have a look. In China, students call their teachers with “Mr” or “Miss”. In class they always listen to teachers and take notes carefully. If they want
9、to show their own ideas, they put up their hands first. However, in America, students sit around the desks, face to face. They have pretty rel-axed rules. They can even drink coffee or juice during classes. Also, they can speak in class freely. Different countries have different cultures. But I thin
10、k Chinese classes are better. We should be strict in our study.,精彩再现： 文章内容完整，叙述清楚，要点一目了然。“However”的使用令文章过渡自然。Different countries have different cultures.点明了不同的文化背景造成了文化差异。,自主检测,(一)假设你是中学生李华，曾有一个幸福的家庭，但父亲的变化使你非常担心。请你根据以下四幅图画，给你父亲写一封信，说说你的心里话，并给他提一些建议。,注意： (1)信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 (2)词数：80左右。 Dear dad， _
11、 _Yours,Li Hua,Dear dad， I want to have a talk with you. We once had a very happy family. You were a very good doctor at that time and loved by your patients. You always helped do housework every day. However, you are quite a different person now. You play cards all night and often quarrel with my m
12、other. I just cant put my heart into my studies. I am very worried about our family and you. Dad, I hope. Best wishes. Yours， Li Hua,(二)暑假即将来临，请你给美国笔友Ran写封信。信中要询问他假期有何打算，向他介绍一下温州的情况，特别推荐一处你认为最好的旅游景点，请他到温州来游玩。顺便在信中谈及一点今年暑假你的计划。 要求： (1)不得用真实的人名或学校名称； (2)词数：6090。,Dear Ran， How are you? The summer holid
13、ay is coming. Where would you like to spend it? I hope you can visit my hometown, Wenzhou. She is very beautiful with many places of interest. I like Jinagxin Island best. There is an old temple standing there and there are some funny stories about it. When you come, I shall show you around. Im sure
14、 you will like it, too. Whats more, during this holiday I plan to join one English camp to practice my spoken English. Look forward to your reply. Yours， Li Lei,(三)假如你是温州晚报的小记者，星期天和同学一起参加了“环保小卫士”活动。请你根据下表所提供的信息，把当天的活动写成日记发表在校园网上，倡导更多的同学来关心环保。,要求： (1)日记应包括表格中的所有内容，可适当增加细节； (2)感受要符合活动主题，至少在两个句子以上； (3)
15、日记格式和开头已给出(不计入总词数)，你只需接着写； (4)词数在80左右。,Sunday sunnyI took part in the “Environment Protector” activity with my classmates today. In the morning, _,Sunday SunnyI took part in the “Environment Protector” activity with my classmates today. In the morning, we set off for Peoples Park at 8：00 by bus. Whe
16、n we got there, we found that some children were climbing the trees, the ground and the public walls were very dirty. So we began to pick up the rubbish and clean the public walls. We also planted some trees. All of us worked very hard! We think its our duty to take good care of our environment. If
17、everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become more and more beautiful.,(四)最近你校校园网上出现了一个英语帖子，意在了解同学们在体育技能、艺术特长和科技创新等方面的发展情况。请你以“夏宇”这一网名针对以上三方面回帖，内容包括以下要点： (1)你的特长； (2)你发展特长所面临的困难； (3)你有什么希望或建议。,要求： (1)词数： 80词左右； (2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Xia Yu, 10：10 am, June 18 _ _
18、 _,Xia Yu, 10：10 am, June 18 I like sports and Im good at playing basketball. Every day I practice basketball with my classmates after school. I also enjoy listening to music but I cant sing well. Im afraid of singing in front of people. I hope our school will start a singing club. Im sure I can mak
19、e great progress with the help of our teachers. I also hope there will be less homew-ork on weekends. Then I can have more time to do what Im interested in.,(五)老师让同学们讨论网上购物 (Internet shopping) 的利(advantages)与弊(disadvantages)，根据下列信息，请你代表你们组做个发言。好处：方便(convenience)，24小时营业，不用排队(queue with)；不足：看不见物品，不能享受
20、和朋友一起购物的乐趣,要求：(1)语言流畅，规范；(2)包含提示内容，并作适当发挥；(3)词数在80左右。 _ _ _,Internet shopping is a new way of shopping. It offers a lot of advantages. The most important one is convenience. You can shop whenever you like as the online shops are open 24 hours a day, and you do not have to queue with others. Secondly
21、 it is often cheaper to buy goods through the Internet and it is also easy to find what you are looking for. There are some disadvantages too. You can not see the products or check their quality. Besides you can not enjoy walking around the shops and talki-ng with your friends.,(六)假定你是今天英语课上的值日生，请根据
22、表中信息完成主题为“班级新闻”的值日报告。,要求： (1)报告必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节，但不要逐条翻译； (2)简要评价必须在两个句子以上； (3)报告开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)，你只需接着写； (4)词数80左右。 参考词汇：捐赠donate,Hello everyone! Here are two important activities that happened this week. _ _ _Thats all. Thank you!,Hello everyone! Here are two important activities that happened th
23、is week. These days, Li Jia, our class-mate, has kept practicing spoken English hard with the teachers help. On Wednesday afternoon, she won the first prize in the English speech contest. How exciting it is! We should learn from her.(Here is another report.) Yesterday, we donated 200 books, 50 backp
24、acks and 4200 yuan for the students in Sichuan. He Li alone 500 yuan, the most of all. Thats good. I think as a student, we neednt care how much we should give. Showing our love is the most important.,(七)网络正逐渐走进我们的生活，而其利弊也都不同程度地显现了出来。请以Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet为题，写一篇80字左右的短文。提示：可以
25、从read news, email, chat, study, play games, see the pictures or films, even the unhealthy ones等方面加以评论。,要求： (1)要有表明自己观点的句子。 (2)书写工整，句式规范，条理清楚，标点符号使用正确。 (3)短文中应包括提示内容，可适当发挥，但不能出现真实的人名、地名。 _ _,Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet Internet is now coming into our life. It brings us not only a lot
26、 of convenience, happiness but also trouble. Some students use Internet as a tool to study. They look up the meanings of the words, a translated form of a sentence, the background of an event or a story, the information of a company or a famous person, etc. They also read news or send emails through
27、 it. Inter-net helps them learn more and study well.,On the other hand, some students play games, chat with friends, see the pictures or films even the unheal-thy ones on the Internet the whole day. They are not interested in their subjects. Its very dangerous for them!The Internets advantages and d
28、isadvantages are shown clearly to us. I think we should make good use of it and stay away from the unhealthy websites.,(八)初中生活即将结束，新的生活即将开启，请为你最要好的同学写一段作业留言：他(她)给你留下的深刻印象、你们在一起的快乐时光以及对他(她)最美好的祝愿。,要求： (1)可参考下列所给提示词，也可适当发挥，开头已给出(不计入总词数)。 (2)5060词。 Impression(印象) tall outgoing Happy time play basketbal
29、l go to the park . Best wishes healthy successful .,Our life in middle school will come to an end soon. Ill never forget you. You are an outgoing boy. Theres always a smile on your face and everybody likes to make friends with you. We used to play basketball on the pla-yground. Sometimes we went to
30、the park and had a good time there. I always laughed a lot when I was with you. At this very moment Im saying goodbye to you, I just want to give you my best wishes：I hope you are happy and healthy forever.I hope you are successful in the future. ,(九)Emily将她的烦恼写在了博客上并征求大家的建议。请了解她的烦恼并写出你(Chen Linfrom
31、 Dongying)的建议，要求字数在100词左右，建议的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。建议应包括：(1)孩子应尊重父母；(2)父母经验丰富；(3)父母的要求是对你的成长有好处的；(4)；(5)多同父母交流沟通。,Possible new words: repect v&n. 尊重；responsible adj. 有责任感的；demand v&n. 要求Here are Emilys problems on the Blog：My problem is my parents. They never stop going on about(唠叨) how I should keep my
32、room clean, keep my hair tidy and wear smart clothes. They even make me do the washingup after dinner every night! None of my fri-ends have got such terrible parents. What should I do? Emily, USA,Hi, Emily. I think its lucky for you to have such good parents. _ _Chen Lin, Dongying,Hi, Emily. I think
33、 its lucky for you to have such good parents. You should understand and respect th-em, and do what they ask you to do. They have richer experience and better advice for young people. As yo-ur parents, they surely hope you become an excellent person. Their demands are helpful for your growing up.,Eve
34、ry member should be responsible and do something for the family. So you should do what you can do, such as keep your room clean and do the washingup. Remember: Learning by doing. You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes. Teenagers should look like teenagers.Anyway, if you have any probl
35、ems, just talk with your parents.Chen Lin, Dongying,(十)最近你和父母就要参加校篮球队一事交换了意见，各自阐述了观点。现在请你参照表内所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文。,注意： (1)开头部分已写好，你只需接着写。 (2)所写内容必须包括表格中他们的想法和你的至少三个想法。 (3)词数：70个左右。,Should I be allowed to join the school basket-ball team?Recently Ive had a discussion with my parents about whether or not I
36、should be allowed to join the school basketball team. _ _,Recently Ive had a discussion with my parents about whether or not I should join the school basketball team.They dont think I am strong enough to be a good basketball player. I might get injured while playing. And they hope I will spend more
37、time on my studies.However, I dont agree with them. I know they care about me. Becoming a member of the school team is my dream, you know. Ill try my best to bal-ance my studies and sports. More importantly, I can learn how to work with others in a team.,(十一)假如你是李华，就个人爱好带来的困惑给英国朋友Stephen发电子邮件进行交流并请求
38、帮助。要点：,注意： (1)词数：80个左右(开头和结尾已给出的内容不记入总词数)； (2)内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译； (3)条理清楚、语句连贯； (4)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。,Dear Stephen.I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I dont know how to deal with it and wo-uld like your help. _What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggest-ions? I am
39、looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes! Li Hua,Dear Stephen，I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I dont know how to deal with it and would like your help.You know I am crazy about space travel. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. This
40、 makes my teacher very angry. To him, good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends.,I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development. But I dont think my teacher understands me. I feel bad about that.What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestio-ns? I am looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes! Li Hua,
