1、Section Writing人物介绍写作技法指导文 体 指 导 本单元的写作要求是人物介绍。人物介绍一般包括人物的基本信息，如：(1)生卒年月、出生地、国籍、职业、家庭背景等；(2)人物的重要事迹；(3)人物及其事迹对社会的贡献或影响；(4)作者对人物的评价。写好此类文章，应注意三种开头法：(1)直接开头法：一般从人物的出生开始，按照时间先后顺序安排人物的典型事迹。(2)倒序开头法：通常截取最近发生在人物身上的一个典型的镜头进行切入，接着提及人物的过去。(3)重要事件开头法：先点出人物生平最重要的事迹，或者他身上最显著的特点。接着展开介绍人物，可以继续按照从重要到次要顺序介绍人物的其他事迹，
2、也可以接着用第一种方法，即按照时间顺序继续展开。亮 点 句 式 1He/She is considered to be one of the greatest .in China/America/the world .2Born in a .family，he/she was brought up to.3When he/she was young，he/she showed great interest in .and wanted to become .4He/She started to play.at the age of .5He/She went to university and
3、 graduated .6When he/she left his/her hometown，he/she went to .first and then to.where.7. Thanks to his/her research，were now able to .8. He/She was praised/honored for .9He/She devoted himself/herself to .and made great contributions to .满分佳作构建写 作 任 务 请根据下面的提示，写一篇介绍篮球明星科比的短文，内容需要包括所有要点提示，但不要逐句翻译。注意
4、作文内容连贯。要点提示：科比(Kobe Bryant)是乔(Joe Bryant)的独子，而乔原来也是一名专业篮球运动员。生日 1978 年 8 月 23 日球队 洛杉矶湖人队位置 得分后卫成就1996 年，科比布莱恩特高中毕业直接进入 NBA。20072008 赛季获 MVP(最有价值球员)称号，且使湖人重回巅峰。作为乔丹之后最完美的得分后卫，2006 年他单场得到 81 分，下一年又连续四场得分超过 50。作为奥尼尔的助手，他得到了三连冠。评论毫无疑问他是有史以来最好的球员之一。许多人认为他能与 NBA 神话乔丹(Michael Jordan)相提并论。计划 在球赛淡季或退役后去上大学参考
5、词汇：1最完美的 fabulous2淡季 offseason审 题 谋 篇 体裁 人物传记，应用文话题 人物介绍时态 一般现在时和一般过去时人称 第三人称遣 词 造 句 .对接模块词汇1guard 后卫2professional 专业的3the league 联赛4score 得分5retire 退役.巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1科比出生在 1978 年 8 月 23 日，是 NBA 洛杉矶湖人队的得分后卫。Kobe Bryant was born on August 23,1978.He is an NBA shooting guard who plays for the Los An
6、geles Lakers.2科比成名的原因是他在 1996 年直接从高中跳入了职业篮球队。The reason why Kobe became famous was that he jumped straight from high school to professional basketball in 1996.(the reason why is that.句式)3他成为了最优秀的联盟球员，因而在 20072008 NBA 赛季被授予这个赛季“最有价值球员”的称号。He has become the best player of the league to be awarded the
7、seasons MVP in the 20072008 NBA season.(动语不定式作定语)4第二年又连续四场得分超过 50，他得到了三连冠。The next year，with four straight 50 points scored，he got 3 championships in a row.(with 复合结构)5毫无疑问他是有史以来最好的球员之一。Theres no doubt that he is one of the best players in history.(theres no doubt that.句式)(二)句式升级6用过去分词将句 1 合并成一个句子Ko
8、be Bryant，born on August 23,1978，is an NBA shooting guard who plays for the Los Angeles Lakers. 【导学号：75142006】7He is the only son of Joe Bryant.He himself was a professional basketball player.(用定语从句合并成一个句子)He is the only son of Joe Bryant，who himself was a professional basketball player.妙 笔 成 篇 【参考范
9、文】Kobe Bryant，born on August 23,1978，is an NBA shooting guard who plays for the Los Angeles Lakers.He is the only son of Joe Bryant，who himself was a professional basketball player.Kobe became famous when he jumped straight from high school to professional basketball in 1996.Twelve years later，he ha
10、s become the best player of the league.Kobe Bryant was awarded the seasons MVP in the 20072008 NBA season，and led Lakers back to the top.As the most fabulous shooting guard after Jordan，he once scored 81 points at a single game in 2006.The next year，he got four straight 50point.As an assistant of Oneal，he got 3 championships in a row.Theres no doubt that he is one of the best players in history.Many think that Kobe Bryant can be compared to NBA legend Michael Jordan.Kobe said he planned to get a college degree some day，either in basketballs offseason or after he retires.
