1、Section Writing游记写作技法指导文 体 指 导 1游记是一种以记述参观访问、旅途见闻为主要内容的记叙文。2明确文章结构：开头：介绍游记的主题，即所去的地方；主体：具体列出旅游见闻的内容；结尾：对旅游的总结。亮 点 句 式 1.is located in/at/between.2.stretches itself lazily.3A walk around.is a feast for eyes.4The good weather and breathtaking scenery make.a worldclass resort.5It is a breathtaking and
2、glorious (光荣的).6What an attractive place!7It is a picturesque (优美的) and impressive.8From the view of.we can catch sight of.9.will be open to the public by.10.is under construction and will be completed before.满分佳作构建写 作 任 务 假如你今年暑假第一次去厦门旅行。请根据以下信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍其景点并谈谈你的感受。位置 位于福建省东南部鼓浪屿(最出名景点之一，每天有成千上万的游
3、客)曾厝垵(品尝各种美味小吃)景点厦门大学活动 捡贝壳、追海浪、游泳(厦门四面环海)参考词汇：曾厝垵 Zengcuoan 鼓浪屿 Gulangyu Island审 题 谋 篇 体裁 游记 话题 介绍厦门旅游时态 一般现在时和一般过去时 人称 第一人称结构第一部分：介绍游记的主题，即游览厦门。第二部分：介绍厦门游的过程及厦门的一些景点。第三部分：游览厦门的感受。遣 词 造 句 .对接单元词汇1for the first time 第一次2leave a deep impression 留下深刻的印象3lie in/be located in 位于4different kinds of delic
4、ious snacks 各种美味小吃5be surrounded by 被包围6pick up 捡起7chase 追逐8fascinating 迷人的.巧用单元句式语法(一)完成句子1这次旅行给我留下了深刻的印象。This journey left a deep impression on me2厦门位于福建省东南部。Xiamen lies in the southeast of Fujian Province3每天有成千上万的游客乘船去鼓浪屿。Thousands of tourists go to Gulangyu Island by ship every day.4有一个叫曾厝垵的村庄。T
5、here is a village called Zengcuoan.5在那里我们可以尝到各种美味的小吃。We can taste different kinds of delicious snacks there.6厦门大学是你必须要去的漂亮地方。Xiamen University is a beautiful place and you must visit it7参观完厦大后，你会发现上大学是一件极好的事情。After visiting Xiamen University，you can find that going to university is a wonderful thing
6、.8你可以去捡贝壳，去追海浪，去海里游泳。You can go to pick up shells，chase the waves and swim in the sea.(二)句式升级9用非限制性定语从句把句 4 和句 5 连接起来There is a village called Zengcuoan，where we can taste different kinds of delicious snacks.10用形式主语 it 转换句 7After visiting Xiamen University，you can find it is a wonderful thing to go
7、to university.妙 笔 成 篇 【参考范文】This summer I went to visit Xiamen for the first time.This journey left a deep impression on me.Xiamen lies in the southeast of Fujian Province，and Gulangyu Island is one of the most famous places in Xiamen. Thousands of tourists go to Gulangyu Island by ship every day.Th
8、ere is a village called Zengcuoan，where we can taste different kinds of delicious snacks.Xiamen University is a beautiful place which you must visit.After visiting it， you can find it is a wonderful thing to go to university. Xiamen is surrounded by the sea.You can go to pick up shells，chase the waves and swim in the sea.In short，what a fascinating city Xiamen is！
