1、英语书面表达模版（一）,宝应中学 张礼义,词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,1.覆盖了所有的要点2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑4. 语言得体,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,语言地道，规范,（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1、有一些人认为 2、另一些人认为 3、 我的看法,一 对比观点题型,70%的同学认为 1父母不应该陪读 2父母陪读让我们养成依赖的习惯，不利于我们将来自控能力的培养，不利于我们培养良好的学习习惯。 3父母陪读影响了他们的工作、学习和休息。,30%的同学认为： 1父母应该陪读 2父母陪读能使我
2、们腾出更多的专心学习，使我们身体更健康。 3父母陪读能帮助我们确立学习目标，督促我们完成学习任务，鼓励我们独立解决困难，培养我们养成良好的学习习惯。,Dear editor,Dear editor,It is becoming more and more popular recently that Im writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether A heated discussion was held about whether,many parents accompany theirchild
3、ren studying at school.,our parents should accompany us studyingat school.,our parents should accompanyus studying at school.,We do have different opinions on this matter. / There are two sides of opinions about it. Most of us (about 70%) think / hold the view that our parents should not accompany u
4、s studying at school since it makes us fall into the habit of dependence, so that we wont form the good habit of studying. Whats more, it is harmful for us to form the habit of controlling ourselves. At the same time / Moreover it affects our parents work, studies and rest.,While about 30% of my cla
5、ssmates dont agree. /think it necessary for our parents to accompany us studying at school. Accompanying us studying at school can let us have more time to spare for our studies. Besides, we shall be more healthy for their cooking. On the other hand our parents can help us set up our aim, urge us to
6、 finish our task, encourage us to overcome difficulties and get us into the good habit of studying.,While others think it necessary for our parents to accompany us studying at school in the following three reasons. Firstly, accompanying us studying at school can let us have more time to spare for ou
7、r studies. Secondly (besides), we shall be more healthy for their cooking. Thirdly (finally), our parents can help us set up our aim,换一种说法,From my point of view, I think it necessary for our parents to accompany us studying at school . The reason is that I can have more time for my study. As a matte
8、r of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the latter is surely a wise choice .,The topic of -（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason that-（支持A的理由一）Wh
9、at is more, -理由二). Moreover, -(理由三).,SUMMARY,While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),-（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),-(理由三).,From my point of view, I think -（我的观点）. The reason is that -(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some oth
10、er reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .,示范卷（四）：请参照模板重写,We do have different opinions on this matter. / There are two sides of opinions about it. Some of us think / hold the view that listening should not be cancelled since it is among the four basic skills, so t
11、hat we cannot ignore it. Whats more, listening is one of the important channels for us to get information from the outside world . At the same time / Moreover international cooperation is becoming more and more frequent, so it should be strengthened today.,While others of my classmates dont agree. T
12、hey think not everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future. Besides, listening test is unfair to the students in the areas where radio signals cannot be picked up effectively. On the other hand there is a big difference in teachers and equipment between the countryside and the city for
13、certain reasons.,From my point of view, I think it necessary to keep listening test . The reason is that I love English and I want to learn it well.,People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that _. In their point of view, on one hand， _. On the other hand,
14、_. Therefore, there is no doubt that _. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that _. It is not only because _, but also because _. The more _, the more _.,HAVE A TRY,学习英语要不要从儿童开始 一些人认为：1应该 2记忆力好，可以记住很多单词 3能为以后的英语学习打下坚实的基础 另一些人认为：1不应该 2 儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又要学英语，容易混淆 3会影响今后的汉语学习和英语学习,（2）给出一个观点，
15、要求考生反对这一观点或者提出自己的看法。你校正开展一场题为“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?” 的讨论。有人认为年老教师教学耐心讲解细致经验丰富 。而你却认为年轻教师好。,Opinions are divided on this question. Some students believe that they like elderly teachers teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and tha
16、t they tend to be patient and careful with explanations.,However, I prefer to be taught by young teachers. Firstly, we students have much in common with them. So they are our friends as well as our teachers. Secondly, they are more energetic and enthusiastic. Usually they can make their classes live
17、ly and interesting. Besides, they are more ready to accept or create new ideas, including teaching. Thirdly, most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach creatively and effectively.,Form what I have said, / In a word, I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.,二 解决方法题型,要求
18、考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 问题现状 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点),In recent days, we have to face the problem-A.The problem is becoming more and more serious. / The present situation is worrying. First, -(说明的现状)Second, -(举例进一步说明现状),The present situation is worrying. First, natural resources are becoming more and more scarce. Seco
19、nd, as some people are not aware of the importance of the environmental protection,the problems with it remain extremely serious to some degree. The gap between the rich and the poor has the tendency to become wider and wider.,Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope
20、with the situation. / To our great joy, many measures have been taken to solve the problems. For one thing, -(解决方法一). For another -(解决方法二). Finally, -(解决方法三).,To our great joy, many countries have taken action. /Luckily, many measures have been taken to solve the problems. On one hand, they have mad
21、e relevant laws and regulations and put large amounts of money to the environmental protection. On the other hand, popularized education as well as international cooperation is being carried out.,Personally, I believe that - (我的解决方法/ 看法). / Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting
22、 us because -(带来的好处) / if -.,这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测） 说明事物现状 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面） 你对现状（或前景）的看法,三 说明利弊题型,近期，中学聘请外教之风愈演愈烈，请你结合下表对其利弊发表自己的观点。,Nowadays many middle schools prefer to -. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First, -. Besides / Whats m
23、ore, -. Meanwhile, -.,Nowadays many middle schools prefer to employ foreign teachers. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First, schools will be better known. Besides / Whats more, its good for students to develop interest in English study as well as learn more about foreign cultures.
24、Meanwhile, their oral English will be improved a lot.,On the other hand,/ However, -. The most important thing is that -. As a result, -,On the other hand,/ However, some foreigners, though well paid, find it difficult to get used to the way of life in a foreign country and they sometimes worry abou
25、t their safety. The most important thing is that they are not quite familiar with the students. As a result, many students cant benefit from them.,From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of employing foreign teachers, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way can students learn English well.,
