1、书面表达突破(二)图画类图画类基础写作是以图画和文字相结合的方式呈现内容要点的,难度在于图画是形象语言,要转化为逻辑语言,考生需要仔细观察。虽然写作内容中的文字提示部分已经明确了要表达的内容要点,但比较笼统,要结合图画中的内容进一步细化,甚至补充内容要点,确定信息的主与次；同时还要注意语句之间的衔接和句式的多样化。因此,写作时要做到：1.仔细观察图画,弄清画面的含义,抓住画面的主体；2.根据画面内容,进行合理想像,使画面“动”起来,从而形成一个完整的小故事；3.认真安排内容,布局谋篇,要做到言之有序,抓住重点,突出中心,要叙述连贯,描写生动。原题再现请看下面的漫画,联系实际生活,以“Savin
2、g Water”为题写一篇短文,词数 100 左右。写作模板 学生习作As can be seen in the picture,图画内容The picture tells us 图片的大致意思The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with,揭示涵义/原因/结果 1.Second,揭示涵义/原因/结果 2.In my opinion/As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the p
3、roblem. First, we should 具体措施 1. Second, we must 具体措施2. Only in this way can we solve the problem of 图画内容As can be seen/As is described/As is shown in the picture, the drinking water is running without anyone using it. The picture tells us now many people pay no attention to saving water.The implied
4、 meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with, water is the source of life, without which there could be no life on the earth. Second, there is very limited available water resources on our planet, and excessive using of water can make the situation from bad to
5、 worse. And this social problem should arise the great concern of all in the world.In my opinion/As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. First, we should make all the people know the importance of water and the fact that water resources are limited. Second, we must pass s
6、ome laws to punish those who waste water. Only in this way can we solve the problem of waterwasting.名师点评本文采取三段论的方式：叙述图画,分析图画,提出建议,叙述简明扼要,分析切中要点,建议切实可行。文中用了 to begin with,second；first, second；in my opinion 等衔接语,使得文章非常连贯。此外,文章最后用了倒装结构,属较高级的句型,增添了文章的色彩。仿写训练假设你是李华,你的英国朋友 Tom 来信询问你们的学习情况。请你根据下图提供的信息,写一封回
7、信,谈谈自从你校学生开始尝试一种新的学习方法以来,你们学习情况的变化。注意：词数 100 左右。Dear Tom,It was great to hear from you again._All the best.Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Tom,It was great to hear from you again.There are many things going on in our school.In fact things have got much better since we started a different way of learning.In t
8、he past our teachers stood in front of the class talking all the time while we students listened,busy taking notes.After a tiring day at school,we always had a lot of homework to do.Sometimes we even worked late into the night.Now we are active in class.We often have discussions in pairs or in group
9、s.After class we enjoy all kinds of activities,such as going in for sports,doing experiments or surfing the Internet.We are extremely happy because of the changes in our studies.All the best.Yours,Li Hua补偿练习 1阅读理解(2010鞍山二次调研)“The worlds oceans are slowly getting more acidic,” say scientists.The rese
10、archers from California report that the change is taking place in response to higher levels of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere.The lowering of the waters pH value is not great at the moment but could cause a serious threat to current ocean life if it continues,they warn.Ken Caldeira and Michael Wic
11、kett,from the Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory,report their concerns in the journal Nature.Increasing use of oil fuels means that more carbon dioxide is going into the air,and most of it will eventually be absorbed by sea water.Once in the water,it reacts to form carbonic acid.Scientists belie
12、ve that the oceans have already become slightly more acidic over the last century.These researchers have tried to predict what will happen in the future by combining what we know about the history of the oceans with computer models of climate change.“This level of acidity will get much more extreme
13、in the future if we continue releasing CO2 into the atmosphere,” says Dr. Caldeira.“And we predict the amount of future acidity will exceed (超过) anything we have seen over the last several hundred million years,let alone perhaps after rare disastrous events such as asteroid (小行星) impacts.”However,it
14、 is not absolutely clear what that means for ocean life.Most organisms live near the surface,where the greatest pH change would be expected to occur,but deepocean life forms may be more sensitive to pH changes.Coral reefs and other organisms whose shells contain calcium carbonate (碳酸钙) may be partic
15、ularly affected if the waters acidity levels keep going up,the team predict.They could find it much more difficult to build these structures in water with a lower pH.In recent years some people have suggested storing carbon dioxide from power stations in the deep ocean as a way of dealing with globa
16、l warming.But Dr. Caldeira said that such a strategy should now be reconsidered.“Previously,most experts had looked at ocean absorption of carbon dioxide as a good thingbecause in releasing CO2 into the atmosphere we warm the planet,and when CO2 is absorbed by the ocean,it reduces the amount of gree
17、nhouse warming.”1The ocean is becoming more acidic due to_.Athe lower water pH valueBthe warming atmosphereCthe higher level of CO2 in the airDthe increasing use of oil fuels答案 C解析 细节理解题。从文章中的第一段可以找到答案。2According to Dr. Caldeira,_.Aocean absorption of carbon dioxide is a good thingBmore oil fuels wi
18、ll be used in the near futureCscientists may predict climate changes with computer modelsDthe future situation of the amount of acidity is extremely serious答案 D解析 综合信息处理题。综观 全文可知 D 项正确。3If the waters acidity level keeps rising,_.Aocean life whose structures contain calcium carbonate may be affectedB
19、the waters pH value will become higher and higherCorganisms living near the surface are more sensitive to pH changesDsome disastrous events will occur more often than before答案 A解析 细节理解题。由文章中第四段的倒数第二句可知答案。4Most experts once believed storing carbon dioxide in the ocean would reduce_.Athe CO 2 absorbed
20、 by the oceanBthe amount of greenhouse warmingCthe acidity of the oceanDthe gradual release of CO2答案 B解析 细节理解题。从最后一段的第一句可知答案。5The purpose of this passage is to_.Ashow people the findings of a research teamBinform people of how acid the ocean is nowCintroduce Dr. Caldeira and his teams researchDwarn
21、people of the higher level of CO2答案 D解析 综合全文信息,在介绍 Dr. Caldeira 和他的研究成员对 二氧化碳、 pH、温室效 应等的研究后,文章指出了目前和未来严峻的形势,目的是要引起人们的注意。补偿练习 2书面表达如果你爱他,你很快就会知道他的一切；如果你恨他,他的生活将不得安宁网络人肉搜索就是这样一个让人爱恨交织的东西,有正义的揭露,有极端的骚扰,有理智的分析、调查、追认,也有一拥而上的愤怒、宣泄、甚至辱骂。请就此现象写一篇英语短文发表你的看法。词数 100 左右。参考范文We are becoming familiar with human
22、flesh search engine which is used to gather a persons personal information in a short time.It is more and more widely used by a growing number of netizens to disclose some ugly phenomena,while some use it to disturb others private life,which results in a kind of Internet violence to some degree.Ther
23、e is no denying that human flesh search engine is just a tool,whether it is used to fight for justice or become violent just depends on ourselves.Therefore,it is not the fault of human flesh search engine but the users who use it to do something illegal.What is the most important is that we humans should use it positively and dont turn it into a tool of violence.
