1、中考英语二轮专题：书面表达常见错误分析(四) 母语干扰要点领悟许多同学在用英语写作时很容易受汉语的影响而写错句子，即写所谓的 Chinglish.这是书面表达中常见的错误之一。信息提示请你根据实际情况，以“My School Life”为题写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。习作实况My School Life Im a middle school student. Although our school is very usual （1） ， but （2） its beautiful in my heart. The school is covered with tall trees and
2、 beautiful flowers. The here （3） air is very fresh. In the morning， lots of schoolmates （4） early （5） go to school and do some exercises. Usually we have breakfast after our first class. All of the students take morning exercises on the playground after two classes. After that， someone （6） are readi
3、ng in the library， others are playing and talking on the playground. We have three classes in the afternoon and do some sports that we like after school and go home at about 6：00. Oh！ How colorful my school life is！精讲点拨（1） 作者显然想表达“学校很一般或普通” ，此处最好用 common 一词，而 usual 意思是“通常的” 。（2） 受汉语“虽然但是”的影响，作者将这一意思
4、直接译成英语“althoughbut”，而在英语同一句子中只用这两个词的其中之一表示汉语的“虽然但是” 。（3） here 是副词，用来修饰名词时应位于被修饰词之后。（4） schoolmate 指校友、同学，通常不包含自己在内，改为 students 好些，指全校学生。（5） “早早到校”的英语表达是 go to school early， 副词 early 应位于句末。（6）someone 意思是“某人” ，要改为 some students.精品范文My School Life Im a middle school student. Although our school is very
5、 common，its beautiful in my heart. The school is covered with tall trees and beautiful flowers. The air here is very fresh. In the morning，lots of students go to school early and do some exercises. Usually we have breakfast after our first class. All the students take morning exercises on the playground after two classes. After that，some students are reading in the library，others are playing and talking on the playground. We have three classes in the afternoon and do some sports that we like after school and go home at about 6：00. Oh！How colorful my school life is！
