1、建议信,假设你是某报社编辑,最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难,这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示,写一篇回给李华的建议信,帮他解决困难,促进学习。,第一步:审题 养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的,但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例,谈谈如何审题:,第一人称,一封信,对英语学习给出建议,说理的逻辑性,一般现在时,建议信,三段式: 第一段: 点明主题 第二段: 陈述事实,提出建议,给出理由(是什么,为什么,怎么样) 第三段:总结全文,表明希望,建议信重点,第二段: 说明建议的内容;(是什么) 提出具体建议的原因;(为什么) 指出采纳建议的益处。(怎么样
2、)注意事项:语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。,1. 开头常用句式 You have asked for my advice onand I will try to make some suggestions It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on,Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said+ 你碰到的问题. I think I can give you some useful suggestions. My suggesti
3、ons are as follows,2. 表达建议常用句式,It is important to,It (also) helps to,It should be a good idea toI think it would be more beneficial if you couldAs to I suggest that you should,You should/must Youd better change your former plan. Id like to suggest you make a new plan. If I were you, I would Id like
4、to suggest I strongly recommend You might as well ,3. 结尾常用句式,In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful,Closing sentences 结束语,4. At last, I h
5、ope I will be your best friends forever! Good luck to you! 5. Lets keep in touch. I do hope to hear good news from you.,表先后次序:首先first, to begin with, first of all, firstly, for one thing, in the first place,其次secondly, besides, whats more, in addition, for another thing, 最后at last, last but not leas
6、t, above all, finally ,eventually,主体部分注意衔接词使用:,表先后次序: 1.For one thing,For another thing, Finally 2.Firstly,secondly,eventually 3.to begin with, whats more, last but not least,适当运用模板,Dear Li Hua,Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said+ 你碰到的问题. I think I can g
7、ive you some useful suggestions. My suggestions are as followsFirstly, _,because_. Secondly, you should_, because_. Thirdly, youd better _.Only in this way can you _.Whats more,_.I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours,xxx,假设你是某报社编辑,最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己是高一的学生,在学习英语的过程中遇到了
8、困难,这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示,写一篇回给李华的建议信,帮他解决困难,促进学习。,Dear Li Hua,Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said you have some difficulties in learning English. I think I can give you some useful suggestions. My suggestions are as follows. Firstly, you should listen to the te
9、achers carefully in the class. Secondly, the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. Thirdly, you can speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. Whats more, the most important advice is reading Englis
10、h books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours,xxx,常用句型,对于某人来说,做某事很 It is adj /adv (for sb to do sth) 学英语对于我们来说不简单 It is not easy for us to learn English 2.不明白/想知道 I wonder +疑问词/if 我想知道怎么能减肥 I wonder how to lose weight.,3.做某事的最好的办法就是 T
11、he best way to do sth is to do There is no better way to do sth than to do sth 学好英语的最佳途径就是阅读浅显的英语书籍 The best way to learn English well is to read many easy English book. There is no better way to learn English than to read many easy English book.,4.学会用定语从句拓展句意 教材当中有许多好看的图片,这些图片能够帮助我们更好的理解英语。There ar
12、e many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. 一些教材当中有些生词或表达、表情(expressions),这些对于我们来说很难。 Some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us.,5.用举例子的方式拓宽句意 这些书有许多优点,其中之一就是我们可以发现大量的话题,比如说科学,文化和历史。 These books have many advantages, one
13、of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history.,6.学会用not only but also表示并列含义亲爱的朋友们,去参加课外活动吧,这不但会使你的校园生活变得丰富多彩,还会改善你的学习。 Dear friends, please take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school like colorful, but also improve your learning.
14、,假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。 要点: 参加中文学习班; 看中文书刊、电视; 学唱中文歌曲; 交中国朋友。 注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;开头语已给出。 Dear Peter,Im glad to hear that you can ask for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ _ Best wishes, Li Hua,Homework:,Dear Peter,Im sorry to hear that you have some problems on how to le
15、arn Chinese well. I think I can give you some useful suggestions. My suggestions are as follows. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, because youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your classmates. Second, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers in Chines
16、e. Third, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing it, youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes. yours, Li Hua,