1、How to write a persuasive letter? 如何写好说服性信函？,Dear Bob,Im sorry to learn that you like computer games very much and often stay up late playing them. Im writing to persuade you to change this habit. It is well-known that the computer games a very exciting. However, they can greatly influence both of y
2、our health and studies if you spent too much time on them. First, it is bad for your health, especially your eyes. Second, if it takes too much time of your free time, you have no time to do something important like reading. Third, if you often stay up late, you will feel tired the following day and
3、 wont be able to do well at school. So I hope you understand the bad effects of playing computer games and stop it. Yours,Li Hua,（阐述理由）,（引出话题，表明目的）,（总结全文，表达祝愿）,1. 2. 3.,文体,时态,人称,信件,一般现在时,The first person （第一人称） The second person（第二人称）,Step 1 审题的步骤:,好文章的评分标准,覆盖所有要点 语言结构和选词恰当丰富 有效使用连接词，层次清楚,Dear Bob,I
4、m sorry to learn that you like computer games very much and often stay up late playing them. Im writing to persuade you to change this habit. It is well known that the computer games a very exciting However, they can greatly influence both of your health and studies if you spent too much time on the
5、m. First, it is bad for your health especially your eyes. Second, if it takes too much time of your free time you have no time to do something important like reading. Third, if you often stay up late you will feel tired the following day and wont be able to do well at school. So I hope you understan
6、d the bad effects of playing computer games and stop it. Yours,Li Hua,（阐述理由）,（引出话题，表明目的）,（总结全文，表达祝愿）,正文语言欠丰富， 表达不够出彩,（引出话题，表明目的）,（总结全文，表达祝愿）,Yours, Li Hua,Dear Bob,Im sorry to learn that you are so crazy about computer games and that you often stay up late playing them Im writing to persuade you to
7、quit. There is no denying that computer games are very exciting. However, they can have a great influence on both your health and studies if you are addicted to them. First, it is harmful to your health, especially your eyes. Second, it is a waste of time because you have much more important things
8、to do, such as reading. Third, if you dont get a good nights rest, you will feel tired the following day and wont be able to focus on your studies Therefore, I hope you understand the harmful effect of playing computer games and get rid of the habits.,It is your turn now,Have a discussion with your
9、teammates,假设你是李华,你的外籍朋友Jack不久前选修了他们学校的汉语课程 ,由于感觉学习起来困难很大,他打算放弃请你给他写一封信，劝他坚持学习,Im sorry to learn that you want to give up the Chinese course. Im writing to try to persuade you to carry on with it. Here are the reasons.To begin with, it is normal for you to have difficulty learning a foreign language
10、at first, especially Chinese. But as the old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” So dont lose heart. In addition, learning Chinese well will be of great importance and use for you. Not only will it help you learn more about Chinese history and culture, but also allow you to communi
11、cate with Chinese people better. Besides, as a native speaker of Chinese, Im more than willing to help you with it.All in all, if youre determined to learn Chinese well, Im sure you will have a good command of it one day. I hope you can stick to Chinese learning.,Dear Jack,Im sorry to learn that you
12、 want to give up the Chinese course. Im writing to try to persuade you to go on with it. Here are the reasons.To begin with, it is normal for you to have difficulty learning a foreign language at first, especially Chinese. So dont lose heart. In addition, I know you like China very much and want to
13、visit it some day. Learning Chinese well will be very important and useful for you. Not only will it help you learn more about Chinese history and culture, but also allow you to communicate with Chinese people better. Besides, as a native speaker of Chinese, Im more than willing to help you with it.All in all, I hope you wont give up, as I believe you can make it in the end. Best wishes,Li Hua,
