1、第一讲 应用文写作,李仕才,邀请信,佳句积累,1.I was wondering if you could do us the favor to help us solve this problem.不知你能否帮我们解决这个问题。 2.Im writing to ask for your understanding and look forward to having good cooperation with you.我写信请求您的理解并希望能和您良好合作。 3.I would be forever grateful if you could send me information conc
2、erning the activity.如果你能将关于该项活动的有关信息发给我,我将不胜感激。,4.I would like to know whether you can provide me with information regarding the activity.我想知道你是否能提供给我关于该项活动的有关信息。 5.Would you please ring me up to let me know if you can come to the party?请打电话来告诉我你能否来参加聚会,好吗? 6.We would be looking forward to your comi
3、ng with great pleasure.我们高兴地期待着你的到来。 7.We sincerely hope that you can make it.我们真诚地希望你能参加。 8.We would be honored to have you there with us.如果您能参加,我们将不胜荣幸。,Dear _(收信人), I will be holding _(某项活动) _(地点) _(时间) in order to _(目的或原因).As you are a close friend of our family,my parents and I would very much
4、like you to join us in _(某项活动) and share our joy. The occasion will start at _(具体时间),and activities include _,_ and _(某项活动的具体内容).In addition,there will be _(其他注意事项).I am sure you will have a good time. We will feel much honored if you could come. Yours lovely, _(写信人),写作模板,开头礼貌而友好地就某项活动对收信人发出邀请。 主体写明
5、邀请对方参加活动的时间、地点、内容以及其他注意事项。 结尾期待对方接受邀请。,(2017浙江6月高考)假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.参加者;2.时间、地点;3.活动:登山、野餐等。 注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,典例展示,Dear Chris, How are you doing? I have been organizing a one-day summer camp in Green Hill this Saturday.,As planned,we will leave by bus at 7
6、am at the school gate.About 2 hours will be spent climbing the mountain.After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.Up till now,3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team.I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will hav
7、e a great time. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua,精美词汇 1.organize v.组织 2.spend time doing.花费时间做某事 3.have a picnic野餐 4.up till now到现在为止 5.relax v.放松 6.have a great time玩得痛快,出彩句式 1.as planned按照计划 2.助动词do强调谓语动词 3.because引导原因状语从句 4.不定式作后置定语,实战演练,【参考范文】 Dear Bruce, I am writing to invite
8、 you to give our class a lecture on Western culture. We all show great interest in your lessons and are particularly curious about the customs and traditions in your country.They are so mysterious and fantastic.Therefore,we would appreciate it if you could deliver a lecture on them,especially someth
9、ing related to your traditional festivals.The time scheduled for the lecture is 4 pm5 pm next Wednesday. I am looking forward to receiving your early reply. Yours, Li Hua,咨询信,佳句积累,1.I am wondering if you have made a definite plan for the coming summer holiday.我想知道你是否已为即将到来的暑假制订了明确的计划。 2.Knowing tabl
10、e manners can help you make a good impression on others.了解餐桌礼仪可有助于给他人留下好的印象。 3.Realizing the benefits and importance of this activity, I have a strong desire to participate in it.意识到本次活动的益处和重要性,我强烈希望参与其中。,4.Some people are worried that our traditional culture will be in danger of being lost.有些人担心我们的
11、传统文化会面临失去的危险。 5.Only by reading widely can we gain more knowledge and broaden our horizons.只有博览群书我们才能增长知识开拓视野。 6.We should employ every possible opportunity to acquire more useful knowledge and get fully developed.我们应利用一切可以利用的机遇获取更多的知识并得到全面的发展。,7.I will make a 10day tour of America after my graduati
12、on from senior high school this summer,which will be a good chance for me to experience American culture and practice my oral English.今年夏天高中毕业后,我将去美国进行为期10天的观光旅游,这将是一次体验美国文化、练习英语口语的好机会。 8.Ive been longing to go to America,mainly for two reasons.One is that I can experience American culture,which is
13、believed to be the most diverse in the world.The other is that I can broaden my horizons in this developed country.我一直盼望去美国,主要有两个原因。其一是我能够体验美国文化,它被认为是世界上最多样化的。其二是我能够在这个发达国家开拓视野。,Dear _(收信人), I am _(自我介绍).I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding _(要询问的内容)
14、. First of all,_(第一个问题)? Secondly,_(第二个问题)? Thirdly,_(第三个问题)? I would also like to inquire _(其他问题). I will appreciate it very much if you can give me a reply. Yours sincerely, _(写信人),写作模板,开头简要介绍自己,表明写作目的,遵守礼貌原则,只问相关信息。 主体询问具体问题,提供背景材料及询问原因,强调所需信息重要性,注意疑问句式。 结尾表示谢意,希望得到对方帮助和合作,结尾彬彬有礼,表示诚挚谢意。,(2016浙江1
15、0月高考) 假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生(exchange student)去加拿大一所高中学习,住在Lynn家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件,内容包括: 1.介绍自己;2.告知到达时间;3.询问应做何准备。 注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,典例展示,Dear Lynn, Im Li Hua,an exchange student from China.Im pleased to know that Ill be staying with your family in the next few months while Im studying at the loc
16、al high school.Thank you for having me!,I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place late that afternoon.I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada. Looking forward to seeing you!Best wishes, Li Hua,精美词汇 1.pleased adj.高兴的
17、 2.stay with ones family住在家里 3.get to/arrive in到达 4.get oneself better prepared for使自己为做好充分的准备 出彩句式 1.Im pleased to know that.知道我很高兴 2.I wonder if you could.不知道你能不能 3.so that.引导目的状语从句,实战演练,【参考范文】 Dear Tom, I am Li Hua.I am writing to tell you that I am now focusing my attention on American festivals
18、. When it comes to American festivals,what attracts me most is Thanksgiving Day.Now I want to know more about it and I would appreciate it greatly if you could tell me something about it.My questions are as follows: How did it come into being? How and when do people celebrate it? Whats its significa
19、nce? I hope you can give me assistance in this problem and thank you in advance. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua,建议信,佳句积累,1.You might as well stay with me while you are here then.你来时不妨跟我住在一起。 2.From my point of view,it is more advisable to take a part-time job in your situation.在我看来,就你目前的情况,找个兼职工作更可取一些。
20、3.My advice is that you go and see the doctor right away.我建议你马上去看医生。 4.It seems that taking a part-time job would make sense in your situation.就你目前的情况,似乎找个兼职工作会有帮助。,5.If I were you,I would try another method.如果我是你,我会尝试另一种办法。 6.It seems to me that it would be more beneficial if you could take an acti
21、ve part in more school activities.我想,如果你能积极地多参加一些学校活动,可能会更好。 7.In my personal opinion,it would be wise of you to take the following action.在下认为,如果你能采取以下措施,将是一种明智的选择。 8.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你实用/有用/有帮助。,Dear _(收信人), Yo
22、u have asked me for my advice with regard to _(事由),and I will try to make some suggestions here. In my opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions.First,it is important to _(第1条建议)._(第1条建议的理由).Then,it also helps if you _(第2条建议)._(第2条建议的理由).Besides,it should be a good idea to _(第3条建议).Im
23、sure that _(第3条建议的理由). I hope you will find these proposals useful,and.Good luck with your _(祝愿). Yours sincerely, _(写信人),写作模板,开头简要陈述事由。如果写给某个组织或机构,要进行简单的自我介绍,注意语气要诚恳,有礼貌。 主体提出具体建议并说明理由。 结尾希望建议得到采纳并祝愿。,(2017北京高考改编)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括: 1.你建议的线路;
24、2.你的理由;3.你的祝愿。 注意:1.词数80左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,典例展示,Dear Jim, Im happy to receive your letter and know youre coming to China.,Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai,both are highly recommended.Personally,I prefer the tour along the Yangtze,the longest river and one of the mother rivers o
25、f Chinese civilization,from which you can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.Moreover,the scenery along the river is amazing,with many wellknown sightseeing spots.Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice. Hope youll have a good time in China. Yours,
26、 Li Hua,精美词汇 1.recommend v.推荐 2.personally adv.就个人而言 3.prefer v.更喜欢 4.moreover adv.此外 5.Chinese civilization 中国文明 6.have a good time过得愉快,出彩句式 1.be happy to do.很高兴做某事 2.from which引导的非限制性定语从句 3.Thats why.那就是的原因 4.省略that的宾语从句,实战演练,(2018浙江九校模拟) 假如你是Mary,你的好友陈洁最近因为考试频率过高,课业繁重,感到身体不适,严重影响了学习。因此,她发e-mail给你
27、,寻求你的建议和帮助。请你根据以下要点提示予以回复。 内容要点:1.健康合理的饮食;2.有规律且适度的运动;3 注意:1.词数80左右;2.开头和结尾部分已经写好,不计入总词数;3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,【参考范文】 Dear Chen Jie, I feel so sorry to hear that you are feeling bad these days. In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy and keep attentive in class.The following are my suggestions.
28、Healthy eating habits are very important.So youd better have your meals on time and keep a balanced diet.Then,taking morning exercise every day is a nice choice,which helps to build up your body.You can do some sports to refresh yourself if weather permits.Finally,dont stay up too late; otherwise yo
29、ull suffer a lot every night. I believe it would be beneficial if you could follow my suggestions.Hope youll feel better soon. Yours sincerely, Mary,申请信,佳句积累,1.My friend Li Hua,aged 26,graduated from Beijing University four years ago,and has just received his doctors degree. 我的朋友李华,今年26岁,四年前从北京大学毕业,
30、现在又刚刚拿到了他的博士学位。 2.He does very well in science,and is good at arts as well./Not only does he do well in science,but he is also good at arts.他理科学得很好,文科也很擅长。 3.I enjoy drawing cartoons,and once won first place in a national cartoon competition.我喜欢画漫画,并且曾经在一次全国漫画比赛中得了第一名。,4.I am writing in response to
31、your advertisement for a secretary.我看到了贵公司的招聘秘书的广告,于是写信申请。 5.Your advertised position of sales manager interests me.我对你们招聘销售经理的广告很感兴趣。 6.I think I am the right person for the job you advertised.我认为我是你们招聘职位的最佳人选。 7.I am glad that I feel quite qualified for the position you advertised.对于你们在广告中所招聘的职务我很
32、高兴,感到自己有资格申请。 8.I am writing this letter to recommend myself/my friend Li Hua as a qualified candidate for the job of secretary.我认为我/我朋友李华是秘书工作的合格人选,所以我写信推荐自己/我朋友李华。,Dear _(收信人), I learned from the _(报纸等信息来源) that _(发布信息的单位名) needs a _(申请的具体内容,如职位).Im really interested in _(简单表达自己对申请内容的渴望). _(简单的个人介
33、绍以及基本的申请条件).Not only do I have the qualifications for this job,but I have the right personality for _(申请的内容).On the one hand,_(第一个原因).On the other (hand),_(另一个原因).Should you give me an opportunity of a personal interview,I would be most grateful.If you need to know more about me,please contact me at
34、 any time at _(电话号码).,写作模板,Thank you for considering my application,and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, _(写信人),开头写信目的(申请原因),信息来源,对所申请工作等的认识,自己的打算。 主体具备条件:着重介绍自己的背景(受教育情况、工作经历、兴趣爱好、特长等);表达自己的愿望(希望得到面试机会等)。 结尾表示谢意,请求给予机会,期望得到回复。,假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按
35、要求用英语给组委会写一封80词左右的申请信。内容应包括: 1.个人情况:年龄、性别、学历;2.个人条件:英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人;3.承诺:提供最佳服务。,典例展示,Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Li Hua.I would like to be one of the volunteers working for the Winter Asian Games. I am a boy/girl of 16 and I am studying at high school now.I am good at English and I like sports.Mo
36、reover,I get along with others easily,ready to give help whenever it is needed.My promise is to offer the best service to the people at the Games. I would appreciate it if you could consider my request,and Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua,精美词汇 1.work for为而工作 2.get alo
37、ng with与相处 3.(be)ready to give help乐于助人 4.offer sth.to sb.向某人提供某物 5.consider ones request考虑某人的要求 出彩句式 1.whenever it is needed只要需要 2.My promise is to do.我的承诺是 3.I would appreciate it if.如果我将不胜感激,实战演练,【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, Im Li Hua,a middle school student from China.I read about your announcement
38、 of the 12th International Future Business Leader Summit posted on the Internet.Im writing to apply for an opportunity to join in it. Ten years of English learning enables me to have a good command of this language.By joining in it,I can deepen my understanding of business,improve my leadership and
39、communicate with students from other countries as well.I do hope to be admitted to your summit. I am looking forward to your reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua,感谢信,佳句积累,1.Its very kind/nice of you to help me with my English.多谢你帮我学英语。 2.I am writing to express my thanks for your help while I was in Engla
40、nd.我写这封信是为了表达我对你的感谢,谢谢你在我在英国期间对我的帮助。 3.I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your selfless help.在信中我要为你对我的无私的帮助表达我真挚的谢意。 4.Thank you so much for the gift you sent me.Its one of the most wonderful gifts Ive ever got.非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物,这是我收到的最好礼物之一。,5.On behalf of my school,I
41、would like to express our great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.我谨代表我的学校感谢您给予我们的及时帮助和支持。 6.I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation for your generous help.其实,对你的慷慨帮助岂是用“谢谢”二字可以表达的。 7.It was kind and generous of you to do this for me,and I appreciate i
42、t more than I can say.你对我如此慷慨,我真是感激不尽。 8.Id like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude to you for your generous help,without which I wouldnt make such rapid progress.我想借此机会向你表达我对你慷慨帮助的感激之情,没有你的帮助,我不会取得如此快的进步。,Dear _(收信人), I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for _(感谢的原因1).I would
43、also like to thank you for your _(感谢的原因2). During _,I _(具体描述接受帮助的经历).If it had not been for your assistance in _(对方给予的具体帮助),I fear that I would have been _(没有对方帮助的后果). Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Best wishes! Yours lovely, _(写信人),写作模板,开头表明写作意图,明确地对收信人提供的帮助或赠送的礼物等表示谢意。 主体详述接受
44、帮助的具体事例,说明该帮助所起的作用;或表达对所收礼物等的喜爱、日后如何使用及收藏等。 结尾再次表达诚挚的谢意,并表达祝愿。,假设你是中学生李华,你校外教 Martin 最近退休了。请你代表全校学生根据以下要点,给他写一封感谢信: 1.感谢他对学生的付出;2.回忆师生共度的快乐时光;3.祝福他退休生活愉快。 注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。,典例展示,Dear Martin, Ive been missing you so much since you retired.On behalf of all my schoolmates,Im writing to expr
45、ess our deepest gratitude for your devotion to the students. The memories are still fresh.So inspiring and humorous were your classes that we were able to learn English with interest.Actually,not only did we learn the language but also our critical thinking skills and creativity developed in your cl
46、ass.We do appreciate it! As your students,we all wish you happiness and health in the years to come! Yours, Li Hua,精美词汇 1.gratitude n.感激,感谢 2.devotion n.奉献,献身 3.inspiring adj.鼓舞人的 4.creativity n.创造力 5.on behalf of代表 6.with interest有兴趣地 7.critical thinking批判性思维,出彩句式 1.so.that.引导结果状语从句,且倒装。 2.not only
47、.but also.引导并列结构,且倒装。 3.助动词do强调谓语动词。,实战演练,【参考范文】 Dear Kelly, Im writing to express our sincere gratitude for the warm help during my stay in your country. During the Cultural Exchange Week,I visited the city museum and some places of interest,which made me have a better understanding of the English
48、society,culture and history.Whats more,Ill never forget the days we spent together.Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offered me as a gift.I will treasure and make full use of it. Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Yours, Li Hua,道歉信,佳句积累,1.I apologize most sincerely for what I said that day. I didnt mean to hurt you.我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。 2.I am truly sorry to have done you wrong.很抱歉,我冤枉了你。 3.Please forgive/excuse me for not being able to inform you.请原谅我没能及时通知你。 4.I owe you an apology for being unable to help you.我没能帮助你,应该向你道歉。,